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Sphinx.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#591

well written hemudear!! so finally swarnali met panchali in indraprasth!!! the way u move the story is quite neat and well written dear..especially ur descriptions about indraprasth hall was very well explained ..beautifully written..and that secret moment when both the queens met each other was classy😉 i really loved it..

I always wonder how this swarna could remain silent when she knows everything about her husband..how could she hide this to her husband??

k now I am waiting for the most important incident!!!!

Sorry for being late😊

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...Hemangi

@...Hemangi

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#592

Originally posted by: .Sanskruti
RES me second😭
sautan ne hath maar liya😳

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unres
nice updt dii
loved the way u portrayed Swarna and Drau BTW u quite managed to handle bot dodhari talwars😆😉
Hehehe... do dhari talwars... I like that 😆
aww my Angaraj nd Swarna moments were too cute😳 he is defo a possessive hubby😉
Well u did wanted a jealous types Angaraj...I made him possessive... see what he is upto 😆 ☺️
then IP was too very well described thru Swarna...waiting for the next chappy😳
Will try to update the next part soon 😊
nd BTW this FF is coming to an end😲 hopefully u r nt ending it with VH nd Swarna leaving Karna like Uruvi😭😭 I dnt mind her leaving this world too bt dnt want VH in the BG🤢
There will exit & entry both... but my VH part will be different...not Uruvi type sequence... and lots more 😉
nd BTW loved the twins in the frame nd their dialoguebazi too😊
Thank u... Sahadev's dialogue is quite imp. so I added it

UPDATE SOON😡😆
I tried to... but blame my Internet service provider...I coould not access IF for a week

Thanks for the sweet comments Sansii 🤗

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...Hemangi

@...Hemangi

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#593

Originally posted by: dhivyakrish31
well written hemudear!! so finally swarnali met panchali in indraprasth!!! the way u move the story is quite neat and well written dear..especially ur descriptions about indraprasth hall was very well explained ..beautifully written..and that secret moment when both the queens met each other was classy😉 i really loved it..
I always wonder how this swarna could remain silent when she knows everything about her husband..how could she hide this to her husband??
k now I am waiting for the most important incident!!!!
Sorry for being late😊

The secret moments yes... they both shared bitter as well a funny moments betwn them within short span of time...a sort fo understanding betwn the queens of the opposite camps 😊

I always wondered about the palace of illusions... how the people were awed with its opulence & mystery. I just tried to give a touch of optical theories from the eyes of Swarna 😊

Of course...Swarna is a Karnali... I believe she is little a part of us all...so Swarna would defo try to bring in justice for her beloved... so yes... the upcoming chapters will invovle a high level of many emotions of mankind

Thanks for the sweet comments Dhivii dear 🤗

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...Hemangi

@...Hemangi

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#594

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~ Thank you all for liking the previous chapter and for your sweet comments ~

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Posted: 10 years ago

#595

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Sanskruthi

@Sanskruthi

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 10 years ago

#597

mein bhi res😆
srry if u wanted to res more😆

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unres

quite emotional chapter😭 poor Swarna can sense here feelings😭 how she must be feeling seeing Vrushu with her kids😭 loved Karna too much very perfect hubby😳 loved the way he understood Swarna

VH in the way don't want Swarna to go to Kaliyug😭😭

Kaliyugi want Swarna back and her TT too abb kya hoga what if they too enter Dwarparyug MB se pehle dusra MB😆 Karna won't let Swarna go I m sure😳 but this VH🥱🤢 mein kya bolu it scares the hell out of me when the writeup is abt Karna😭🤢

Update soon

Edited by .Sanskruti - 10 years ago