ArHi SS: The Promises Ruin *COMPLETE* [Note + EXT TS PG113]

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nishu_shorna

@nishu_shorna

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Posted: 10 years ago

#561

Thoda aalag hai, par an apt ending... a beautiful story u've written jiji... loved it sooo much...

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RizArshi

@RizArshi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#562

I wanted more (as always) 😡 Epilogue please? 😳

All the best for your exams Jiji. Give your best. I know you can DO IT 😉

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suji5

@suji5

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Posted: 10 years ago

#563

awesome update
finally khushi forgives Arnav..
and they decided to adopt Arav..

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Pastellitesoulx

@xMIC.Dropx

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Posted: 10 years ago

#564

Now that's the perfect ending !!!!
Loved it

Yayyy excited for that contest ... Will read them before dead line for sure :P

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RICHA

@ar_sajan4evr

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Posted: 10 years ago

#565

amazing end
gudluck for ur exams :)

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Sarita

@sarita_barun

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Posted: 10 years ago

#566

Nice ending.

The title really made me think something really bad.

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Arjuhisis

@Arjuhisis

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Posted: 10 years ago

#567

Nice story
All the very best to u for ur exam and the OS contest

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lara3110

@lara3110

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Posted: 10 years ago

#568

Loved it but was sad at the same time that the update I read was your last to this beautiful story. I wish you had continued and shown us how their life progressed after this traumatic period, especially for Khushi. Arnav as usual always took Khushi for granted but where Sheetal was concerned; he gave her most of his time. WHY??

Anyways, would appreciate a sequel to this story or an epilogue...

I know that your exams are fast approaching. Here's wishing you all the very best. God Bless.⭐️👏🤗

Edited by lara3110 - 10 years ago

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rk2127

@rk2127

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Posted: 10 years ago

#569

I liked the fact that Khushi didn't forgave Arnav just because he said he was sorry. It was the case with IPK and I hated it that Arnav always took khushi for granted and she always forgave him on his one sorry.

Arnav didn't even get the full taste of his medicine when khushi referred to Shyam as her ex-fianc compare to what he did and his possessiveness woke up. It's sexy at time but than when you have different standards for yourself and your wife than it becomes suffocating.

All in all I liked this end. And I don't mind coz it never was Arnav's redemption for his foolishness rather him breaking his promises.