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nitii-76 thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
#81
hey it was an awesome update dear..👏
sorry i couldn't comment on the previous update..
sorry again i won't be able to give a long comment..busy with work😕
i am happy atleast Janani Divan is doing that..
i love both of your stories..both are my favorite..(Love and KYPH)
will give along one weekends..
pls continue soon🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: nitii

hey it was an awesome update dear..👏

sorry i couldn't comment on the previous update..
sorry again i won't be able to give a long comment..busy with work😕
i am happy atleast Janani Divan is doing that..
i love both of your stories..both are my favorite..(Love and KYPH)
will give along one weekends..
pls continue soon🤗

thank u so much niti🤗
take ur time it's okay. .
will be waiting for ur views
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Posted: 10 years ago
#83
he is such a raavan kumar...

waiting fr ishu to b jkr...

stil the fire is on between ishra...


Edited by shravani_2311 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#84
Loved ittt... But no Raman 😳 ...
Liked the way u hve portrayed the characters ... Strong independent and feisty women... It's real to me...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#85
Loved itt...Past is killing me...what did ishu did yar? I am excited to know kya hua ...Raman is evil only to her...I too beleve he will not harm his family even her...hard mass on face...thoda jaldi updates diya karo...I am waiting for next and mystery to open...update soonish. ...thanks for pm. ...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#86

Originally posted by: --abha--

Loved itt...Past is killing me...what did ishu did yar? I am excited to know kya hua ...Raman is evil only to her...I too beleve he will not harm his family even her...hard mass on face...thoda jaldi updates diya karo...I am waiting for next and mystery to open...update soonish. ...thanks for pm. ...

haha sabar karo. .. will update today n I won't reveal anything so early don't worry
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Posted: 10 years ago
#87
Read all 9 parts in one go and i must say they are amazing...they kept me on the edge throughout the reading...although i dnt understand what transpired btn Raman n Ishita...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#88

Originally posted by: nammytat

Read all 9 parts in one go and i must say they are amazing...they kept me on the edge throughout the reading...although i dnt understand what transpired btn Raman n Ishita...

hey thank u so much for reading!!!

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Posted: 10 years ago
#89

Part 10

Guru

Somtime later, an inert Ishita, suddenly, smacked her forehead, I'm so pathetic! Raman's gunning for my neck and yet here I'm ...'

Just then, there was a knock on the door. Come in!' she sat a little straighter.

Hey did you see the email about the company meeting at ten? There are all kind of talks going on outside. Do you know what its for? asked Riya, holding the door open.

Nope, not a clue!' Ishita evaded, no point handing out a half-baked information.

wow its almost that time, we should get going.' Ishita grabbed her notetab.

Its in the hall upstairs,' said tina, joining them.

Ishita changed her mind. The times were such that they called for security detail. ;actually why don't you all go ahead, I'll come with Shagun.'

A few minutes later, Ishita and Shagun trotted up the stairs, amidst a cacophony of sneezes. Ishita fiercely whispered, Can you please not douse with so much perfume. You just caused an allergy epidemic here!'

I'm just trying to smell nice and not subject them to second hand smoke,' Shagun quipped, not a bit apologetic.abruptly Ishita stopped. What now?' Shagun asked.

Maybe I should stay here! I know everything that I need to know.' Remembering Raman's eyes, Ishita's feet weighed like cement blocks. The mental visual of Raman pointing an accusing finger at her In front of everyone, and proclaiming in a loud booming voice, Ishita Iyer is the reason for all your suffering! Lynch her!' could possibly come true.

Shagun understood. Don't be silly, he wont say a thing to you. There are so many of us there. The man has never had a public meltdown.'

What if, he makes an exception today Shags!' Ishita worried stepping out of the way of oncoming human traffic.

He wont! If it makes you feel better, you can hide behind me.'

Im taller than you'

Then just slouch or something Khali! C'mon hurry! I do not want to miss a bit! We hardly ever get any excitement like this, around here.' Grabbing Ishita's elbow, Shagun tugged her inside the third floor. Their timing could not have been better or worse. The two women stepped smack in the path of Raman and his entourage. Everyone halted.

Hello!' Raman sailed a terse greeting in Shagun's direction. A knows B, B knows C, therefore A knows C, kind of funda. (A- Raman, B- Ishita and C- Shagun.)

He completely ignored Ishita, who anyway appeared captivated by a speck on the nearby chair. The important bandwagon thundered by them.

So the boy has actually become a man! Raman looks every inch of a bona fide international celebrity he has become,' Shagun whispered, impressed.

Ishita just shrugged her shoulders even though she agrees with her friend. How can she not.. . In a matter of seconds, she had felt the raw power and masculinity the man exuded. His global entrepreneur prowess had exalted him to superlative success and fame. The kind only you read in books.

Head above most of the men in his group, Raman sported a perfectly tailored dark blue suit with a pale blue silk shirt and sull silver tie. His attire, added the word distinguished' to his hansome physique. Shagun gave her a sympathetic look over. She saw Ishita still staring at the place he just stood.

Ishita!'

ha...' she came out of her thoughts. if you are done leching, can we go inside?' she muttered shiftly.

The two friends, made their way, a safe distance behind Raman and his posse, including Mrs Shukla. Squishing some toes, they snuck in the last rows of the placed chairs.

Loud murmers rushed among the present, on noticing who had come amidst them. Everyone craned to get a better look, some actually climbed chairs.

Holy cow its Raman Bhalla!'

what is Bhalla doing here?'

He's so god-looking. Marry me!'

Who passed that stinker bomb?'

Hearing these comments Ishita was feeling uneasy.

Now seated on the elongated dais set up at the last minute, Mrs Shukla and the other top brass motioned the employees to take their seats. The bedlam tapered.

Ishita's eyes remained pegged on the shoulder of the man immediately ahead, while she tightly gripped Shagun's hand.

Raman Bhalla for sure looks important. I guess success does that to one,' whispered Roy, sitting next to her.

Because of the din, Ishita could barely hear him. She leaned closer, What did you say?'

That was the moment; Raman chose to glance their way. He took in Ishita's head touching the other man's shoulder, as the two whispered to each other. The hand on Raman's knee clenched even though his impassive expression remained unchanged. Can we please, get this circus started?' he hastened. Simone promptly shot out of her rushing to the key speaker's side, urging them to begin.

Mr Telang, the middle aged CFO forever clad in a gray safari suit', strutted towards the podium. Bang in front the mike he chose to clear his throat. The hall reverberated with sounds of phlegm gurgling in his windpipe. Just about every one flinched..

He began, Dear friends, on this day I have some momentous news to share with all of you!' Deliberate and dramatic pause. Any guesses?' Mr Telang, a true blue orator, headed straight for audience participation, regardless of the occasion- a formal company meeting. A committed presenter, with dreams of becoming the next Prabu Chawla, sees no difference.

The agency staff, usually, extremely verbose to Mr T's antics, due to the exalted presence, remained silent. Speak up. Any guesses? Someone? Anyone?' Mr Telang scanning the crowds heartily, persisted. The masses resolutely avoided his eyes.

Don't do this to yourself Telang!' Shagun snickered, softly. Ishita and she slumped even lower trying to stifle their giggles.

Is this a friggin company meeting or a childrens birthday party, Raman cursed, keeping the gracious smile glued on. Irritated he glanced away' across the hall, his eyes collided with Ishita's. She immediately ate her smile.

For a minute, everything and everyone else faded away. All Raman saw was Ishita and all she felt was him. Scowling Raman swivelled his head, breaking the eye contact and a long eye-lock. Mrs Shukla, can we do this quickly. I have a conference call in an hour.'

Of course!' the older women leaned forwad signalling Telang. She pointedly held her watch.

Yes Mrs Shukla, yes, yes!' Mr Telang literally doubled over. British raj was long gone but sycophancy continued to rule his spine. Friends, Ace Advertising Agency is now a part of the giant, honourable and esteemed Bhalla Empire of Industries,' he declared reverently and speedily.

Honourable and esteemed, doesn't it mean the same?' Shagun giggled.

Bhalla Empire of Industries, that sounds wrong,' Ishita added.

Shush!' Tine hissed.Apart from them the revealation and shocked the entire staff into silence. Most of them were contemplating possible pink slips. AAA was like Echinocyamus Scaber ( smallest sea urchin) in the big ocean of Bhalla conglomerates.

Urgent whispers broke out. Raman stood up. Now dear friends, let us hear our new boss, the man India Today hails as a businessman of the year. Please welcome Mr Raman Bhalla.' The employees beautifully did as bid.; giving him a loud ovation, most of them were anyway on their feet.

Resisting a Heimlich manoeuver, Mr Telang settled for the congratulatory thump on Raman's back. Feeling important, he smugly took his seat.

Telanji, not India Today but Time Magazine of USA, awarded Mr Bhalla the international business man of the year award,' Rochak, sitting next, corrected.

Passing a hand, slickly over his heavily oiled hair, (gole ka tael), Mr Telang replied, Achha! Waise if Times Magazine gave Mr Bhalla such an important award, toh India Today ne bhi kuch diya hoga.'

Thank you for such a complimentary introduction,' began Raman bobbing his head duly in the other man's direction.

Me Telang proud, sneakily mouthed to Rochak and others, dekha! Impress kar diya!'

dear peers! Just like my late father, I stand for expansion by adding to my existing strengths and resource optimisation. From this moment on, consider yourself an integral part of Bhalla Industry. I assure you no drastic changes shallbe implemented.' His audience breathed easy. I acquired this company because of a vision I had for all of you.' He paused scanning the crowds, all eyes and some mouths too were pegged on him.

AAA , like my own career, shall grow manifolds and emerge as an advertising agency to reckon with, but not just in the city or state... how about we aim little further? Next year, lets bring home as ABBY. But that is only possible if each of you commits your 110% to my vision and I promise to give each of your dreams, my all'

The employees sprightly burst out in motivated applause; seeming to stand a few inches taller, an enthralling chimera beckoned them.

Mrs Shukla repeated Telang's earlier words, Dekha! Impress kar diya!'

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Precap - Head bowed, Ishita stiffly slid in the empty chair next to Shagun. She peeked up to flash a strained smile at her colleagues. Super canary shit! Opposite her, barely a couple of feet away, sat Raman. His veiled eyes fixed on her. Within seconds, a familiar colour hovered on Ishita's cheeks.


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Posted: 10 years ago
#90
it was wonderful..i love shagun😆
Ishita and shagun as bestie's..sounds so cool👏
Raman is jealous..Ishita is all Blushy Blushy..
what happened in the past yaar..i am eagerly waiting..
Raman is like Ishita did something..shagun is like Ishita wasn't at fault..Ishita is like she won't disclose anything to him🤔..
i am confused yaar..clear it soon
pls give flashback yaar..at least a glimpse of it..

Edited by nitii - 10 years ago

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