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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Isha_Pathare

Beautiful story dear... loved the end

waiting for part two


Hi Isha,

Thanks, will update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: aviana

amazing updt dear
loved it


Hi Aviana, thanks
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Originally posted by: Raina1234

Loved it. The story resembles the show to much extent but I know you'll definitely do something awesomely different. Looking forward to the next part. Thanks for the PM. Update soon.


Hi Raina,

Thanks,
Yes I know it resembles the show too much but when Kaarthikk asked me to write based on the current track a part of my story till Raman realizes Ishita was stuck inside the rubble was already aired so I could not deviate from it so instead I wrote on the emotions of the characters on those scene hopefully you will find the second part little bit different.


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Hi Guys,
Sorry for the delay. I initially wrote that Ishita would be in amma place and Raman would be going there in a sneaky way but the episode was also going that way so I had to rewrite most of the second part.

I hope you guys like this part as well. I am not sure whether I have done justice to the people who suffer after such calamity but I did try so if you don't like anything please let me know.

Chapter 2

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Adi is relieved to hear her speak about it not blaming him that is when he realizes the magnitude of a mother heart and hugs her saying thank you Ishima at the same time realizing what he said he pulls back but Ishita hugs him tightly saying you could not have given me a bigger gift than this and places a kiss on his forehead. Raman witnesses this exchange between mother and son standing outside the room door his eyes are moist and his heart is contented with the realization at last his family is complete.

Chapter 2

Adi comes out Raman quickly wipes his eyes turning the other way round and turns to see Adi with a smile on his face. Adi comes and hugs and cries on his arms. Raman quickly gathers him in a tight hug and asks him what happened beta? Why are you crying now? Adi says to him I am sorry because of me Ishima got hurt and I put Ruhi in danger too I could not protect her as a big brother.

Raman is glad to see the change in Adi towards the family. He tells him but you did protect your sister. You comforted her when she was scared. You looked out for her welfare. It is not your fault that Ishita got hurt what would have happened if the pillar fell on her in our house due to earthquake. He trembles while saying that but keeps his emotions locked inside him so that he can assure his son that whatever happened with Ishita is not his fault.

Adi is relieved little bit that neither of them blame him. Raman tells Adi since Ishima and papa won't be home so it is his duty to watch over Ruhi. Adi readily agrees with a thin smile on his face accepting the fact that they still trust him that is why they left the care of Ruhi to him which works wonders in healing him from guilt. Raman is thinking probably this will take Adi's mind from the betrayal of Shagun as both (IshRa) are not there to comfort him right now he doesn't want to leave his madrasan.

Raman hugs both the kids and sends them with the family making sure they are properly taken care of. Raman pulls Mihir aside and tells him watch over the kids for me today as Raman trust him the most since he was Raman confidant during the black phase of his life. Mihir says don't worry about the kids we will take care you just worry about bhaibi.

Once the family leaves after everyone spending time with Ishita Raman enters the room to see Ishita has gone to sleep due to tiredness and medication. He goes near her and sits on the chair starring at her continuously without blinking an eye because he feels if he blinks she might vanish again.

Ishita gets up in the middle of the night Raman immediately goes near her asking what she wants. Ishita replies water Raman slowly helps her sit but his fingers are trembling whenever he touches her which is not gone unnoticed by her. He gives the water for her to drink and asks her to sleep again but his eyes are still showing worry.

Ishita thinks to bring him out of worry starts their nok-jhok You should be proud I am not only an expert in breaking tooth I am getting expert in breaking legs too instead of the usual banter which follows he literally breaks down saying he will give a slap if she does this kind of stunt again with crying hiccups now. Ishita realizes he is affected too much and tries to console him saying she is not going anywhere but he is not listening to her and says to hear do you know what would have happened to me if something had happened to you. I really thought I lost you yaar and keeps talking but his sentence doesn't make any sense literally starting at one point but finishing in another point but every word shows how much he loves her.

Ishita realizes that he is worried so much she says in a quiet voice sshh I am not going anywhere even if I am dead I will still be there to haunt you this also doesn't bring a smile on his face but he gets up and closes her more mouth with her hands and says with anguish don't joke about it I thought I lost you yaar.

Ishita lightly caresses his cheeks and opens her arms. He immediately rushes into the hug and crushes her to him. He cries wetting her shoulder Ishita lets him cry so that he can spew out all the worry which he had been bottling up when she could hear him subsiding she calls out to him Raman. Hearing her call him he leaves her hug and looks at her his eyes shows her clearly how much he suffered today.

Ishita keeps repeating that she is not going anywhere caressing him; he hugs her gently placing his head on her chest hearing her heartbeat which calms him down finally letting go of his fear of losing her which brings peace to him. He slowly drifts to sleep on her in that state too he is conscious as to not to hurt her.

Ishita realizes how much he cares for her seeing his vulnerable side which he never expressed before places a light kiss on his forehead and promises to him that this time around there will be Madrasai wala Mission Battle supreme with that thought and contented smile she slowly drifts to sleeps holding him on her protective embrace.

In the morning Raman is the first one to wake up and realizes for the first time they have slept together in such close proximity and the smile on her face brightens his day that is when he realizes that they are in a hospital bed and he may have hurt her more, so slowly without waking her up he tries to come out of her embrace but as soon as she realizes that he is moving she opens her eyes and smiles at him.

After the last 24 hours Raman smiles genuinely for the first time looking at her and ask her how are you? Do you need anything? She says fine. I need something when he asks what she needs. She says with a shy smile sweets. He says madrasan you have weird taste where am I going to get sweets in the morning in the hospital. Ishita says to him buddu Kumar remember the time you promised me you won't eat sweets in the U.S if you got your portion of sweets now that is the type of sweet I need Raman is surprised by her request when he was about to comply the nurse entered the room and asked him to go out.

Raman cursing his fate goes out of the room. Doctor comes in and says all other reports look fine. You should come in every week to check on the progress of your leg. You need to be very careful as it has broken again without healing the first time around. Ishita says she will take care of it. Raman is silently listening to the conversation when the doctor was about to leave he asks him how long will it take to heal the doctor says usually it about 6 to 8 weeks but this might take a bit longer and no weight should be put on that leg. Raman tells him he will take care of her so that her leg heals properly this time around.

Mihir comes to take both them home. The first question IshRa asks is how are the kids? Mihir says there are fine. The complete the formalities for discharge and Raman brings in the wheel chair and Ishita pouts cutely saying that she thought she got rid of it but it has love for me so it not leaving me. Raman says don't worry madrasan I am there for you if you don't like the wheel chair. Ishita smiles shyly looking at him.

Once they reach the apartment complex Mihir parks the vehicle and brings the wheel chair out Raman remembering Ishita pout picks her up and walks towards the house. Ishita says to him Raman put me on the wheel chair everybody will be there Raman says to her chup you are my wife nobody is going to tell anything and starts walking towards their home.

Amma is standing with aarthi thali along with the whole family seeing Raman walk with Ishita in his hand everyone is happy. Amma takes the aarthi and says to him we have decided that Ishita would spend her days recovering from our house as she needs her amma's care both of them jerk hearing this as they don't want to be separated. Toshjii tells to him what are you thinking her room is ready go and leave her.

Raman says to her I am really sorry amma but I can't leave my wife anywhere in this condition once she gets well she will come to your house so saying he carries Ishita inside their house leaving everyone flabbergasted. Simmi and Rinki are the first one to recover and they rush behind him and says to them what is with you guys after 1 and half years of marriage you guys are behaving like newlyweds carrying her into the house for first time like the graphravesh (the first time when the daughter-in-law enters the house) and teases them for all the small antics they pulled on each other after they confessed their love. Ishita hides her head in his chest due to embarrassment Raman just glares at the duo and walks up to his bedroom kicks the door shut with his leg and places her gently on the bed.

Raman was about to give her the sweet when the door bursts open both the kids rush to their Ishima Raman glares at the kids for a minute but they don't even look at him but Ishita catches him so he quickly changes the expression and asks them to be careful around her.

The kids sit on either side of her bed asking her thousand questions and before she could answer goes to the next question especially Ruhi that is when they realize the little girl had put a brave act in front of them but she was scared that something might have happened to her Ishima and she would be left alone. Ishita just picks up Ruhi at the same time Raman is shouting at her pagal aurat what are you doing? Ishita ignores him and picks up Ruhi and hugs her tightly to her chest that is what Ruhi needed for letting go of all the bottled emotions crying on her mother shoulders and asking her promise as not to leave her again like this. Ishita says to her promise but Ru says no make Ru promise so I know you want break it so Ishita makes a Ru promise and tells her I don't like my kids crying so give a big smile. Ru smiles for her.


Adi is still traumatized by the incident and his mother betrayal which is not gone unnoticed by IshRa so to cheer him up she says only today she will make an exception and allow them to play video games for an hour they get excited and rush out of the room deciding what games to play.

Once the kids leave Raman sits beside her and they talk about the kids and decide they still need to continue Adi counseling sessions. Toshjii and amma comes inside the room. Raman is muttering under his breath so that he is not heard why is everyone is barging into our room like it is a dhamashala not giving me peace with my madrasan probably I should kidnap her to have some alone time with her. Toshjii asks what are you muttering puttar. He says nothing and goes out of the room.

Shagun comes to Bhalla house Raman asks what are you doing here get out of my house everyone hearing Raman shout comes to the hall. Toshjii starts shouting at her saying because of you our kids and Ishita lives were put in danger what more do you want from us will you never let us live in peace.

Shagun says to them look I don't want to cause any trouble I just want to see my kids that they are okay then I will leave when Raman was about to answer to her he hears Ishita calling him feebly he stops in the middle of his argument and rushes to her. Shagun is left dumbstruck as she never thought Raman would ignore her while Raman is rushing towards the room everyone hears glass breaking in IshRa bedroom not caring about Shagun everyone rushes to their bedroom.

Shagun walks towards IshRa bedroom the scene which she see there makes her more jealous of Ishita.

Raman is scolding her that she needs to be careful at the same time hugs her gently on the side placing the glass on her lips to drink water from his hands not caring about who is witnessing this action and telling her madrasan if you are not taking care of yourself properly I don't know what I will do yaar. You know I cannot live without you. Neelu clears the broken glass in the room. Everyone is talking at the same time showing concern for Ishita and admonishing her for not taking rest. Kids come inside the room ignoring Shagun they go to Ishita and say to her Ishima you should have called us if you need anything don't strain yourself.

Ishita asks everyone to be quiet and says to them I just wanted water and the glass slipped out of my hands nothing to worry that is when she notices Shagun standing in the doorway. She calls Shagun that is when everyone turns to look at her all the faces which showed love and care for Ishita showed disgust that is when Shagun realizes that this could have been her they would be pampering if she did not go behind false prestige.

Shagun says to her I came to see how my kids are doing they look well. This time around I will put my kids first they are happy with you so I will leave here but this doesn't mean I am extending a hand for friendship remember this I will always hate you as you took what is mine. Remember one thing you can be Ishima but never ma as I am there real mother so saying she walks out of the house her head held high. She drives around sometime aimlessly then she parks her car in a remote parking sport and cries her heart out remembering all the things like Raman unconditional love and Adi blind trust on her which she lost due to her foolishness. She literally breaks down realizing at the same time there is no one to even offer her a comforting word and an image of Ishita surrounded by family pops into her head wishing it could have been her instead of Ishita and dwells on how she ruined her life.

It has been a week since the incident things are settling in their house. Ishita is pampered by everyone off late Raman doesn't care about others teasing him. He is intent on pampering and taking care of her.

Ishita messages she wants to go out with the family. Raman seeing the message immediately arranges for the dinner. Ishita is ready for him wearing a Punjabi suit and waiting for him he brings the flowers and gives it to her but she shows her hair so he places them around her hair and smiles at the beauty complimenting her. They have a fun filled dinner.

When they come back home they do so masti and talk with the family. IshRa are in the bedroom while sleeping Ishita shouts Raman as she is dreaming about pillar falling on her and building in front of her. Raman gets up hearing him call her name and sees that she is sweating and is in some kind of a nightmare because her face shows anguish and lost love. Raman gathers her in his arms soothing her and trying to wake her up from the nightmare slowly Raman voice penetrates to her and she opens her eyes seeing Raman holding her she kisses him all over not seeing where her kiss is landing repeating in between kisses that she loves him. Raman lets her be without interrupting her once; finally when she subsides he asks her what happened.

Ishita says to him she dreamed of the pillar falling on her and thought about all the opportunities she missed showing him how much he meant to her. Raman gathers her in a gentle hug and says to her madrasan sleep well you need all the rest now once you come out of the cast you want be getting any rest. Ishita hides her face in his chest blushing all the way due to his comment.

IshRa are slowly healing each other from the aftermath of the earthquake by their love and support from their family members.


The End.


Kaarthikk I hope you liked this part as well.

Please leave your comments positive and negative criticism both are appreciated.

Thanks,

Maya

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Super update yar perfect a ding and beautifull pic of ishra
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: 12Singmeenu

Super update yar perfect a ding and beautifull pic of ishra


Hi Asha, Thanks
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hi Surya, thanks
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Superb update yaar..I think convo btwn shagun& IshRa in bhalla house s far better than dey showed it in hospital...In the end der s a nice collage of beautiful photos...Overall I m happy...Thanks for accepting my request & writing a story...Hope u ll continue ur other stories which r n halfway rite nw
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Originally posted by: kaa1202

Superb update yaar..I think convo btwn shagun& IshRa in bhalla house s far better than dey showed it in hospital...In the end der s a nice collage of beautiful photos...Overall I m happy...Thanks for accepting my request & writing a story...Hope u ll continue ur other stories which r n halfway rite nw


Hi Kaarthikk,

Thanks for liking it. I wanted more on the show how she compares her life to Ishita but I guess they don't have time to dwell on these matter so I thought I could touch that bit.

The pictures and the Gif's I found them in google so credit goes to up loader I just used them according to my story.

Thanks you for making me write on this topic otherwise I would not have touched on them. I am hoping to update my IshRa Memories by end of this week.


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Posted: 10 years ago
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superb update
n nice ending

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