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before I post my comment on the ff... let me say I am sorry for the late reply sushgirl... But like I said with such lovely writing we are spoiled for choice to what to say... well what can I say such a lovely chapter form our sweet writer... Keep such lovely posts coming...😊
Know back to the ff... well what can I say... It was such an emotional yet sweet filed saaz journey... let me just say my favourite part of the ff has to be the whole arzoo and sahir beach scene..how romantic yet spiritual...😳
I loved the way he helped her get over her fear of water and she even managed to bring the child out of him...saaz truly deserved this break I believe after the whole zeenat drama...
Thankyou for bring back that spark in there romance and showing us why arzoo is his true humsafar... A teriffic way to show how sahir is moving on from all his past obsticals...
Hey and before I forget the whole scene with asaharfi was super cute...I love the way you keep her in the picture always...Please show more of her as the story progresses let our cupid shall I say work her magic...
Know back to the serious part of your chapter...Thanks for focusing on sahir and his ammi issue... I loved the way through you gave him the pleasure of family acceptance and love in the form of arzoo ammi... It was so nice to see that you tied in the whole bond of sahir pain with arzoo that evening with the pleasure he had been able to attain by gaining the love of a real mother...thanks for making his tears not go in vain and showing us that sahir still has someone to call his own after the whole betrayal from alvira... I love that his pain has not gone in vain in the last 7 years... A truly beautiful way of showing a start to a ever lasting mother son bond... A round of 👏 is well deserved...
Oh and the cliffhanger yet again with arzoo dadi is a nice twist... I must say I was not expecting that at all..but hey no challenge is to big or small for our sahir to handle... He is after all the shark when it comes to manipulation and handling tricky situations... I must say it was sad to read that dadi asked him to divorce her granddaughter but hey I can see her point of view as well after all she doesn't want to see aroo struggle like her bahu did... I hope sahir is able to win her trust and I hope that she can embrace him like a son that she believed she lost when arzoo abbu left...I literally felt the pain and hurt in her tone of being abandoned... lovely way to write and express that for use to see...
Oh please let us know how he does this soon... well I hope this test in sahir and arzoo love only adds spice and strength to there relationship if you get what I mean...☺️
Thank you to staying true to the show and the journey we could have seen...but hey I hope we get to read of see more about the whole lucknow factory... and how sahir manages to help arzoo achieve her journey... still waiting to see what ideas you have about this... hopefully this will help arzoo heal from her past pains and disappointments...
Please end this cliffhanger soon... I look forward to the next update soon...till the next update happy writing...
Raz 😊
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