NaBir TS:- Mannat Ch-3[Last]Pg-10 13/5/15 - Page 3

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome 👏
Plz update soon, can't wait for 2nd part
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Originally posted by: ItsMeAarushi

Its awesome..👏 Continue soon..


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Chapter 2

Laxmi was in her room looking after two little babies, which was a tiresome task, dolly came inside the room and laxmi asked her to take care of the two little daughters, whole famiky showered there love on these two afterall, after such a long period of time or we can say after bunty, the family welcomed new babies. Dolly was trying to make them stop crying but like mother and father, the babies are also Hyperactive and naughty,finally nisha came into the room and just with one sight of her they stopped crying,.

Dolly said to nisha, thank god nishu you came or else they would have made new records of crying, like mother like daughters, they are same as you nisha. Nisha smiled and sat on the bed took Reva, in her hand and said no dolly di they are not like me, they are just like thier father, kabir bhivtoh aisa hi tha ziddi. Yes reva and aahaana are nisha's daughters to be precise nisha and kabir's. Dolly smiles and says nisha don't you think kabir should know that he is a father now, it has been 3 months since there birth. Nisha says i know dolly di, but i don't even know if he will accept them, I don't even know if he loved me back then.

I mean yes we become close and infact very close, but that day we were drunk and the next norning he left, maybe he regreted whatever happened between us, maybe he was not sure whether I would aceept it. I don't know di, if we are ment to be toghether then we will meet and if not then i guess I am enough to give a good nurturing to my childrens. Dolly says nisha i know you are enough for them but they need the love of a father too. Even if you will try your level best you can't be a father nishu. I know di nisha said.

-Hotel Room-

Kabir and his mother were having tea, his mother said kabir you are earning so well, its time you should marry, I know that you love her kabir but we don't know whether she loves you or not and in this one year she didn't contacted you even for once. I know mom but I can't destroy someone's life when I know that i won't be able to love that girl. One sided marriages always end up mon. I know kabir but you can't be all alone your entire life his mother said. Kabir smiles and said I am not alone maa, her memories are with me. Kabir we can't live entire live with memories beta his mother said. Kabjr knew she was sonewhere right but will he be able to forgef her, her smile, her antics, her anger, her everything. Kabir said lets go mom we are getting late for temple.

-Gangwal's-

Dadi was ready and was calling everybody to come so they can leave he didn't wanted to be late. Everyboy was downstairs including saurav and dolly, yes they are married after kabir left sumit's truth came infront of everyone and dolly filed a divorce she got a divorce in sex months and after that saurav proposed her and they got marrued with everyone's approval ,now dolly was very happy with her life and husband. Dadi asked ramesh where is nishu and laxmi and the little angles. Ramesh said they are coming, you know maa these little angels always have to do potty at wrong time Everyone laughed. Nisha and laxmu came downstairs with reva and aahaana. They left for the temple. -At Temple- Gangwal's reached the temple and went for the pooja at the same time kabir and his mom also reached there, kabir as he did not believed in pooja and stuff preffered to stay outside while his mother went inside. The pooja was going on and reva was making a fuss so nisha handed her to bunty so he can take her to walk. Bunty was sitting with her at a bench, and was playing with her. Bunty saw something and went to see that puting reva on bench. And he almost forgot her. Kabir's mom came outside and sat on the bench and saw reva there, she thought whose child it can be and why would someone leave a chikd like this. As reva was crying she picked her up and tried to stop her from crying,she waited for someone to come but even after thirty minutes no one came ,she took reva with her to the car and kabir was shicked to see his mom with a child. He asked whose child is this mom, she said I don't do she was on the bench I waited for her mother or father but no one came. Reva was still crying but when she saw kabir she stopped crying suddenly. His mom thought it was a coincidence. After the pooja was over, nishu searched for bunty, but he was nowwhere, when she saw him she went to him and asked where is reva, he got afraid, he told her that he left her on a bench and when he came back she was not there, nisha was afraid, she became panicky, she was shouting at bunty when family reached there, dadi asked what happened nisha why are you shouting at him, nisha was not able to say anything.

Bunty told dadi about whatever happened and nisha was crying by now, dolly said her not to worry and they will find reva. All of them started searching for reva. Nisha's panic was increasing, she was getting odd thoughys but she brushed them away and continued searching. She went out of the temlle to search her, she saw a lady infront of a black car and saw a baby in her hand, the baby was hers, she can't do mistake in indentifying her baby. She went to the lady and said aunty she is my daughter, the lady turned and smiled at her, she is yours I was searching for her family, my son went to talk to police officers standibg there about her. How can you be soo irresponsible and leave a child like that. Nisha said sorry and the lady handed her reva, nisha was soo happy to get her baby back she kissed her. The lady who was kabir's mom said never ever repeat this mistake.

Nisha smiled and thanked her and she turned to leave. But as she turned she heard a voice, "Maa where is the baby" Her heart skipped a beat, was it him she thought, she said to herself it was him, this is kabir's voice. She slowly turned and what she saw was the happiest scene infront of her kabir was there taking to a lady apparently who was his mother. Nisha lightly said kabir and he saw her, he was frozen in his place he was not able to believe his eyes was she really there.? Kabir's mon said there she is, the baby is hers. The words came to a thundershock to kabir, ninish and a mother,did she marrued someone else or WAIT he said to himself, the baby can be his, he very well remember what happened few nights before he left between them. He slowly walked towards her and she also started walking towards her. One step of kabir and one step of nisha And they were standing just few inches away from each other. Thier eyes filled of questions, emotion, happiness, anger and dozens of feelings.

To be continued...



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Edited by .MysticalWaters - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#24
awesum part dear...Nibir's daugters
like parents like daugters😉
loved the part...
excited 4 reading the next part.
Plz update soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Myyy! I am totally lost!! Too much beautyyy *_* Perfect! Pls pls pls continue soon and pm me!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#26
Loved it...plz update next part soon,nd plz pm me
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Posted: 10 years ago
#27
Awesome chapter!! Can't wait to read the next chapter!! Excited!!Please continue soon!!!😊👏😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
#28
oh..so very exciting!! will Kabir know that he is the father or will he misunderstand?..and if he gets to know he is the father. what would be his reaction??..waiting for the next part already 😊
great update!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#29
Awesome chapter...
I loved it

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Posted: 10 years ago
#30
Its really nice...please update the next part soon...plz plz plz...i can't wait...plz plz plz

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