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Posted: 10 years ago
#71
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Originally posted by: janani_divan

Wow sushu im speechless now...;-(;-(;-(
A big Huggie to u...:-)
U R THE FIRST PERSON IN THIS FORUM ,WHO MENTIONED MY NAME AND GAVE A ONE PART OF YOUR STORY FOR ME:-*:-*:-*:-*

LOVE U MERA BACHA...:-):-):-)
I NEVER EVER FORGOT THIS DAY SUSHU...THANKS FOR BRILLIANT STORY :-)

COMING TO THE POINT:

RKB MISSION STARTED...SO ISHITA ,BE READY TO SMASH BABY;-);-);-);-)

when she saw TORTURE KUMAR IN CABIN::-/:-/%-)%-)

U she whispered,rooted,ishita's eyes widened,the blood in her veins stopped for a nano second and then rushed to her face...surprisingly,the EARTH DID NOT HEAVE:-O:-O:-O
yes ishita is shocked to see raman and she have a MIXTURE OF FEELING IN HER HEART...;-(;-(

offcourse after so many years,an unbidden&intense wave of" PLEASURE ROSE INSIDE ISHITA"

TURN ON TORTURE KUMAR MODE:
YES,ME U'RE WORST NIGHTMARE COME TRUE!
;-);-);-);-);-)
yaar i enjoying this torture kumar bhalla...honestly i love him in this attire;-);-);-)

At last ishita composed to get out of site from raman...
Ha ha ha SILLY RANI...U DONT KNOW ABOUT OUR RAVAN KUMAR:-D:-D

quick action by raman,"Not so fast,im not done!get used to this..when i say jump you jump and sit when i say so!"

AND WHAT IF I DON'T ?ISHITA HUSKILY SHOT BACK...

Elo damage kiya tumne kudko... The words just slipped out,LIKE A PAIR OF STARTLED FEET ON A BANANA PEEL.:-D:-D:-D:-D

yea chup nahi bet sakti hai kya?sleeping TIGER KUMAR KO JAGATHI HAI KYA KOYI;-);-);-)

so,in past ...ishita madam kuch damage kiya raman ko.dil dhuka diya..she hurt raman wantedly..
Raman want this time she will pay her OLD DEBTS ..

I dnt think so raman harm ishita family,he NEVER DO THAT..HE JUST WANT ANSWERS FROM HER...THATS THE THEME...OF HIS.:-P
Raman trapped her brother:-O:-O
after taking files from raman...ishita's trembling hands,gave raman some degree of satisfaction.LIKE A TIGER STUDING ITS PREY,OR BATMAN WATCHING ROBIN(oops!wrong emotion)
LIKE BATMAN WATCHING THE JOKER:-D:-D:-D:-D


intelligent women ishita...what do u want?

ANYTHING...KATHAM SAB KUCH KATHAM...BOLENESE PEHELE SOCHA KARO MADAM..

RAMAN THO LATTO KUMAR HOGAYA ABH...;-);-);-)

i enjoyed the ishita self talking,when she will thinking about raman and simone...

Bada bhagwan,chota super shaitan!ishita mind was waking up!

Ishita ne namkaran diya raman ko...SHAITAN KUMAR.;-);-):-D:-D:-D:-P:-P

ishita glared at simone,kamini budhiya or paapi paet ka sawal hai:-D:-D:-D

my point of view raman planning to torture ishita in the way of bringing
ROCHAK CHOWDHARY...near to her...and he want to torture like this,bcoz ishita never bare
ROCHAK CHOWDHARY near to her...(brother of PARAM):-D:-D:-D:-D

precap is damm intresting...so now ishita want to fight back..
Wow !u still think i'm the MEENA KUMARI of the family..:-)

I LOVE SOME LINES ...SHORT BUT SO MEANING
'i will dish and u will take,get it.
Never turning back what she spoke to him"fine,u dish,i'll take quitely."

till now raman not forgot ishita,even he remember and smell her darn perfume:-)

sorry if i wrote any mistake in my comment...once again thanks for this update..and thanks for pm and thanks for wonderful story
At last thanks for your friend request..:-)


OMG janani mujhe comment se marna chahti hai kya😆
itna lambi no one has given me 😆
thank u for your analysis helps me improve the story!!!
You have clearly explained the points so well...
U R THE FIRST PERSON IN THIS FORUM ,WHO MENTIONED MY NAME AND GAVE A ONE PART OF YOUR STORY FOR ME:-*:-*:-*:-* well its because you are the one who showed so much interest and send me pm so i had to dedicate the part to you...😃

Love you too darling!!!
am updating now do leave such a huge comment its a boost for me to update sooner😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
#72

Part 9

Raaz

Dodging the ususal morning meet and greet, as the rest of the staff came in, Ishita fled to the sanctuary of her room. Shaking, she collapsed in the chair. No big D!' she chanted feverishly, pressing the cold steel of the stapler to her burning cheeks.

Didn't know you had a thing for staplers!' teased Shagun, sitting her oversized bag on the floor. Ishita continued squashing steel props against her face, eyes frantic but mouth silent.

Concerned, Shagun came over, "Ishu, are you alright?'

He's back Shags! He's back and he wants to kill me!' Ishita blurted out. Who knows, if everything failed, Raman might resort to the unthinkable.

Shagun instantly caught on. Raman's back! You met him?'

Ishita forcefully bobbed her head.

Where did you meet him?'

Just now I met him in Mrs Shukla's office. It was actually an ambush. He's not working alone.' Ishita's finger now strangled a miniature acupuncture ball.

What was he doing in Mrs Shukla's office at this hour? Isnt she a little too old for him.'

Your not helping! Do you want to hear the rest or not?' ishita sailed a nasty glare in her friend's directions.

sorry, go on; tell me everything from the start! I am all ears.'

Raman!' Ishu corrected herself. Raman Bhalla has bought AAA, as in us. He is our new president, Deo and god. His first kaali kurthuth of the day was to demote our friggin department and make Roach our boss!'

no kidding!' Shagun breathed.

Ishita went on to regale the other girl with all that had occurred between Raman and herself, sans the physical alterations. The memory of it still caused her heart to slam ferociously against the ribcage.

he cant do that... no way missy, he cant! Shagun was boiling. Where does he get off being so mean? Ill bloody set him right. Raman should het his facts straight.' She headed for the cabin door.

Shagun!' Ishita rotted, forcing herself between the door and her mulish friend. You will do no such thing! You sit down right now! I MEAN IT!'

are you going to be the martyr again? For these uncaring folks? again Ishu? Shagun's expression and voice, gave a new meaning to the word displeased'.

I gave my word!' Ishita beseeched.

so now, even your family will take the brickbats; suffer consequences of a mistake you dint commit. What is wrong with you? At least think of poor Brother'

Raman will never harm dada. I am sure of that. He's just baiting me,' Ishita voiced, softly. She silently prayed; murugan. Please do not let me be wrong about this.

Why wont you tell him the truth? Its time to come clean,' Shagun said.

I disagree! No one needs to know anything.' Ishita grabbed Shagun and propelled her away from the door. Shagun reluctantly let her.

I'm sure, in real life even Meena Kumari and Greta Grabo weren't half as bad as you. Life had become a series of listless ways unlike the chain of one moment leading to another. Once upon a time, isn't that what you considered it to be?' Shagun rambled even though she let Ishita sit her down.

Shags!' Ishita cooed, her tough as nails friend's concerned shining through.

You behave like a zombie! It hurts me to see you like this. Do you have any idea how many times your mom has called me to find out why you behave the way you do. At one point, she even feared you were suicidal.

Wow! And you think I'm the Meena Kumari of the family?' Ishita grinned.

Please Ishu! For the last time, get rid of this blasted guilt. Sort out this tangled, and idiotically complicated, mess of your own making.'

I know you mean well Shags, but please give me some time I promise if things get out of hand I, myself, shall puke the truth on the man.'

pakka, swear on your dead cat?' Shagun scorned, well aware that Ishita steered cleared of cats, dead or alive.

Ishita simply nodded. For a few seconds, the two friends stared at each other. Shagun capitulated. Fine! Have it your way. But for once, put yourself above the other mortals, you fool!'

I hope that includes you also,' relaxing, Ishita teased. Shagun flipped her the bird'.

Oh! So much drama in the morning, I need to calm myself,' Shagun said, groping inside her bag.

Oh, please don't use this as an excuse to light up another cancer stick,' Ishita protested.

Got it! One wont do any harm,' Shagun drawled on her way out.

Try four.. you crazy cow,' Ishita retorted, opening a parle G packet as she slipped back in her chair.

Don't exaggerate... old maid!' Shagun was a year older than Ishita.

Pronto, Shagun's head popped back in the room. Ishita glanced up, questioningly. Is he still that hunk-a-licious?'

Rolling tongue in her cheek, ishita growled, even better!'

Ha!' Shagun exclaimed. Maybe all is not lost with Raman's coming back. After a long time, Ishu actually has some colour in her cheeks,' she voiced to her zippo.

Precap- for a second, everyone and everything else faded away. all Raman saw was Ishita and all she felt was him.

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Sorry for the short update!! wanted to give you guys a update so!! do comment

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Posted: 10 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: sush_avina

😃

OMG janani mujhe comment se marna chahti hai kya😆
itna lambi no one has given me😆
thank u for your analysis helps me improve the story!!!
You have clearly explained the points so well...
<font color="#ff0000">U R THE FIRST PERSON IN THIS FORUM ,WHO MENTIONED MY NAME AND GAVE A ONE PART OF YOUR STORY FOR ME:-*:-*:-*:-* </font><font color="#0000ff">well its because you are the one who showed so much interest and send me pm so i had to dedicate the part to you...😃</font>

<font color="#0000ff">Love you too darling!!!</font>
<font color="#0000ff" size="2">amupdatingnow do leave such a huge comment its a boost for me to update sooner😉</font>


sure my darling...waiting for TORTURE KUMAR;-)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: janani_divan


sure my darling...waiting for TORTURE KUMAR;-)


😆 have update check up
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Posted: 10 years ago
#75
K.. This is so different.. Shagun and Ishita are friends n Ishita and Raman are enemies...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#76
Aww...dis is so lovely took d entire day to read dis 😊😳 Keep going gal!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#77
Wow i love the girls chat:-)
shagun is so concern about her best friend..:-)

mrs.shukla is little bit older to raman...:-D:-D:-D
shagun be na kuchi bhi pak raha hai:-D:-D:-D
Mrs.SHUKLA AND RAMAN...ITS CRACKING ME..I JUST ROUND UP THE IMAGINATION OF mrs.shukla and raman...:-D:-D

Shagun trying to bright up her friend mood:-)

she is very concerned about ishita,bcoz she know HER FRIEND NEVER AND EVER BE WRONG.

OMG SHAGUN KNOW EVERYTHING ...HOW ISHITA TAKE DASTRIC STEP TO LEAVE RAMAN .:-(

I Think future mai shagun split the whole truth to raman.just my prediction:-)

SO ISHITA IN THYAGI RANI MODE TO PROTECT HER FAMILY OR SOME OTHER REASONS..:-)

she is backmailed by any1 to leave raman or she herself take the step to leave raman for his betterment:-)

lots of elements to reveal in this:-)

I MISSED TORTURE KUMAR IN THIS UPDATE..BUT THE UPDATE IS ALL ABOUT HIM..:-)

ishita changed alot ,she is not a meena kumari anymore.

E BATH KUDKO BOL KAR SAMJA RAHI HO ISHITA BACHA:-)

SHE NEVER CHANGE AT ALL,IF she change?raman does't effect her.but raman is effecting HER BADLY;-)


SHE IS NOW FEVERISH ;-);-)
;-)ETHANA PROXIMITY NAHI BEAR KAR PAIYEGI ISHITA NE..DAILY KAISAI KAR PAYEGA?;-);-);-)

Now how ishita will handle raman ;-);-)..we readers want to wait and read ur next update..:-)

caption RAAZ HAI,BUT RAAZ ABHI THAK KULLA NAHI:-)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#78
another amazing part too love it ishra enemy wow cont
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Posted: 10 years ago
#79

Originally posted by: janani_divan

Wow i love the girls chat:-)
shagun is so concern about her best friend..:-)

mrs.shukla is little bit older to raman...:-D:-D:-D
shagun be na kuchi bhi pak raha hai:-D:-D:-D
Mrs.SHUKLA AND RAMAN...ITS CRACKING ME..I JUST ROUND UP THE IMAGINATION OF mrs.shukla and raman...:-D:-D

Shagun trying to bright up her friend mood:-)

she is very concerned about ishita,bcoz she know HER FRIEND NEVER AND EVER BE WRONG.

OMG SHAGUN KNOW EVERYTHING ...HOW ISHITA TAKE DASTRIC STEP TO LEAVE RAMAN .:-(

I Think future mai shagun split the whole truth to raman.just my prediction:-)

SO ISHITA IN THYAGI RANI MODE TO PROTECT HER FAMILY OR SOME OTHER REASONS..:-)

she is backmailed by any1 to leave raman or she herself take the step to leave raman for his betterment:-)

lots of elements to reveal in this:-)

I MISSED TORTURE KUMAR IN THIS UPDATE..BUT THE UPDATE IS ALL ABOUT HIM..:-)

ishita changed alot ,she is not a meena kumari anymore.

E BATH KUDKO BOL KAR SAMJA RAHI HO ISHITA BACHA:-)

SHE NEVER CHANGE AT ALL,IF she change?raman does't effect her.but raman is effecting HER BADLY;-)


SHE IS NOW FEVERISH ;-);-)
;-)ETHANA PROXIMITY NAHI BEAR KAR PAIYEGI ISHITA NE..DAILY KAISAI KAR PAYEGA?;-);-);-)

Now how ishita will handle raman ;-);-)..we readers want to wait and read ur next update..:-)

caption RAAZ HAI,BUT RAAZ ABHI THAK KULLA NAHI:-)


janani u steal my heart dude. .. ur comments r so much worth my updates...
Thank u for it..
I love the caption 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
#80

Originally posted by: Ishraru

Aww...dis is so lovely took d entire day to read dis 😊😳 Keep going gal!!

haha ty for sparing time Vanshita (I hope am right)

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