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Akanksha Sinha

@AkankshaENRIQUE

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Posted: 10 years ago

#471

Hey neetu...
Just read the chapter 18 to 21...
😳
As usual they r like u... i mean awesome... 👏
😳
Jalal jealous... 😆
Poor jo... 😭
Update soon... yr... plz plz plz... 😃
Aur thoda long yr... 😉

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Neetu

@NSKay

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+ 11

Posted: 10 years ago

#472

Originally posted by: AkankshaJA
Hey neetu...
Just read the chapter 18 to 21...
😳
As usual they r like u... i mean awesome... 👏
😳
Jalal jealous... 😆
Poor jo... 😭
Update soon... yr... plz plz plz... 😃
Aur thoda long yr... 😉

thanks a lot darloo for the lovely cmnt...😳
will try dearo...😊

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Arifa Sultana Shefa.

@Magpie_

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#473

Originally posted by: Monucute
shefu 😕

what happened? 😕

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Neetu

@NSKay

Rocker

+ 11

Posted: 10 years ago

#474

Originally posted by: PRIAAMUNDHRA
So finally Jalal has started feeling for her... really good update...

thankew so much🤗

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Neetu

@NSKay

Rocker

+ 11

Posted: 10 years ago

#475

Originally posted by: paridhiloveu
Neetu update na 😭

updating darloo

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Neetu

@NSKay

Rocker

+ 11

Posted: 10 years ago

#476

Originally posted by: ...Shefa...

what happened? 😕

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Barnali

@Paradise_1

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+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#477

good update monu!
jalal has started feeling for her!
update now!
sorry for late comment!

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Neetu

@NSKay

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+ 11

Posted: 10 years ago

#478

...Chapter - 22...

It's time for
confronting her
husband...
Jalal walked towards the room fidgeting with different thoughts in his mind, and with great awkwardness he opened the door... Only to find jodha who was all set to leave the room... "umm... Jodha..." but before he can say anything... "sorry for inconvenience i have caused you jalal, i am going to my room..." she said with a plain expression... Jalal looked deep in her eyes to find atleast a single emotion but faced failure... He just left her way... Jodha straight went to her room without wasting a single glance at jalal... Jalal was miles away from her pain... He was confused by her behaviour... Means seriously how can she be normal after that incident? Chah... Chuck it yarr... He mentally chided himself and called off the day...
As soon as jodha reached her room, she broke down in the emotions which she was holding back for so long... She was crying and sobbing badly... She can't even become comfortable in his presence then how will she spend her whole life with him?? Pain was unbearable, heart was broken beyond repair this time, happiness got vanished, gloom sadness are my only my companion And due to weakness and utter pain she fainted...
The young lad was just turning and tossing in the bed in a attempt to catch sleep... But sleep was miles away from his eyes... Frustrated he get up from the bed and fetch his mobile... Went to balcony and opened a snapshot... "hey jo, see what you have done to me" and smiled sleepishly... Looking at the selfie in which both were holding an ice-cream... Jo was licking it...
"ahh... You are looking cute jo... Vese i have a surprise for you... Be ready Miss Jodha..." and again started to adore the photo...

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Edited by Monucute - 10 years ago