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No words at all in ur praise can do justice today deeps ...ur vision has given new life to all those 5 dead babies of khushi...i can feel them shininng bright in the sky with having smiles on their faces...i am sure they going to sleep peacefully tonight under the blankets of clouds...its the justice day...it is in true sense justice to a poor mother crying empty womb and all those sad but still hopeful eyes of girls who were waiting for this day ...i am sure if on earth these all eyes shedding happy tears for that extremely in pain mother who at heart bearing the life long loss pain but still standing victorious today only and only for her babies ...then there above these all baby girls must be hugging tight...as its victory for those all eyes who lost the light before facing the sun shine of life...


never ever read such a remarkable court scene ...where it really felt like some time ball going in karan side sometime its khushi...some time the smile sen pushed towards goshal of victory was converted very next moment into win for goshal ...like seriously ...it was a rollar coaster drive...and ur writing so gripping throughout that till last full stop i felt completly hooked to my seat...my my...such active court ...wow

arnav singh raizada ...a man who knows to keep his promise ,who proved this by staying with khushi throughout this journey of pain ...wt a gem of person u have created deeps...i feel like saluting u for ur hard work back end on his character...i am feeling proud of him as he not only brought back fame to RGH ,his dad, his friends around but also his efforts saved a father complete trust on him...the route he adapted to bring out the truth from deshmukh without changing his father stance ...its fantastic...not only this but the way his active mind thought deep and took off the immense burden from a sinking mother shoulder ,its worth appreciation...making her guilt free,he indeed has given a new life to khushi...and not to forget amongst this all he greeted lavuu in his own stylish way ...and his handling of karan without going physical ...wow...can u see wt magic u have created deeps

if i have seen a much much strong khushi today...back end there is immense her own efforts plus i don't wanted to take credit away from arnav here...he worked loads with khushi ,its his hardwork we have seen khushi that much positive today...she got that shoulder ...like lavuu said the right man for her :)

wt to say about khushi ...never thought that by asking a simple question on tea from that ruthless sen she going to turned table like that :)...yeah her only fault is of trusting karan...poor girl how much she had to paid for one word "trust"...how beautifully u have started the chap with her state...that was excellent writing...how she was thinking about the babies murdered...their counts...uff...i have seen her true character when she was standing right there clapping for her friend ...she is selfless no doubt ...loved her when she told lavuu that karan is going to have her silence only and u amazed me that till end u kept her sticked to her words...i guess silence is the biggest slap...but i didn't mind at all the slap which echoed in the court loud and clear...it was not towards some elder there...it was a slap from a hurting mother to a pathetic mother...

loved the way lavuu bestie best friend makes a space in lav heart...i guess she observed arnav more than even khushi today ...hehehe...and she is happy for her bestie that makes me finally happy :)...her constant supporting hug to khushi was fab gesture...her jumping in pregnancy...hehe dr r and team ready with gloves ...lol

loved shashi and his hand which was going on khushi's head ,and was patting her back ...he was there no matter wt...his tears says loads there..

well arnav arjun and anjali ...kiya boloon ...amazing friends...when they three were standing in court and bowing in gratitude ...i felt so proud of them ...there remarks side by side the hearing were fab,adding spice to whole :)...and which leads to arnav final words...new beginnings...excellent writing baby...excellent

ok now other than khushi and arnav the fighters there...i guess sen did pretty well job ,if i see her role here...the way she tried to show karan innocent and putting blame all on khushi ...uff that was something...

well this shreya goshal father sang so well in court...the way he fought the case...i can say just one thing ...that arnav is having gems in his pocket...goshal simply rocks

not to forget judge ...delay in justice is injustice...how wonderful of him...not linger useless ...he told the final verdict ,that was simple fantastic...loved the way he honoured RGH...the sentences given to both karan and deshmukh...indeed i am feeling peace at heart...

deeps must say there r two people who must be having one grey hair right now,one is arnav who was after this case and other person is u ...lol..cause its damn difficult chap ... i need to hats off to u ...for writing it way par excellence..



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Ab mein kya boloo.. I am at loss of words. I am spellbound with today's update. Although I knew it will be the court hearing .. I am so anxious to know how Karan will defend himself. Which cards he will play to save himself out of the case. Will the Dr. Deshmukh spill the truth out. Will Khushi gets justice for her babies. Its going to be really like a goKart ride reading the update. The language you used for the hearing.. from the side of the Lawyers and Arnav's explanation is beyond the perfection.

He broke everything she attempted to make..

She entered her married life to make her future with a jerk. She lived her six years of married life in the assumption of love. She lost her babies under the darkness of trust. Yes.. trust.. thats the mistake she did. She trusted him. She trusted evrything about him. She trusted him as any wife who trusts her husband blindly. That trust betrayed her and crumbled all the walls she built around her married life. Whatever she attempted to make her life beautiful filled with love .. he broke everything with betrayal.

It is the time to pay the justice for the babies he killed brutally. A big day for her to show Karan how strong she became with his betrayal... The perfect day to show what an animal he is to the world. In her nervousness... the jerk in the context showed himself to her to prove his arrogance again. I loathe this person. How could he think that everyone scared of him. Who on this earth will get scared seeing him. I would have slapped right at the moment he said those words. But losing cool at that moment is not good.. she is right. She is not alone anymore to fight these devils.

He is supposed to be here by now.

The important part of her is missing.. How perfect sentence to describe his absence.

And he comes at right time to save his best friend.

Keep at an arm's length, buddy!

He scared him away without using his hands.. without any violence. Only Dr. R has that power. Only his voice has that command. And Lavanya saw her bestie's best friend. I can understand how much shocked she must have felt. Her round open mouth with the pair of round eyes.. flashed in my eyes.


The whole scene you wrote it amazing and beautifully.

Who is he.. Gandhi's grandson... Seriously.. lavanya.. you should have seen him when he scared Karan to death with the pair of scissors. Then you would have said that is he a follower of Gabbar Singh.

The court scene.. the whole hearing you described so perfectly. I really felt like watching directly in the court. The perfect court language and the perfect medical language. You are a perfectionist Deepthi. There is no room of error in your dictionary. Something I really love about you. You won't right anything for the sake of writing it. Whatever you put in words you will do the enough research and give us a perfect garland of words.

You know your choice of choosing a woman Lawyer for Karan worked out very well. It increased the intensity if the scenes. Lawyers are very clever dammit. They can turn any tables at any time according to them. They can prove the truth as wrong and wrong as right. They will confuse us and make us say the complete opposite.. yenni cinemalu choodaledu. And The biggest proof for this is our own Shyam Manohar Jha.

I got very angry when Sen literally wants to prove Khushi did all the things. She used every single thread they know. But what Sen didn't know is.. she is not only dealing with Ghoshal... she is also dealing with Dr. R on the other end indirectly. Which is not at all easy.

Wow.. Khuhsi maintained the record of her expense .. it is very good habit. See every good habit will help us in some way in our life.. we don't realize its importance until we needed the help of that.

When the trust issue came forward.. bringing that Khushi signed her approval for every abortion... The example Khushi used by bringing a simple yet brilliant idea of trust any wife will have on her husband. Yes she is right.. if Any wife doesn't trust her husband.. She should send so many sample tests everyday to the lab.. and viceversa. Any relation will sustain based on the main pillar... Trust. If there si no trust.. then there is no point of being in that relation. Really brilliant ... As I said Deepthi.. not only Arnav is proud of Khushi.. I am also proud of you for writing such an amazing lines. You are simply WOW. No words to explain how much I liked it. And ofcourse you know how much I loved it.


Dr. R charismatically took the reins of the hearing... when he stood at the place... the silent conversation between two pairs of eyes. The silent consonance between two hearts started.. they dont need words.. they never need words.. they knew each other what they are doing.. why they are doing. It's time to keep his emotions in the back seat and bring the complete truth out even though if it hurts her ... becasue it is not for her.. it is for the justice .. it is for the babies. Although he tried very hard to keep her away from the heart break hearing about the brutality of her husband... he knew that she can do it... he knew how strong she became. The complete testimony of Arnav is itself a big blow to the jerk. But he didn't know that something big is waiting to hit him hard for the crime he committed.

The way Arnav handled Dr. Deshmukh is simply brillinat. he even disclosed that Khushi cannot become pregnant again in her life. at that time the emotions you brought with one single para... The relation between a father an ddaughter.. the understanding between two best friends.. The support a friend can give to her bestie.. emotions have no words.. it just have feelings. No matter whatever happened a father is a father to her daughter.. he will be a support to her daughter when she needed .. He will lenda shoulder when she was crumbling. A father is a father.. and you brought that emotion so aptly. You filled the gap between the father and the daughter without saying a single word.

Deepthi can you suggest me something big word than brilliant to describe your brilliancy and awesomeness. Please.. the brilliant is not enough yaar.


Wow I love this judge. I wish we have judges like him. Yes when all the proofs are very clear and stating the whole truth.. why delay the judgement. That jerk doesnt deserve to roam freely on the streets. Actually he doesnt deserve to live. How could he live peacefully surrounding by the ghosts of his cruelty. And he ordered to open the RGH. The best gift Aranv can give to his wonderful father. And the judge even praised the RGH team. Anjali.. Arjun.. Aranv.. best freinds who make us feel pride. who will stay fro each other. The bond between any two people.. you will show it beautifully deepthi. the respect you have for those relations will be seen in evrey relation in your stories. Be it friendship.. be it love... be it responsibility.. Be it possessiveness. You know how to handle them.

Dr. Deshmukh GUILTY.. imprioned for life.
Mr. Jerk GULITY.. imprisoned for 99 years.

They both got what they deserved. I just felt like screaming loud that YES Khushi got JUSTICE. But for once I thought what about his parents. And next minute Khushi's hand touched his mother's cheek hard and his lips uttered.. the words she never dared to say infront of her parents. She literally cursed... "THis is for giving birth to that ba****".. She didnt care about anyone.. she is a free bird now.. she got free from the shackles of the guilt and betrayal. This isn't possible for her without her best friend. Without him..It isn't possible to bring peace to her five babies. And she knew it very well.

And Arnav's heart now swelled up with pride for his best friend seeing how courageous she became in very less time and made him utter the words.. "This is just the beginning"..

I am now very curious... If it is the beginning.. How more he will change her. He made her curse the words infront of her father... and how more bold he will make her. Now the journey of the love story begins. The beginning of their future.

I really lovvved the update Deepthi.. Its really amazing.. You gave us a master piece beatifully weaved in the form of words... adding the colors of your one liners.. and touching up with the fragrance of your brilliancy. 👏 👏 👏.. No matter how much I praise you.. it will be less for this master piece. Are you for real Deepthi. I am really really proud of you my friend. 🤗.. I know that I didn't do justice with my comment for the amazing update you wrote.. How is it even possible to do it.. it is way beyond excellence... Here is my standing ovation for you. You deserve it. Hats Off.







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RES hogaya good good Update pakka hehehehe

When I started to read the first part I felt like I was under a spell , you have written it so beautifully I have no words to describe it. The way Arnav was looking at Khushi , the way Lavanya was watching out for Khushi and at the same time observing Arnav everything was written so so so excellent amazing.

So people and some things will never change there is a saying in Telugu "Puttuka tho vochina budhulu pudakala tho kani povu " which means the habits that come with the birth will leave only with the last breath in the same way Karan cannot change and he will not repent on what he did because if he does then Khushi would not be fighting the case.

The opening statements of both the lawyers is appt and as we all know in court lawyers always try to prove heads as tails and tails as heads and that is once again proved in the Opening statement of Ms.Sen .

Arnav's eye not leaving Khushi even for a single min proves how he is worried about her because the opening statement is just a trailer of what we can expect in the further proceedings.

LOl Arnav and his curse words for Ms.Sen I am rolfing . Some how I always felt that fighting a case is court is like playing chess if both the players are good then it is a tough fight and each player has a chance to play his turn and can change the dynamics of the game and by the end of the second part that is what happened. When a lawyer asks you questions in such a way where you have one yes or no the whole meaning and the scenario changes and will give a new situation where everything looks confusing and clear at the same time.

I really don't know Deepthi which part is harder for you to write but for me Arnav's Testimony was the toughest to read and digest even though I know the facts before hand but its very hard to digest it because as they say truth is the most ugliest thing to look at it because it hurts and that is what happened to Khushi , Arnav , Shashi and Lavanya . Arnav fought with his father to keep Khushi away from this but at the end truth was supposed to come out and that is what happened in the court room. What ever punishment Karan and Deshmukh will get is not enough for the crimes they have committed . It is every hard as a woman and a mother to read and digest the facts so I can understand what you might have gone through while penning it down it is not an easy task. You know after reading Arnav's testimony I just went to my kids room and kissed them.

Sorry I became emotional. A big hug from me to you. What a way to reveal that the mother has never signed the death statement of her unborn children beautiful.

The last slap was what I was expecting wonderful in most of my comments I have always found Karan's mom to be guilty I agree that Karan is a grown up man and he can take his own decisions but as a mother she has a right to stop her kid if he is doing something wrong and instead of stopping him she encouraged him.

Edited by Srilathalolla - 10 years ago
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TL continuing with the theme of the story this chapter gives us the definition of Trust👏 the same way the last two defined love and friendship⭐️

The first look of Khushi Arnav was literally praying


But then with the last slap and f**king bas***d Khushi made sure that her friend never ever have a regret in his own trust. 👍🏼

I could see that Khushi had trust in the legal system to give her justice. There was a trust of a lawyer that made them win the case. Trust of a friend in those unspoken words that these two hopeless friends shared. Lavanya too could trust her bestie with this man who for once has shown empathy, feelings and love in his eye for her bestie. But above all there was regain of trust of the father. The family where daughter did not have a saying it was a very big step. 👏

(I will divert this with something from another story as I did not had a chance to give you feed back there- Your story closes the loop. When the reader accepts the fact you ensure that its closed. Ex: Your Arnav in TVK and FF never took food from someone and Khushi made that her strength in fighting back. But at last you made sure that Khushi got her share of happiness by not just serving him but even feeding him👏)

Same way here too when we accepted that Khushi's father is the way he is you made sure that Khushi got her father back with "You were always my Daughter" - A proud moment for the daughter.

Moreso I can see your trust in the legal system. Indian legal system is famous for its taarikh and you solved this case just in one hearing👏 👏. This court proceeding was not less than any screen play and I usually do not compare but to me the best court case was that from movie Damini and you nailed it dear writer😃. It was the synopsis of your story so far.

I loved the Judge who gave back everything to Raizada family and like Khushi i too was clapping.

So can i now trust this writer for the much required HUG and that too initiated by Khushi. Arnav needs this hug more than Khushi for being a back bone to Khushi. 😃

Your start of the story and rain - I so wished we had that rain today here. The heat wave is killing us😭

Edited by -Bhavi - 10 years ago

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