RANTARA SS - Humnava (chapter 6 @pg 10)

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Rasika9

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Posted: 10 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: jollygrl

Raina beeti jayee...update na aaye...neendiyan aaye...update toh dedo bhai...i mean behen...😆
Aur thanks bolna hai to Di mat boloo...choti behen ki tarah love u di bola...samjhi ya samjhaooo😉

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Sanju

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Posted: 10 years ago

#12

Hey shivi
Finally I got some time to comment 😃
Rantara in a music group? 😃 it will be interesting to read 😃
Very well written 👏
Please continue soon ⭐️
Love and Hugs,
Sanju 😃

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Shivangi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#13

CHAPTER-2 Part I
Raghu dropped evry1 except Yash. He notic'd dat raghu is quiet today.
Yash- u okay??
Raghu- hmm..
Yash- ohkay.. so whats d matter dude??
Raghu-Nothing jst feeling hell tired nd...
Yash- nd???
Raghu- nd u knw what..
Yash- nd miss'g her...
Raghu sighed nd stopped d car. he den placed his head on d steering.
Yash- u still luv her..
Raghu lifted his head up nd looked aT him
Raghu- I'l love her TiLl My LaSt BrEaTh
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Shivangi

@shivi808

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Posted: 10 years ago

#14

There was a silence for few seconds. Then[] yash- yar chal vo cafe chaltey h..
Raghu- cafe!! like seriously nd kyun??
Yash- bcz both of us are tired tou i think k we need a coffee.. bta? am i ryt or am i ryt??
Raghu smiled nd said- Not bad actually.. chal
Nxt moment they're in Cafe. Raghu was look'g here nd there when he saw a couple. He heard dem
Boy- i promise u baby. Trust me..
Grl- nd u nvr fullfilled ur single promise. Huh!!😡
Raghu chuckled lightly.
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Shivangi

@shivi808

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Posted: 10 years ago

#15

III
Raghu turned his head to other side ven he saw another couple. The boy was try'g to b lit'l intimate vid grl but she wasnt feel'g comfortable. Ven he was kiss'g near her neck she pushed him slightly. He became angry nd may b dey had argument. Dey came bck to their table. She was try'g to pacify him bt he wasnt ready to listen her. Raghu shook his head in disbelief. Den he heard Yash- yar its too boring here.. Raghu koi ga K suna de yar..
Raghu- OK.. he lookd at botH couples.

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Shivangi

@shivi808

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Posted: 10 years ago

#16

IV
He took his guitar & started to sing
Vo.. ooo...
Aasaan nhi yahan aashiq ho jana, palkon pe kaanton ko sajanaa...
Aashiq ko milti hai gham ki saugatein, sb ko na milta ye khazana..

He came to 1st couple nd sang
Vaado se agey, baaton se aagey, niklo zara tum kabhi
ye to hai shola,ye hai chingari, ye hai jawaan aag bhi
vo... oo..

Everyone was enjoying his song. Yash was just smiling nd sipping his coffee.
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Shivangi

@shivi808

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Posted: 10 years ago

#17

V
Then he came near to the 2nd couple. He looked at d boy nd sang
Jismon ke pichey bhagey ho firtey, utro kabhi rooh mein..
hota kya aashiq, kya aashiqui hai hogi khabar tb tumhe..
Vo.. oo.. oo..
The boy realised his mistake nd apologised to d grl. She smiled nd den he kissed her palms. She was blush'g. Raghu smiled fully.Yash came to him. He said in his ears- Agar aapne apne Cupid character ka role play kr dya ho to chalein ghar?
Raghu-zaruri h?
nd both of dem laugh'd.

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Rasika9

@Rasika9

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Posted: 10 years ago

#18

Yaar shivi...the ss is becoming more interesting... Nice concept... Do continue soon...i m in love with cute cute installment wale updates...

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Sanju

@Sanjh30

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+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#19

Hey shivi 😃
It's a saying,big surprises comes in little packages. 😃
Your tiny updates are full of surprises 😃
I'm loving it 😉
Very well written 👏
Please continue soon 😃
Love and hugs,
Sanju 😃

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Nethravathi Jagadish

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Posted: 10 years ago

#20

Shivi darling that was superb👏👏👏

Sorry yaar late comments keliye. Was busy with exams

Coming to the updates. ARYANS😃 Naam hi kitna pyaara hain Group ka. Music band😃 I love music aur jab Raghu ho uss music band main toh sone pe suhaaga hoga😃😃😃

The girl which Raghu was talking about vo Antara hain kya? But what has happened? Raghu sad kyu hain?😭😭😭

Jaldi update kar

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