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Posted: 11 years ago
#71
awesome update dear. miss d last two update. nevertheless amazing superb update. so rd n sanyukta loves each other but due to misunderstanding they didn't confess there feeling. n now rd is getting married to vidhushi n rd is been hell bent to make sanyu his life. but sanyu has become cold coz of past event. she loves rd beyond limit but don't want to confess coz she don't want another heartbreak. n now parth comes in d picture. an what his connection with sanyu. do update soon. n thanks for d pm.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#72
suphrlyy awhesmm
amagin updt
loved itt 2 da core..
waitn for da nxxt
updt sOonsh
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Posted: 11 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: ritikaagrawal

fabulous story...😉
loving it😊



thankyou ritika

thanks for being such a consistent and lovely reader 😊

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Posted: 11 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: Sarim.fatmi

awesome update dear. miss d last two update. nevertheless amazing superb update. so rd n sanyukta loves each other but due to misunderstanding they didn't confess there feeling. n now rd is getting married to vidhushi n rd is been hell bent to make sanyu his life. but sanyu has become cold coz of past event. she loves rd beyond limit but don't want to confess coz she don't want another heartbreak. n now parth comes in d picture. an what his connection with sanyu. do update soon. n thanks for d pm.



thanks dear

will update asap

and for pm, ur welcome dear

nxt time I want u to comment within 15 min of my update
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Posted: 11 years ago
#75

Originally posted by: Sarim.fatmi

awesome update dear. miss d last two update. nevertheless amazing superb update. so rd n sanyukta loves each other but due to misunderstanding they didn't confess there feeling. n now rd is getting married to vidhushi n rd is been hell bent to make sanyu his life. but sanyu has become cold coz of past event. she loves rd beyond limit but don't want to confess coz she don't want another heartbreak. n now parth comes in d picture. an what his connection with sanyu. do update soon. n thanks for d pm.



thanks dear

will update asap

and for pm, ur welcome dear

nxt time I want u to comment within 15 min of my update ;-)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#76

Originally posted by: Rocking_Angel

suphrlyy awhesmm
amagin updt
loved itt 2 da core..
waitn for da nxxt
updt sOonsh



thanks dear

where were u ?

was genuinely waiting for ur comment
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Posted: 11 years ago
#77

Originally posted by: vidhichaudhury

Superb.loved it
Pls update soon



thanks vidhi

will update asap

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Posted: 11 years ago
#78
Hey...
just read ur ff...
N u know what I actually fell in Love with it...
it is so cute...especially the flashbacks...
sanyukta n her possessiveness towards randhir is just so cuteee...
.but present really makes me sad...
But now that randhir is determined to get sanyu back in his life i.
Sure sab thik ho jayega...bas vidhushi kuch prob na kare...
I just wanted to tell i love this ff...seriously..
Update soon n please pm me..
Lots n lots of love...

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Posted: 11 years ago
#79

Originally posted by: ishq2051

Hey...

just read ur ff...
N u know what I actually fell in Love with it...
it is so cute...especially the flashbacks...
sanyukta n her possessiveness towards randhir is just so cuteee...
.but present really makes me sad...
But now that randhir is determined to get sanyu back in his life i.
Sure sab thik ho jayega...bas vidhushi kuch prob na kare...
I just wanted to tell i love this ff...seriously..
Update soon n please pm me..
Lots n lots of love...



thankyou sooo much dear

hopefully will update today

will definitely pm u

tons of love dear
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Posted: 11 years ago
#80

First of all I want a help.i am searching for a writer who can help me in giving an intresting turn in my ff "u will have to be mine" . if anyone is intrested do tell .

CHAPTER 4


AT PARTH HOUSE

p:sanyu yaar make it fast ,I am dying to eat something good.

S: parth yaar stop shouting and let me concentrate .

Job lagane ke baad I have never cooked toh I think mein thoda thoda bhul gayi hoon.

Parth: jhoothi... bahane mat bana ,

Agar khana accha nahi hua n toh

(seeing sanyu frown)

Kuch nahi dobara try karlena.(and both of them laughed)

After a while

As soon as parth finished the dinner.Sanyukta told him about randhir.

Parth: arey yaar ...why has he returned .

I was having such a great time with u (sanyukta hit him on his chest playfully)

Arey yaar ab randhir aa gaya hai,ab toh phir pehele ki tarah meri importance teri life mein kam ho jayegi.(making a sad face)

PAST

Teacher: so the toppers of class 4th are PARTH and SANYUKTA.congrates to both of them.

Parth and sanyukta were very happy .Parth was expecting that sanyukta would be the first to congratulate hiim but it did not happen ;as soon as the teacher announced the results sanyukta ran towards randhir and hug him tight and as usual they got lost in their own world.

Everytime this only happened. Despite the fact that Parth was the topper ,randhir always remained special for sanyukta .Randhir was parth's best friend and sanyukta was the girl he fell in love at first sight but parth was so unfortunate that his most important friends choose to be with each other and hence were not able to spare time for him.

When this randhir sanyukta controversy happened and randhir left her ,parth became close to sanyukta.He also left the school with sanyukta and both took admission in the same school. . He was her best friend but was never able to take randhir s place ,later with age he realized that his feeling towards sanyukta were nothing but only and only crush .Sanyukta never wished for engineering but for parth it was his passion so parth took admission there and thus had to leave sanyukta but they always stayed in touch ,now he was back to her friend and their friendship had same purity and peace as it had 4 years ago.

PRESENT

Randhir s dad:Beta Mr .Agarwal wants u to go for shopping tomorrow with vidhushi and sanyukta and buy dresses of ur choice for ur roka.

Randhir: (chalo atlast some time with sanyukta ) ok dad.

Morning,9 am

At shopping mall

Vidhushi:hiii randhir.

Randhir: (whose full attension was on her lady) hello vidhushi.Hello sanyukta.

Sanyukta: (not looking at him)Hello randhirji.

Randhir:No need to add jii dear ,just call me randhir.

(before sanyukta can say anything vidhushii replied)

Vidhushi:arey randhir ,let her call u randhirjii only ,afterall u are her jiju ( imagining sanyu saying him jiju was the worst thing he ever imagined in his whole life,this time he wanted to just go to sahil and punch him hard for suggestiing him such a thing that has lead them to such an unbearable situation)

Randhir: vidhushi ,I don't like jii in my surname so sanyukta will call me randhir only.

Sanyukta: (looking straight into his eyes) no problem I will call u jeejajii ( randhir was soo angry listening that world from her mouth that he could murder sahil if he was there at that moment.

AT that moment entered parth

He came to them and wished all.

Randhir was shocked seeing him there.

PAST

Randhir:why are u sooo happy today?

Parth: because yesterday I got to sit with sanyu.

Randhir( not knowing how to deal with his anger) first of all I have told u many times that only I and her family calls her with this name and no one else has the right to call her that) and secondly u got to sit there because I was absent otherwise its only and only my right to sit with my friend.

Parth: but shes mine (randhir glared at him) I mean my friend also.So I can also sit with her .

Randhir : dekh parth u are my best friend so please understand this for the last time that sanyukta is my closest friend and she considers me the same .i do not like someone other that me being close to her .so please maintain peace and stop irritating me with such acts.

Parth: u also listen this very carefully that sanyukta is my friend too and I will never leave her till the time she says me to leave.

After some time

Randhir:STOP talking to parth .

Sanyukta:arey yaar phir se.

Yaar he is also my friend and a nice guy so please stop running after him.

Randhir :he is becoming irritating day by day

Sanyukata: (care to explain look)

Randhir: I feel insecure when he is around u.

Sanyukta: aww.

Yaar randhir he is my friend but u are my special friend . u are most important to me ,so stop bothering about him and also stop bothering him.

PRESENT...in next part.

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