Arjun-Draupadi FF-Shubh Punah Milan#2|Thread 3 Link Pg 1 - Page 72

Originally posted by: SethuParvathi

first nd foremostly...u have such an amazing language dear!!!

i've noticed dat in all ur updates!!

loved every bit of it!!!

i swear i used to be truly angry towards arjun in the situations dat r told above!!!!

i always wanted him to regret for being silent in dese situations nd for bringing subhadra home!!!!

u make him regret very nicely thru dis ff yagya...im sooo happy abt dat!!!

but yeah at tyms i feel sad for him too!!!!

aftr all he was bound by his dharm!!!!

anywayz continue soon dear!! loved it!! 👏

Originally posted by: Yagyaseni

Thanks a lot for saying that I have good language, Paro! Because recently a reader said my grammar sucks! They have taken this birth not just to complete their love but also to justify each and every action and pay the unpaid dues! And this was one of them! Thanks a lot for liking it, dear! And I am very glad that I have satisfied one of my readers through this update!

Originally posted by: SethuParvathi

hhhaaawww...😡

dats becuz he/she doesnt kno wht proper language is!! u rock sweetheart!!!

i bet u have a bright future in writing!!!👏

Originally posted by: Yagyaseni

I swear on God, Navu! If you don't unres this post, I will not speak to you!

Originally posted by: 8520NK

Unres!

Yayieee! Finally I have unresed!

Yaar I swear I was really busy and then I died because I started cardio! Anyway, about the update!

Truly truly loved the update! Beautifully written like always sakhi!😃

All the parts that I have missed commenting on were fantastic! The way you pen down all the updates for this FF is commendable! They are all so wonderful!

The flashbacks were so heart wrenching! Really, no matter how hard we try the pain of what happened at the dhyut sabha is really great and the Pandavas especially deserve to be punished for their silence. It is something no woman can forget😭

But I think this is what the kalyuga FFs are about, rewriting their story so that we can at least correct the wrong, doesn't matter if it's just fiction!

The way you described Arjuna's POV was fantastic! The way you thought about the reason for his silence was absolutely amazing! The silence was also for his Panchali, his wife!

But anyway, just hope that the past is put behind them fast so that their story can be written once again by such an amazing writer as you Yagzz! 👏

Originally posted by: -foreverhers-

Gosh! My words fail to express the wrenching emotions that are swirling in my mind after reading this update.
A really nerve-wrecking part which has surely jostled my mind.
A praise-worthy effort to pen down such deep emotions...commendable!!
Brilliant portrayal of Arjun's emotions...
No matter how hard we try but whatever happened in the Dhyut Sabha can never be forgotten. The pain of Panchali, her cries... It makes my heart bleed.

Never had I thought about this aspect of the incident. Arjun was always the calm and composed one. I knew about his remorse but never of the turmoil, of the inner battles that he kept fighting just for the sake of his brothers... It's all so painful.
The path of love is sometimes full of thorns and that is what their love was like. It hurts so much.
The way Kauravas faced their end was brutal yet the scars of the wound they left behind can hever be healed.

You are a magnificent writer and this chapter really is a benchmark in setting your standards higer..
Now I definitely want to read more.
Update this one soonish.

Regards
Keya

Originally posted by: Angela_Grokes

People come and people go. But some of them give unending love hidden in unbearable pain.

This was the line I was thinking about throughout the update.

Sometimes we cannot reason even if we have to and even if we have it. That was what happened with Arjun.

Sometimes you have all your love closed under boundaries which can never be broken. That was what happened with Draupadi.

This update was wonderfully and undoubtedly a crystal clear expression of their love. Honestly Yagya you have completely expressed what was never expressed so closely ever. You have really penned it down impressively.

But we mortals cannot touch the very soul hidden in their hearts.

Originally posted by: mishtypiya

very nice updates..