FF: Jaane Doh Naa Epilogue Pg 55 [Sept 12,'13]

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luvbug

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Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#431

re-read this story and enjoyed every bit...thanks so much for the story...👍🏼 😃

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kclovearshi

@kclovearshi

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#432

Lovely story Archi!!

Loved how you gave justice to Khushi which was missing in the show!! You made her strong who did not forgive easily which was a natural thing..

Loved a strong Anjali who was her own person and not clinging on her chotey. I loved how they both understood each other and found their own happiness in due time almost simultaneously!!

And what I can say about Ayesha!! She was your own creation and a near perfect one at that.

Loved everything about her including her playing cupid.. And the showdown with Nayan on her lawsuit..it was awesome 👍🏼

Haaye..finally Khushi teaching a lesson to a dumb Arnav about Anjali living in her own place!! awesome 👍🏼

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Krazy4arshi

@Krazy4arshi

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#433

Hi Archi! I found this story a couple of days back and couldn't stop reading the chapters, it was so addicting! you wrote the emotional turmoil within the leads beautifully, and made their journey so believable. I really like your khushi so much better than the one in the show. Ayesha was my fav character in this story. She was like a breath of fresh air and hey I think every girl needs an Ayesha in their life! You broke Anjali down and built her up into someone u can love and respect. And smart, simple and unpretentious Aman for Ayesha...lol I like that couple the best. Thank you for this lovely story. Really enjoyed it.

Mel

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SharuAG

@SharuAG

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#434

I saw this story few days back. This is an amazing story, the characters are well defined and you really know what you wanted to bring out from each character. I have read few stories of Arshi. Among the few I read, you are one among the best novice that I have come across. Your writing is superb. Plus I love when writers bring a fierce female character you can beat and at the same time challenge the male character.

There were few chapters, which I could not understand the underline message, due to be a total foreigner towards your culture. I am not an Indian, and have no relative collection. But I do understand your language but not much of your culture.

What I admire about you is, you completed your story. No matter how busy you were with your studies and other stuffs, you find time to write to give a competed story.

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cherrybloom1

@cherrybloom1

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#435

absolutely loved this story!

great job done with it :D

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Sobhan006

@Sobhan006

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#436

I've read two of your ff and this amazingly superb! So much of pain, sentiment and interesting moments. It's a big relief to read a completed ff as you don't have to wait for any updates but still I was so nervous till I go to the next chapter.

I love this strong Khushi and later changed lovely Arnav. Also liked the bit that anjali got married again finding her true love. I felt sad for Ayesha but she was too annoying sometimes... May be life changed her to be that way...bubbly though

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nihasan

@nihasan

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#437

Truly truly beautiful

read it all in one go..

loved the strong anjali,a stubborn khushi,a repenting arnav n most of all..AYESHA..

One of the best stories that I have ever read

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rn94

@rn94

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#438

superb story. read it one go.
it is one of the best stories i have read. loved it.

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Manishi1

@Manishi1

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#439

Superb story. Read it one go. Your writing is composed, easy and all characters are strong and defined so well. Loved the whole journey. 👏👏👏👏

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Chanyaforever

@Chanyaforever

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#440

This is clearly one of the best completed stories I've read this year! Thanks so much for this one...
How and where to beginn: well, first of all what I really liked was the way Arnav and Khushi expressed their feelings and especially the hurt they went through... Then the comprehension they really love each other trully and madly! This story is written in a way thay the reader think it is actually reality! No cheesy dialogues or exagerations in expressions!
The family reunion... yes! That is exactly how everyone should have felt. I cannot thank you how amazing this chapters were.
Finally her best friend Ayesha, my favorite! Caring and supporting but honest, the way a friend should be.
A very mature Arshi story that is exactly why I very much recommend this FF. I laughed, I cried and I felt every emotions the protagonists went through. Exactly the way it should be.
Kudos to the writer!