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Posted: 10 years ago
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Chapter 4 :

At the park in morning: Payal has brought both Ansh and Anshika outside for a change. Even she wanted some fresh air after 2 weeks of constant crying . Her heart went out to the 2 motherless kids sitting next to her.

She missed her Di a lot. In the last 2 weeks she has been involved so much in taking care of other people's pain that she had not had the time grieve herself.

She saw both the kids moving away from her and felt the similarity between them and his sister.

Suddenly the haze on her mind lifted as she noticed that 2 men picked Ansh and Anshika and pushed them inside their van.

She panicked and ran after the van shouting. The van was too fast for her , she stumbled and fell down.

Office reception:

Payal was shouting :" Don't you understand I have to see him its very urgent".

Receptionist : " mam please calm down. Your head is bleeding mam . Let the doctor see you. Mr ASR is in a meeting with Aman Sir. They have asked no one to disturb them".

The Hell with meeting. She rushed towards the meeting room and pushed the door open.

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Arnav was too stunned to react after hearing what Garima said. Is she out of her mind. Why bring the kids into this.

Suddenly Arnav looked at his father. Was he also involved in this, blind rage was building inside him. On cue , his father also looked towards him . He understood the question which Arnav's eyes were asking and answered a "No".

Suddenly Arnav composure snapped , he rushed towards his father , caught him by his throat and hissed, " You are the cause of whatever is happening now. You killed my mother and because of you my children are also in danger. You almost destroyed my Di's life. You don't deserve to live. I should have killed you the day you brought that s**t into our lives. You bas***d!!!!!"

Both Aman and Khushi rushed towards Armaan's aid and tried to save Armaan. Aman just managed to drag Arnav away , when his Arnav's eyes fell on Khushi.

" You knew this!! How could you do this !!!! I thought you were better!! You think that after this, I will take you in!! Make Love to you!! Live happily ever after with you!!"

He suddenly got very dangerously closed to her and whispered ," You know you are only fit for one night stands. Why waste an entire life for a single f***.

He said aloud," Is that the reason why you are not married yet? Of course how can one guy be enough for you? "

" You want me , I can take you now itself, at this very table? Wont it satisfy you, Wont it be Kinky.s**t"

Arnav's word felt like a knife . And then khushi broke down. How long will she be punished for her something which she did 8-10 years back. Hasn't she lost enough.

Aman dragged Arnav away."Arvav, Control yourself. Our first priority is searching the kids".

This brought Arnav back to his senses.

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Just then Payal came running and hugged Arnav and started crying.

" Jiju... Someone... Took... Ansh Anshika... Kidnap... I could not save them...

Calm down Payal.. Tell me what happened.

Payal retold Arnav and Aman everything. She hugged Aman and said ," Bhai , I promise I was not careless.. I cant loose di's kids Bhai... Please find them bhai.. I will die ... I cant face even myself now."

Garima : you will not find them . Only I know where they are.And one more thing , the next time you call my daughter s**t in front of me , I will make you pay. You know Arnav, there are many bad things that can happen to small girls.

Dis she just say that.. All of them were shocked. Arnav did not know how much more can he hate that woman. " If you touch her Garima, I will make sure that equally bad things happen to a super model and an old plastic women".

" Enough both of you ". Payal cried.

Edited by maaneet_michi - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#32
I read the update.
it's interesting


But confusing palak then Payal

Also the armaan then arnav.

Also they are already discussing the kidnap while payal came only later

How can Arnav talk about khushi in such filthy language
Edited by renee.bee - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: renee.bee

I read the update.

it's interesting


But confusing palak then Payal

Also the armaan then arnav.

Also they are already discussing the kidnap while payal came only later

How can Arnav talk about khushi in such filthy language


thanks for pointing out the name mistake..

There are 2 parallel threads going on here .. one in the park in the morning and other in the office.

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Posted: 10 years ago
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thanks for clearing my confussion n now coming to chapter4 arnav hates garima so much is that the only reason he hates khusi or they had a history.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#35
such a nasty situation it is ... I dont know whom to support...

thanx for the update...pls continue soon 😃

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Posted: 10 years ago
#36
Chapter 5 Teaser :

Why did Arnav hate Khushi? Arnav did not know where to start. He could not exactly pinpoint anywhere. Was it because she was her mother's daughter? Or because she was a spoilt brat ?or because she unknowingly used to rub her apparent status on his face? Or because while playing as kids she used to continuously fight with Lavanaya and Di?

Or because she had no shame? Or because he lost his virginity to her on the day he was planning to confess his feelings to Lavanya ? Or because she made him realize that like his father he could not control his lust for gupta women?

Or bcoz she and his ex jija broke his sister's home? Or because Lavnya almost had a miscarriage due to Khushis's antics?

There were many days when he was not sure. It never mattered to Lavanya because for her being with him was more important. What actually shocked him was Khushi's appearance in his life after 5 long years.Why now???

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Sory for the delayed update😭...was very busy..
wil update regularly henceforth
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow..that's a lot. What has Khushi lost? Her love Arnav? Why did she team up with Shyam to break Anjali's married life ?
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Posted: 10 years ago
#39
So much mistrust and heart breaks..
I don't how Arnav forget it all and started to love again..
I am waiting eagerly for that.. 😆 ...

Pretty lots of revelation...
Ok so Khushi is Arnav's first 😳...and his last in future...coz story is abt second chance right?..poor arnie he loved La and this mishap happened..
I think khushi changed after dat night...her mother may be the reason for everything... 😡...

Update soon 😊
Edited by lechuarshi - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#40
Hi all ... thanks for the positive feedback I have got from all of you.
I have been reading through a lot of ff in this forum.

In my FF , i did not wanted to make Khushi an epitome of virtue and Arnav being angry at her most of the time without it being her fault.

Every person has some positive and negative traits which I have tried to bring forth.

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