Arjun Draupadi SS: The Immortal Love (Part 3 and 4 posted) - Page 49

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: unishaz

awesome. love it. thanks for pm

Thank you Unisha! Glad you liked it!😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: avishkatagore

Omg she lost her baby...this was an awesome chapter...draupadi is a true inspiration. She is an epitome of strength... I just loved the way govind described her as a valiant warrior, perhaps the best ever seen... I am totally mesmerised...loved the update

Thank you Avishka, for all your lovely comments on my stories!🤗
Of course, she is someone who is idolized not without a reason. She is definitely a true inspiration as you rightly said!
So glad that you liked the equation between Draupadi and Govind. He considered a warrior and thus trusted her to fight the battles she went through with amazing strength and valour!😃
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Zeehana

Liked to read Arjun's POV

Great update
But sad seeing how much Draupadi is going through right now

Thanks Zeehana! So happy that you liked the update😊
Yes, this part always makes me go through unexplained emotions and I can't even imagine what she must have went through! We always underestimate her strength and pain which she faced with such great courage.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: panchali12

Very very nice

Its sad to know their loss but the feelings u expressed in both POV is marvelous
Can u pls give an update of only ArDi alone or can add in small roles others n they both r talking about that scene in hastinapur .😉
Pls don't end this SS .. 😭
U are an excellent writer
Update sooon😊

Panchali, thank you loads! I am overwhelmed with your response towards my stories!🤗
I am really glad that you liked the chapters to such an extent!😊
I will definitely try to incorporate the scene very soon in the two chapters that are to come, or maybe in the epilogue, but that's a gray idea that you've given to me!😳
Thank you so much dear but I am afraid I'll have to end the story since its a SS and I really don't have the strength to write the scene where her children die and the war! Honestly, I even did the Cheer Haran because of my readers' request. So sorry dear, but of course, I'll be updating the FF regularly!😃
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: aishwarya48

Are!!! Such wonderful updates!
So sorry that I couldn't comment...so caught up with work here in u.s

I have like 48 unread PM's right now from 2 days 😭 oops😛
I promise my long comments will come back soon...But I'll tell you that it was a fantastic update!
Res for all the rest for now😃

Thank you Aishwarya!🤗
Oh I can very well understand how difficult you would be in the U.S.!
Glad you liked the updates and I'll be waiting for you to unres!😉
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Nona_k

amagin n suprb updt..
loved it..

beautifully writtn

updt d next soon
waitn...

Thanks so much Khushboo!😃
So glad that you liked the update! Will definitely update soon!😳
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: LiveYourDream

Was traveling Navu so could not comment earlier

Drau's POV
What a powerful and poignant chapter
You captured her emotions so beautifully
The epic does not do justice to what she must have gone through but you certainly gave it a good shot... Great job👏

I am glad that you're back!😆
Thank you so much Mamta, for such supportive and amazing comments!🤗
So glad that you liked my attempt of portraying Draupadi's emotions!😊

Originally posted by: LiveYourDream

Arjun's POV

Another lovely piece of writing
Though I an not too happy with Arjun at this particular juncture of the story you have described this very well from his perspective
If he feels even one tenth the pain and humiliation that Drau went through he might redeem himself. I want him to really work hard and long to earn her forgiveness😡

I definitely think likewise! Really didn't support or even accept what Arjun did but as I got into the depth of ArDi and read up on them, I just thought that it would be nice to bring forward what I perceive must have been the root cause of his silence. And I am really glad that you liked what I wrote!😃
Surely, he'll have to work because none of his excuses will be acceptable and I have an inkling that maybe he knew that in the epic too!
Anyway, thanks so much Mamta!🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: SethuParvathi

navuuu...i just watched the mahabharata in front of my eyes...dats all what i can say!!! hats off dear👏

Wow! This really means a lot to me Sethu! More than you can imagine!
Thank you tons and loads!🤗
So glad that you liked the chapters so much!😃
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sirivalli.t

Awesome update...

Loved it...
Very well written...especially arjun's pov...u r an amazing writer dear...

Thank you dear!❤️
Glad that you liked the chapters and Arjun's POV too since it's so important! Really happy that you are liking my stories!😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
this is heart wrenching!
read it all in one go!
the intensity of d last two updates is scary..d pain dat dey went through..u managed to perfectly highlight the pain n emotions of draupadi n even arjun!!
the way arjun realises the horrible disaster dat happened in their lives after they lost their child n realising how he held on to his childhood principles only to be hurt n punished so badly is really bad!

u write really nice!..just wonderful👏

plz update soon!!
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