#3 - Char Kadam: IshRa FF (Note on 24, Epiogue on 26) - Page 16

Created

Last reply

Replies

240

Views

34.1k

Users

57

Likes

641

Frequent Posters

shravani_2311 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 10 years ago
why u eneded this...
why cant write mre to this stry...

bt i love the way u took author into the stry...

the ishu xpresed her wish to b with him nd mak love with him...

her dialouges was heart touching...

raman's way of hearing those wrds frm his wife and his romntic antics...just loved it...

prfct stry...

bt iam sad...

gve epilouge asap...
divazfankau thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
Beautiful update
ishra romance bhi kuch alag hi tha
I just loved
Prayosha.DivAn thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
Awww...So Nice Update...67 & 68 both...

Sorry 67 ki comment miss ho gai...

Wow...Beautiful story...& yeh Rain meri request par add kiya...thank you so much...

Maine IshRa ka confession rain me hi imagine kiya tha...aap ne wo wish bhi puri kar di...

THANK YOU


Oh Last up date...but Longest update ...
Aap bhi aa gai ...IshRa ki conversation me...

Ek sachchi baat kahu...

Aaj tak maine ...IF par hajaro story Padhi hongi...IshRa ki...but CHAAR KADAM
jaisi koi nahi...


Sach me dhamake daar End hai...

Aap ko bhi END likhne ka mann nahi hua na...mera bhi nahi ho raha tha...

Kya kare...aap ki bhi MAJBURI hai...hai naa...

IF par jaldi waapas aana...

We will MISS you a lot

Waiting for Epilogue...iss me Ruhi honi chahiye... kyonki ...IshRa ki Rooh... Ruhi ke bina ...IshRa ki KAHAANI adhuri hai...& Adhuri Kahaani hume Pasand nahi...

1) IshRa ke 1st CHAR KADAM - Raman & Uski fiance Ishita/Ajnabi ki Anamika ke Char Kadam ( Raman Ishita ko Date par le gaya wo Char Kadam )

2) IshRa ke 2nd Char Kadam - Raman & Uski wife Ishita Raman Kumar Bhalla ke Char Kadam ( Ishita Raman ko Date par le gai wo Char Kadam )

3) Is
hRa ke 3rd Char Kadam - Raman & Ishita Soulmate ke Char Kadam ( 1st night ke baad ke Char Kadam )

4) IshRa ke 4th Char Kadam - Raman Ishita & Unki little Angel Ruhi ke nanhe nanhe Kadmo ke saath Char Kadam ( Jo Aap Epilogue me dikhayegi wo Char Kadam)


Inn me se mere favourite Char Kadam honge...

IshRa ki COMPLETE Family ke 4th wale Char Kadam...
I hope...aap dikhyengi...



Update soon...
Edited by prayosha - 10 years ago
Impossible.Girl thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 10 years ago
Aaj aasu bahenge Non-stop 😭
char Kadam khatam jo hogayi hai

I enjoyed the last update a lot
IshRa cute antics 😳
and upar se author's interference 😆
Enjoyed it throughly
We will miss you
Come back jaldi and start a new story same this way😃

ho sake toh give us an epilogue for this and bring hamara Ru baccha in that
cuz IshRaRu makes a perfect family nd a perfect ending 😉
ishra7 thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
Wonderful,awesome,lovely,beautifully written it was indeed fabulous story...really enjoyed chaar kadam...ishita was really bold which came as a shock for Raman...their walk or u can say another chaar kadam at the end was lovely 😊 😊 not getting words to describe more for this ...but I truly enjoyed this...do write more and more stories dear...happy vacation manvir...enjoy to the fullest
Nupur... thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Explorer Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
Ayyo amma!!!!!chaar kadam completed😭
Hawww...will b missing it badly
Please gv d epilogue soon...cmng to d part it was awesome as always
.Harshita. thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 10 years ago
At loss of words...
Dunno wat to say or write...😭
Superbb part but alas! It was last...😭
sukanksha thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
Arre yaar! Banda sunne ko hi tayyar nahi hai! Ab mujhe hi kuch karna padega!-- chal beti ban bold kumari.

Aaj meri mulaqath Ishita Raman Bhalla se kara do"--- aww I love it.

U cracked me up when OUR FAVOURITE SEGMENT was going to start I was constantly laughing.

Is kahani ka anth ho sakti hai,
par ye CHAR KADAM to ab CHAR KANDHON par hi khatm hogi!-- just this one line gave me Goosebumps.

So this was it. I am sad. Q end Hua. I know perfectly end tha. I know that philosophy too. Every good thing came to an end.
But still I don't want it to end. It became a habit. U know I was more interested in reading CK's chapter then watching show. :'(
I will miss it and u alot.

Enjoy your vacation.
Come soon
Write soon
:-* **
asma18 thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
Superb update..Dii. ..
Khushi hai ki ISHRA ab hamesha sath
rahe ge. ... 😊
par iss k sath hi. .chaar kadam complete hogaye
hai. ..iss ka bahut dukh hai ..hayyy jis ka intezar kiya karte the. ...
😭 ..
aaj woh chaar kadam complete hogaye.
.jitne bhi stories padhi hai IF par ye story sab se
special hai. ..main iss beautiful chaar kadam ko. .
bar bar padh na chahungi. ..
...
...Dii, jab aap ne iss kahani ko start kiya tha uss waqt
maine nahin pada tha. .par jab se iss kahani se
jodi...I'm happy k main iss kahani ko padh payi. ..
...iss kahani ka start unique tha aur E.N.D...bhi unique hai ..
sab se alag ab se juda. .
Bahut yaad aaye ge ..ye .chaar kadam. ...

Plzz jald epilogue di jiye. ...
hamari choto RUH. ...k bina ISHRA k chaar kadam incomplete
hai. ...story toh tab complete hogi. .ISHRARUH ek honge .

Aur aap apna vacation achche se apne family k sath
enjoy ki jiye. ...aur jald wapas aaye hum aap ko bahut miss
karenge. ...and ,
...Thankkk youuu sooo much Dii,
...Itni beautifulll ,unique story k liye. ...


...
maanvir thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 10 years ago
Hi my dear partners in Char Kadam!
5 months and 10 days ago, 3rd Jan 2015, I started a journey owing to my obsession for a song Char Kadam, a couple IshRa and a forum YHM.


When I started the journey, I knew I could not walk alone...
I needed partners...
But I did not know many in the forum and most did not know me...

So I made a silent request
Bin pooche mera naam aur patha
Rasmon ko rakh kar pare
Char kadam bas char kadam
Chal do na sath mere


Bin kuch kahe
Bin kuch sune
Hathon me hath liye
Char kadam bas char kadam
Chal do na sath mere


In few seconds, there were numerous likes.
As minutes ticked by, comments came flowing in.
And within hours the number of friends in my buddy list doubled.


It was totally unexpected!
The response I received inspired me to write another update and then the next and more.


Initially I had planned it as a Four Shot.
A simple usual story inspired by the lyrics was the main plot.
A girl, who apparently hates strangers, is almost engaged to one and meets another. Forced to spend time with a stranger and falls for him at the end of it, eventually to know that he is the one whom she is getting married too.


Shocked? Surprised?
Yes this was the plot on my mind when I started writing...


Then looking at the comments and the amazing response, I decided to prolong the story.
Trust me Raman was Ajnabi for me until Part 30.
I had even drafted parts 30 to 35 with the big revelation and part 35 being the last part.
When I posted Part 30, the scenario was obvious and everyone had guessed it was Raman with PLASTIC SURGERY😛

Then one straight and crisp comment of Wings-Of-Fire aka Roshnee got me thinking. I realised I could not give such a beautiful story, that gave me recognition as a writer with unique concepts, a totally illogical climax.
Honestlt, I had sleepless nights thinking how I could change the story line without meddling with what was already written.

Somehow I came up with a scenario where Raman meets Ajnabi in a writers conference and that being the reason for his guilt.
I was too lazy to re-write all the 5 parts I had written already so I created scenarios where similar things happened with Raman and Ajnabi at the same time.
I was not very confident about this change but anyhow posted it but exactly this change was the turning point and if I am not wrong most successful part.
@Roshnee this is why I call u my guiding light! Thank you.


Thank you all for the appreciation and the support throughout this journey. I can't help but add in the lyrics of the same song how u ppl supported me throught when I was sick or got busy or was not able to keep up the promise of updating regularly
Raahon me tujhko jo dhoop sataye
Chaanv bichadenge hum
Andhere daraye to jaakar falak pe
Chand saja denge hum
Chaaye udaasi lateefein sunakr
Tujhko hasayenge hum
Hasthe hasaate yunhi gungunate
Chal denge char kadam


I am very poor at saying thank u bt whenever I do it comes from the bottom of my heart.
When I say that I can't thank u all enough I literally mean it.


We had begun our journey deciding to walk Char Kadam, now I see that u ppl want to walk more. Seems like u r saying
Tumsa mile jo koi rehguzar
Duniya se koun dare
Char kadam kya sari umar
Chal dungi sath tere


I too don't want this journey to end

Did I just say that!?

Edited by maanvir - 10 years ago

Related Topics

Ye Hai Mohabbatein thumbnail

Posted by: ChanChanMan ¡ 5 years ago

I dare you to post a thing about anyone other than DivAn.

Expand ▼
Ye Hai Mohabbatein thumbnail

Posted by: Devanshi14 ¡ 1 years ago

Chapter # 01 Title: “Pehli Baar Ishq Hua” Raman and Ishita had been married for months now—contractually, yes—but slowly, silently, love had...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".