chalo...
din guzaar gaya, saanjh kat gayi...
ab to hum unres kar hi dete hain...
you know what...jab bhi tumse baat karne ki baari aati hai...to mujhe ekdum se padhai yaad aa jati hai...kyuki I know ki if I come on talking to you, i won't easily stop and go on and on and on, and I'll end up doing nothing!!
Please...mujhe kshama kar do...coz i'm trying to finish this and study something!
I'll save the best for the last...
Okay so..PrAja's last convo was...touching.
the fact that he is a soldier, the son of his matrbhoomi is more than anything else...and for the same, he can't commit himself completely yot Ajabdeh. ANd yet, she supports him...
that's why Pratap, and even JB said, "I wish I was just an ordinary mother/husband, with no responsibilties on my shoulders. It is sad that for my duties, I can't love my children/wife like an ordinary person could."
We all dream of velvety mattresses and a life of riches, but we often overlook the thorns that such a life brings...
And it was emotional when Pratap said those exact lines...
Shayad yeh aapko achha na lage, parantu hum adhik samay aapke saath nahin reh paayenge kyunki humein humare sainya balk o aur bhi badhana parega, jiske liye ho sakta hai, adhiktar samay hum mahal ki bahar hi rahein, sainikon ko prashikshan dena, parikshan niriskhan karna, yojnayein banana, rannitiyan garhna...Aur phir yuddha aarmabh ho jaane par toh...aap jaanti hai na Ajabde ki hum apni maatribhoomi ke liye apne praan haste haste tyag sakte hain...hum aapko vachan nahin de sakte Ajabde ki hum laut ke aayenge bhi ya "
like, these lines literally touched me...
And it was natural what Ajabdeh did...but it was nice to see it again..
and the diyas went 'off'...and they were alone with each other on the window sill in the moon light *dreamy*
the beginning...Pratap ki entry...'inta to hamne bhi nahi cheda hoga chakrapani ko unke vivah pe...!!' entry pe hi hasi!!! amazing...
And and and...ye poora blouse ki doori and necklace and the seductive skin contacts wit Pratap's chin on AJab's shoulder's and the whole diverting concentration by AJab's bare back...ohhh geeezzz!!!
ANd then, the touch was fanning Ajab's jasbaat...and she was leaning to his touch...oh Goshhh!!!
The last so intimate scene I remember is when I wrote Baarish...and I can completely say that you have written it better than me...
I loved the whole episode from Pratap's entry to dori to Ajabdeh goes to change. You did a brilliant job...
Aur haan...in 'vo' vali line...i was on both sides...my first thought was the he will kiss her. But i strengthened on the fact that he won't. But considering that you used to be desperate to make them kiss, I was bending on that fact too...
Sachchi...this was beautiful!!! I lovvveeeddd it absolutelty!
