Ab mein kya boloo.. I am at loss of words. I am spellbound with today's update. Although I knew it will be the court hearing .. I am so anxious to know how Karan will defend himself. Which cards he will play to save himself out of the case. Will the Dr. Deshmukh spill the truth out. Will Khushi gets justice for her babies. Its going to be really like a goKart ride reading the update. The language you used for the hearing.. from the side of the Lawyers and Arnav's explanation is beyond the perfection.
He broke everything she attempted to make..
She entered her married life to make her future with a jerk. She lived her six years of married life in the assumption of love. She lost her babies under the darkness of trust. Yes.. trust.. thats the mistake she did. She trusted him. She trusted evrything about him. She trusted him as any wife who trusts her husband blindly. That trust betrayed her and crumbled all the walls she built around her married life. Whatever she attempted to make her life beautiful filled with love .. he broke everything with betrayal.
It is the time to pay the justice for the babies he killed brutally. A big day for her to show Karan how strong she became with his betrayal... The perfect day to show what an animal he is to the world. In her nervousness... the jerk in the context showed himself to her to prove his arrogance again. I loathe this person. How could he think that everyone scared of him. Who on this earth will get scared seeing him. I would have slapped right at the moment he said those words. But losing cool at that moment is not good.. she is right. She is not alone anymore to fight these devils.
He is supposed to be here by now.
The important part of her is missing.. How perfect sentence to describe his absence.
And he comes at right time to save his best friend.
Keep at an arm's length, buddy!
He scared him away without using his hands.. without any violence. Only Dr. R has that power. Only his voice has that command. And Lavanya saw her bestie's best friend. I can understand how much shocked she must have felt. Her round open mouth with the pair of round eyes.. flashed in my eyes.
The whole scene you wrote it amazing and beautifully.
Who is he.. Gandhi's grandson... Seriously.. lavanya.. you should have seen him when he scared Karan to death with the pair of scissors. Then you would have said that is he a follower of Gabbar Singh.
The court scene.. the whole hearing you described so perfectly. I really felt like watching directly in the court. The perfect court language and the perfect medical language. You are a perfectionist Deepthi. There is no room of error in your dictionary. Something I really love about you. You won't right anything for the sake of writing it. Whatever you put in words you will do the enough research and give us a perfect garland of words.
You know your choice of choosing a woman Lawyer for Karan worked out very well. It increased the intensity if the scenes. Lawyers are very clever dammit. They can turn any tables at any time according to them. They can prove the truth as wrong and wrong as right. They will confuse us and make us say the complete opposite.. yenni cinemalu choodaledu. And The biggest proof for this is our own Shyam Manohar Jha.
I got very angry when Sen literally wants to prove Khushi did all the things. She used every single thread they know. But what Sen didn't know is.. she is not only dealing with Ghoshal... she is also dealing with Dr. R on the other end indirectly. Which is not at all easy.
Wow.. Khuhsi maintained the record of her expense .. it is very good habit. See every good habit will help us in some way in our life.. we don't realize its importance until we needed the help of that.
When the trust issue came forward.. bringing that Khushi signed her approval for every abortion... The example Khushi used by bringing a simple yet brilliant idea of trust any wife will have on her husband. Yes she is right.. if Any wife doesn't trust her husband.. She should send so many sample tests everyday to the lab.. and viceversa. Any relation will sustain based on the main pillar... Trust. If there si no trust.. then there is no point of being in that relation. Really brilliant ... As I said Deepthi.. not only Arnav is proud of Khushi.. I am also proud of you for writing such an amazing lines. You are simply WOW. No words to explain how much I liked it. And ofcourse you know how much I loved it.
Dr. R charismatically took the reins of the hearing... when he stood at the place... the silent conversation between two pairs of eyes. The silent consonance between two hearts started.. they dont need words.. they never need words.. they knew each other what they are doing.. why they are doing. It's time to keep his emotions in the back seat and bring the complete truth out even though if it hurts her ... becasue it is not for her.. it is for the justice .. it is for the babies. Although he tried very hard to keep her away from the heart break hearing about the brutality of her husband... he knew that she can do it... he knew how strong she became. The complete testimony of Arnav is itself a big blow to the jerk. But he didn't know that something big is waiting to hit him hard for the crime he committed.
The way Arnav handled Dr. Deshmukh is simply brillinat. he even disclosed that Khushi cannot become pregnant again in her life. at that time the emotions you brought with one single para... The relation between a father an ddaughter.. the understanding between two best friends.. The support a friend can give to her bestie.. emotions have no words.. it just have feelings. No matter whatever happened a father is a father to her daughter.. he will be a support to her daughter when she needed .. He will lenda shoulder when she was crumbling. A father is a father.. and you brought that emotion so aptly. You filled the gap between the father and the daughter without saying a single word.
Deepthi can you suggest me something big word than brilliant to describe your brilliancy and awesomeness. Please.. the brilliant is not enough yaar.
Wow I love this judge. I wish we have judges like him. Yes when all the proofs are very clear and stating the whole truth.. why delay the judgement. That jerk doesnt deserve to roam freely on the streets. Actually he doesnt deserve to live. How could he live peacefully surrounding by the ghosts of his cruelty. And he ordered to open the RGH. The best gift Aranv can give to his wonderful father. And the judge even praised the RGH team. Anjali.. Arjun.. Aranv.. best freinds who make us feel pride. who will stay fro each other. The bond between any two people.. you will show it beautifully deepthi. the respect you have for those relations will be seen in evrey relation in your stories. Be it friendship.. be it love... be it responsibility.. Be it possessiveness. You know how to handle them.
Dr. Deshmukh GUILTY.. imprioned for life.
Mr. Jerk GULITY.. imprisoned for 99 years.
They both got what they deserved. I just felt like screaming loud that YES Khushi got JUSTICE. But for once I thought what about his parents. And next minute Khushi's hand touched his mother's cheek hard and his lips uttered.. the words she never dared to say infront of her parents. She literally cursed... "THis is for giving birth to that ba****".. She didnt care about anyone.. she is a free bird now.. she got free from the shackles of the guilt and betrayal. This isn't possible for her without her best friend. Without him..It isn't possible to bring peace to her five babies. And she knew it very well.
And Arnav's heart now swelled up with pride for his best friend seeing how courageous she became in very less time and made him utter the words.. "This is just the beginning"..
I am now very curious... If it is the beginning.. How more he will change her. He made her curse the words infront of her father... and how more bold he will make her. Now the journey of the love story begins. The beginning of their future.
I really lovvved the update Deepthi.. Its really amazing.. You gave us a master piece beatifully weaved in the form of words... adding the colors of your one liners.. and touching up with the fragrance of your brilliancy. 👏 👏 👏.. No matter how much I praise you.. it will be less for this master piece. Are you for real Deepthi. I am really really proud of you my friend. 🤗.. I know that I didn't do justice with my comment for the amazing update you wrote.. How is it even possible to do it.. it is way beyond excellence... Here is my standing ovation for you. You deserve it. Hats Off.
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