A DARK LOVE STORY OF SANDHR-DARK FF THREAD 1 COMPLETED - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
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thanks a lot dear😉😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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THANK YOU SO MUCH GUYS FOR YOUR APPRECIATION😊😊😊
sorry for late update...now here is chapter1
ENJOY IT AND PLZ DO TELL ME HOW'S IT

CHAPTER 1

When sanyukta enters in his cabin she was shocked to see the cabin, as in her whole life she has never seen such a large and beautiful cabin.The cabin was well furnished,ever thing was at its place,there were thousand of rewards in the name of Randhir singh shekhawat,some were of best enterprenuer and many more.There were pictures of him neither was of his smile.She was awe to see all of them.By looking at all those things she was sure that the RANDHIR SINGH SHEKHAWAT was very hardworking,punctual of his time,likes to keep his things at the right place.

HIS CABIN


Randhir's pov

When I had entered into my office,I don't know today's whether has it's own epitome.I was feeling refresh after so many long yrs.I was stopped I my track that today's office air was different from other days,it was like after today everything will change,my world will be different from nowonwards.Wait what am thinking I don.t like changes and for me nothing will change,I will not never ever let tht happen.

His dress was somewhat like ths


His pov was disturbed when a knock came in.He says"come in"(not knowing tht change has been occur)

The girl was standing in front of him wearing full sleeves salwar suit,from which her curves were clearely

Visible to him.

Her dress was somewhat like this


In his first time he was seeing the girl in such simple dress but looking ethereal,breath-taking.He was somewhere shocked to see such innocent girl in ths fast ruling world.

Sanyu-goodmorning sir

Rd-hm good morning,ms(keen to know)

Sanyu-sanyukta agrawal(smiling)

Rd-yes ms agarwal,have a seat. She sits in front of him nervously.

So MS agrawal u want to be part of this company,by working for RS-he says

Sanyu-yes sir

Rd-I have read your report and I must say u r a very hardworking girl.And I hope tht u will be able to take care of RS and its staff well.

Sanyu-thank you sir(get relax but got shocked to listen his next words)

Rd-but u will work as my PA(smirking insidely)

Sanyu-but sir I have applied for COO(Chief Operating Officer)

Rd-I know tht ms .agrawal but I cannot give my company's state in such a newborn hands who does not have any experience in any company.(little fuming by her rejection)

Sanyu-but(he interrupted)

Rd-I haven't completed yet ms.agarwal ,I don't like people cutting in between me.So I was saying tht (getting up from his chair buttoning his coat and comes to her and lowers down to her level closer to her face)first u have to show me tht u r well disciplined and well qualified for this job.Then only I will make u COO.

Sanyu-for how much time sir(scaring and lowering down her face)

Rd-( making her face upwards by his index finger) for 3 months

Her proximity was making him loosing in his control.He was feeling like to take her here and then.But he has to make himself understand and the he stand up.

Rd-now u may go ms.agrawal from tomorrow u have to be on time i.e sharp 9:00am (sharply)

Sanyu-ok sir

Rd-hmm

She let his cabin and was breathingly heavily like she has stopped her breathing for many hours.

SANYU POV

Now I have to work as his PA.Pata nhi tera kya hoga sanyu ?(biting her nails)she left the office and goes towards her home not knowing a person was seeing her every reaction from cctv and tht was none other than THE RANDHIR SINGH SHEKHAWAT

Rd-(smirkingly and enjoying her reaction)THIS IS JUST THE BEGINNING MS.AGRAWAL OF OUR"UNKNOWN RELATIONSHIP".



GUYS PLZ PLZ DO LIKE IT...I KNOW KI YEH BAHUT JYADA GANDA THA KYONKI YEH MERA PEHLE ATTEMPT JAI TOH PLZ DO LIKE IT...


Edited by ritikaagrawal - 10 years ago
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Aiyoo! Moi the first one here??? Like really??
*jumps up and down*
*falls off the bed*
Ouch! I get it! I'm the first one here... Unbelievable!

*wears specks on the rim of her nose* coming to my review.
This chapter is pretty short but a lovely and mesmeric chapter nonetheless.
Portrayal of Randhir's character was fantastic and his description was so tempting.
Sanyukta's characterization is also adorable specially her biting nails in utter anxiety and that little tinge of defiance made it more interesting.
Oh my!! So Randhir is already head over heels for Sanyukta... Well, this sounds intriguing now.
It'll be so damn interesting to know how Randhir will handle his obvious attraction for Sanyukta when she'll be around him, so near.
The contents of the first chapter came off as a real surprise to me, a pleasant surprise to be specific.
I'm eagerly waiting for the next chapter.
Do update it pretty soonish!!

Regards
Keya
Edited by .forevermine. - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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thanks for your comment😊
i will try to unres it in second chapter sweetie
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I read the prologue and the character sketch in one go .
It was brilliant.
Coming to first chap the update is marvelous.
Sandhir's first meetig ,interesting.
He couldn't escape from Sanyukta's charm and beauty.
Their interview convo was amazing,gibbering with each other for the position b/w PA and COO.
Impatient to read their second encounter
plz update soon the next part and pm me.
I am sending u buddy request😛😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Lunalovegood

I read the prologue and the character sketch in one go .

It was brilliant.
Coming to first chap the update is marvelous.
Sandhir's first meetig ,interesting.
He couldn't escape from Sanyukta's charm and beauty.
Their interview convo was amazing,gibbering with each other for the position b/w PA and COO.
Impatient to read their second encounter
plz update soon the next part and pm me.
I am sending u buddy request😛😃




thanks a lot dear i will try to update it on sunday probably
but thnks for appreciation😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome
superb
interesting prolongue
continue asap :))
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey yr u were calling it crap
This was damn awsme
Perfect
I so loved it


Boss employee love story
This is gone be so much fun
Sanyu mesmerised with rd cabin interiors
Rd is so right from now onwards everything will be change
He was so attracted to her

What is he planning
Sanyu rd pa
For sure sum thing is going in his mind

Update soon
Wtng


Love u
Keep smiling
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: anu_anya

awesome
superb
interesting prolongue
continue asap :))



hey dear i have already update 1st chapter do read it
by the way thanks to u😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#20
Awesome update.loved it
pls cont soon

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