SS: Locha-e-ulfat ho gaya...pt 7...pg 28 - Page 8

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Posted: 11 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: krikumar.91



Abha...Yeh toh co-incidence hai yaar... I planned this long before. In second part, Raman called her Rinky di... Maine ab kuch nahi kiya...😆

Will try to continue soon Abha...


Ohh mujhe laga minky ka gussa yahan nikal diya...chalo kahin to mimi milenge...iss story main sahi...but ilove show se alag story ...I am not reading any os lately it increase s my hope...thats why I love these story...I can imagine everyone...and this one is awesome. ?.there will be lot of dhamaka in this love marriage...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: abha2701


Ohh mujhe laga minky ka gussa yahan nikal diya...chalo kahin to mimi milenge...iss story main sahi...but ilove show se alag story ...I am not reading any os lately it increase s my hope...thats why I love these story...I can imagine everyone...and this one is awesome. ?.there will be lot of dhamaka in this love marriage...


Kahaani abhi bata doon? Pado yaar... 😆

Lekin yahan negativity jyada nahi hoga... I assure that...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#73
Lovely update. All those lipstick Marks were hilarious.
Continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#74
very nice
i liked it
thanks 4 pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
#75

Originally posted by: SuryaIshraholic

Cockroach tha?

Ishita: (Looking at Raman) Haan amma... Itna bada cockroach dekha na... Darr gayi...

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Nyc update dear nd tq 4 d pm.. 😉


That's a cute comment yaar... Thanks
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Posted: 11 years ago
#76
Nice update..
Thanks for the pm..😊😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#77
Thanks for PM.
I'm sorry for late comment,I'm busy in Writing My exams,Please Forgive me...😭
It was so Nice Part.😊
Ishra Conversation was so Cute.😊
That Lipstick Part was so cute,I Likes it.😳
Please Update Next part soon,I am waiting Here.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: frenzyy

cute!! ishu told raman as the big cockroach😆😆


Yup...😉

Thanks for liking this part
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Posted: 11 years ago
#79

Mihir: Raman. Are you serious?

Raman: 100% mere bhai. Aur koi option nahi hai...

Mihir: Ishita? I mean uske saath.

Raman: Yaar...Please. Agar yeh plan kaam nahi kiya toh musibat ho jayega yaar. Madhvi aunty Ishu ki shaadi karvadegi ...uss Subbu se.

Mihir: Ok...

Param: Saale saab...Kya itne der kar rahe ho aap? Aapke liye andar Surprise rakha hai...

Raman: Surprise...Mujhe toh mere gharwaalon ke surprise se darr lag raha hai...Mihir, kya hai?

Mihir shrugged his shoulders and Param takes Raman inside...The whole house was decorated with flowers and he saw the presence of three new persons... A man in his early 60's , a woman in her early 50's with a young girl who was clad in a Punjabi suit.

Toshi: Raman puttar...Aa jaa... Inse mil... Rakesh Vadora ji, yeh unki biwi Poornima Vadora aur Kudi Shagun Vadora...

Raman got blessings from Rakesh and Poornima and extended his hands towards Shagun who didn't extend her hands in return but instead, folded both her hands to greet him...

Shagun: Namaste...

Raman: Whatever...Namaste Shagun (A little pause and stressed these words) JIII...

Raman: Guys...Make yourself comfortable and mom, I need to freshen up. I'll go...

Toshi: Puttar... Tujhse milne vaaste aaye hain yeh log.

Raman: (In a low voice) Mom...I'll just come... Aap tab tak baat karo... Mihir...Come with me.

On his way towards his room,

Raman: Yeh kya hai?

Mihir: How do I know Raman?

Raman: Ab Samaj mein aa raha hai na? Yeh jo Apshagun hai na...

Mihir: Shagun

Raman: Whatever... Yeh kyon aayi hai , yeh jaante ho na?

Mihir: Ab samaj mein aa gaya lekin...

Raman: I'm not tolerating this nonsense anymore...

Mihir: Jald baazi mein kuch mat karna...

By this time, both of them reached Raman's room which was open.

Raman: For god's sake, main Ishita jaise yeh sab khel nahi paunga...

Mihir: Shaitan ka naam liya aur shaitaan haazir...

Raman: Koun Shait...

Raman couldn't complete those words when he saw Ishita trying to climb inside his room through the window...

Raman: ISHITA...

Mihir: Raman...Stop shouting yaar...

Raman: Close the door Mihir...

Mihir rushed to the other side to close the door when Ishita hugged him tightly. Raman broke the hug and started scolding Ishita.

Raman: What the hell are you doing here? Aur yeh khidki se andar aa rahi ho? Agar tumhe kuch ho jaata toh? Haath pair toot gaya toh? Khud ko super woman samaj rakhi hai kya?

Ishita: RELAX... Saans le lo... Yeh drama bandh karo Raman... Kuch nahi toota...I'm fine...

Raman: My room is in first floor.

Ishita: Toh ladder bhi kis kaam aayega?

Raman: Are you for real Ishita? Humari love story ko chupaane ki lakh koshish ek taraf karti ho aur doosri taraf yeh sab... Koi tumhe dekh leta toh?

Ishita: Kisine dekha nahi na... Mujhe tension ho rahi thi baba...Voh lipstick mark...

Mihir: Maine mitaa diya...

Ishita: Mihir...

Mihir: Finally...Tumne mujhe notice kar kiya...

Ishita hugged Mihir warmly when they heard a knock...

Simi: Oye Raman...Jaldi aa jaa... Tu waise bhi handsome hi lagta... Kudi ko jyada intezaar mat karvaana... Roka ki time hogayi...

Ishita: WH...

Raman closed Ishita's mouth with his palm before Simi could hear her.

Raman: Simi di...10 minutes...

When Simi's footsteps died, Ishita bites Raman's palm makes him shriek in pain...

Raman: Dekha Mihir... Sach mein yeh ladki nahi hai... Shaitaan hi hai...

Ishita: Dhokebaaz...

Raman: Kya?

Ishita: Main ghar mein itne jhoot bolkar tumse milne aayi hoon...itne risk lekar lekin tum...ladki se mil rahe ho... Mujhe bataaye bina...Isliye mujhe daanta yahaan dekhkar...

Ishita starting crying...

Raman: Yaar...Yeh bhagwan ne bhi kya sochkar aurat banaya? Jis reason ko ek minute pehle brush off liya, ussi reason ko lekar madam ab ro rahi hai... (To Ishita) Baby...Jaanta hoon...Bahut mehnat kiya tumne...Lekin samjo na...Mujhe bhi pata nahi tha... Iss ladki ke baare mein...

Ishita: Kya? Aise kaise?

Raman: Mumma ne kuch nahi bataya Ishita. She wants to get me married...very soon. Iss chakkar mein bina bataaye kiya... taaki main manaa na kar sakoon...

Ishita: Teek hai...Jaake haan bol do.

Raman: Maine yeh kab kaha?

Ishita: Toh... Manaa karoge toh aunty...

Raman: Doosre rishtha lekar aayegi... Isliye main nahi Shagun ke muh se naa bulvaunga mein... Mumma kuch din ke liye embarrass ho jayegi... Subject bhi kuch din ke liye close ho jayega.

Mihir: Kaise? Voh ladki itni shareef hai ki hand shake tak nahi kiya...

Ishita: Kya? Iss jamaane mein aisi ladki?

Mihir: Upar se dress Ishita...Full Punjabi hai... Aunty ko already impress kar hi diya hoga...

Raman: Mihir... Yeh sochna samajna tere bas ke bahaar hai. Kyon bewajah try kar rahe ho?

Mihir: Means?

Raman: Tumhe reality aur dikaave ka farak tak nahi pata kya?

Ishita: What are you trying to say?

Raman: Ladki make up kar rahi hai... Itne latest perfume laga... (Sensing Ishita's stare) Oh hello...Goorna bandh karo... Tumhari brand hai...

Ishita: Chalo maaf kiya...

Raman: Smart phone ke saath fiddle kar rahi hai... Toh ek handshake mein uska kya jayega? Yeh sab show off kar rahi hai... Upar se...Ashok Khanna ke saath affair... Iske baad mein kyon maanunga ki voh sanskaari hai... Uski drama genuine nahi lag raha hai yaar...

Mihir: Ek minute... Ashok Khanna...Industrialist? Uske saath affair? Tumhe kaise pata...If I'm right, tum abhi abhi India aaye hue ho...Lag bag ek ganta hi hua...

Raman: IIN boss...

Mihir: Raman...

Raman: Arey...Jab hum enter kar rahe the, tab uski mumma uski college ki naam bata rahi thi... SWU college...

Mihir: Romi's college...

Raman: Exactly... aur Romi kahi baar iss ladki ke baare mein mujhe phone mein batayaa...

Ishita: Voh tumhare school waale dost Romi...

Raman: Wahi...Bande ko window shopping mein bade interest hai... Kaafi rangeen past hai...Ab tak colourful... Kapde se jyada speed mein ladki badalta hai... Voh iss ladki ko pataane ki koshish kiya lekin Ashok iske college mein kisi function mein chief guest banke aaya aur Shagun ko pata liyaa... Toh uss frustration mein mujhe uss ladki ke baare mein bataaya. Usse dekhke hi mujhe shak ho raha tha isliye chup chap ek photo bhi keencha aur Romi se confirm bhi kar liya...

Mihir: Smart...

Ishita: Chup chupke ladki ki photo kichva rahe ho...Bad boy... Lekin, yeh toh past hai... I mean college ke andar hi reh gaya hoga... Agar itna famous hota toh Toshi aunty isse kyon choose karegi?

Raman: Rishtha college ke andar hi reh gaya lekin gehraayi itne tha ki main Ramupa bann jaunga...

Ishita: Ramupa?

Raman: Ashok ki bache ki initial mujhe dena padega... Jagat papa...

Ishita: Raman...Are you serious?

Raman: Tumhare saath mazak kyon karoonga yaar?

Mihir: Mere saath kar sakthe ho? Kitna drama kiya room aate waqt... Lekin Raman, kitni achi acting kar rahi hai yeh ladki... How can you convince her yaar?

Raman: Romi ka toota hua dil hai na...Drama karne ke liye isse jyada kya chahiye...

Ishita: Matlab...Ekta style mein chillayega... Yeh Roka nahi ho saktha...

Raman: Isliye kehta hoon serial mat dekho... Romi will ensure that I get information about her relationship with Ashok... Bas...Ho gaya... Shagun ko manna padega...

Ishita: Baby...So sweet...

Ishita hugs Raman.

Mihir: Ishita...Kiss diya toh mark ko bhi hata dena...

Raman: Spoil kar diya na... Jaa...

Ishita: Raman...I'll wait here.

Raman: What? Koi tumhe dekh liya toh?

Ishita: Nahi... Mujhe tension ho raha hai... Apne mobile mein skype switch on karo... Room ko mein lock kar doongi... I want to see everything...

Raman: Ok...Careful...

Ishita: Raman...Uss Shagun ke saath jyada rude mat ho jaana...

Raman: I know it Baby... Smile...Your smile is all that I am craving for...

Mihir: Ya...It'll make our Raman smile... Bas karo yeh dialogue maarna... Simi di aa jayegi...

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Will send PM to everyone tomorrow...

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