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Neetu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: RSlovesJA
nice update... i think because of shubh he is feeling insecure nd jealous... but the problem is he is hurting her nd himself... continue soon

thanks a lot di...
He is damn insecure

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Neetu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#62

Originally posted by: cuty1997
superb update monu
update soon

thankew krina di

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Neetu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#63

Originally posted by: Sweet_sonai
nice chapter monu :))
continue soon!!

thankew sona di

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Neetu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#64

Originally posted by: Sweet_sonai
Congo on new thread!!!!
may you have many many in the future :D

thanks again sona di

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Cattywrites

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Posted: 10 years ago

#65

update soon 😊and a long chapter pls..🤔

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Neetu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#66

Originally posted by: swriter

How sweet of you but where is my today update plz tell me..

updating darloo

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Neetu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#67

Originally posted by: sharmacatty
update soon 😊and a long chapter pls..🤔

hi di
will try

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Neetu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#68

Originally posted by: meeramiss18
Awesome neetu dear
continue soon😛

thankew dearie

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Neetu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#69

...Chapter - 30...

But jalal got imbalanced and fell from the stairs...
In the process badly injuring his head and hand... Shubh and ruqu were shocked with the turn of events... Immediately ambulance was called and jalal was taken to the hospital... Ruqu escorted him in ambulance while shubh stayed back...
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Persistent ringing of doorbell broke her beauty sleep... Jodha realized that while crying she slept... She rubbed her eyes and adjusted her clothes... Open the door expecting jalal to be there but her all hopes fall apart and fear gripped her heart by seeing shubh at the odd hour of night... She immediately tried to close the door but shubh entered the house... "hey jodha..." but jodha descends back while blabbering "don't...don't touch me...leave me... Don't touch me..." shubh felt ashamed of himself, so he tried to pacify his crime... "jodha m so sorry for that behavior, i never meant to hurt you... M really sorry..." jodha listened it but now also she is afraid of him... He tried to go near her "Dekho... dur se baat kro tum..." she yelled, "ok...ok fine, me toh bas tumhe btane aaya tha ki jalal got injured and hospitalized" jodha got freezes at her spot...
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As soon as the car got halted at hospital, jodha almost jumped out and headed to reception... "excuse me... jalal mohammad" she asked... receptionist immediately replied "mam room no. 304... here go straight and right then second room..." but jodha already left at a jet speed... she anyhow reached to the room, and opened it with a jerk... both pairs of eyes shifted towards her... doctor looked at jalal who had open his eyes just now with the sound... "miss..." doctor can't complete his sentence , in mid a voice a interrupted "my wife..." this is enough for doctor to understand the situation... "Mrs. mohammad..." doctor called jodha, her big beautiful eyes which are red and swollen now got shifted towards doctor... "don't worry, its just small injuries... the head injury is a little deep but it will be cured, some stiches will be required but he is adamant to not to put needle..." she again looked at him... he made a puppy face... "uff... his mood swings..." jodha thought... "doctor please bring requiered things i'll see how he will not let you do it..." and the doctor left smiling...
jalal looked jodha with an irritated face "arrrgghhh JO i hate that needle... it hurts..." he chided making faces... jodha got astonished seeing the childish act of her husband and for the very first time he called her jo she felt elated... she walked upto him, he tried to wipe her tears but "ouch..." he showed him his bandaged hands... she chuckled ad mist tears and wiped them by own and his too... yes tears were in his eyes not of pain but of happiness of the care and love he is being showered... "jo..." jalal want to open up his heart to her... but
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now no update for 2 days😃😃😃

Edited by Monucute - 10 years ago