Arshi FF: Zindagi of Arshi THREAD 2: FINAL EPILOGUE - Pg: 114 - Page 58

I just love this story...from your writing i can guess that how mature your thinkings are...your explainations are beutiful...like in this update how you explain lavanya's thinking towards arnav...i just want to say you are a wonderful writer...and keep it up... 👍🏼 👏 ❤️

Finally, Arnav and Khushi talked about here relationship or the kind of future it can possibly have.

wow.. lavanya is one strong woman... hope some day she finds happiness she deserves.

Very nice
You have described Lavnya's point of view very well ... And I just can't wait for the next update ... I hope kids understand regardless of the age what their father or mother is trying to tell him or her ... And khushi's parents shouldn't have any issue I hope they wish to see their daughter settled in their life and lil pearl receiving fathers love that she never gat ...

Hope that you are feeling better now and all the best for your exam. Write when you get the chance, don't stress yourself about updates. 😳 This is a beautiful story and the update was superb. Glad that Arnav and khushi are being very forthright in what they want from each other. Love the love and the passion of Arnav and khushi for each other. Looking forward to the next update. ⭐️

A grand update of substance...

Felt proud of Kushi for she certainly has matured than her earlier self. Arnav made considerable improvement but I still feel his selfishness. As for Lavanya - I know you would be waiting to hear my thoughts on her and you are right - I feel deeply for this woman. I can feel her, call it my loyalty to this character I felt bad for her. She has greatly improved but like Arnav she is stuck somewhere. She made peace or she feels she made peace but like Arnav she cant move on. She has her career, her son, her independence yet she yearns for love. She is a woman who craved for love and betrayed of it yet she loves Arnav deeply and is destroyed badly that she can never accept another man or love another man deeply as she loved Arnav...She is what you call one man -woman. I wont call her weak but I cant accept her respect for Arnav because in my mind he doesn't get much respect. I don't want Arnav to love Lavanya because that wont be true it would be forced or because out of no choice. Certain love are not meant to be. Lavanya's love is one such...No body's fault..only her heart's wrong choice of man..

One thing which I noted was - in Khushi-arnav talk - there wasn't a mention about love, it was all practical talk.

I loved Kushi for making these points very clearly

Understanding and experiencing it in actual is different Arnavji.

What I was just trying to say is it will not be as easy as you make it sound.

Words are just words; but putting them into action is a wholly different thing.

Even I have to talk with my parents. I can do this only if I have their support, unlike last time.

So I don't want to hope without a reason this time. Let's see.

Arnav: And that is why I want You in my life Kushi; you know me enough to put up with my limitations.--- See here I felt like kicking Arnav, Kushi has to put up with Arnav's limitation...why cant he improve?

Lavanya is sort of expecting this from the time you are back in the industry. I know this though she has not spoken it loud to me. So for her it won't be a shock and maybe not a problem too.( See here!!!!!! He is inconsiderate to her feelings...he never tried knowing La's inspite of being together for years and before, he sees her outer shell alone)

Who was she kidding?! Her worries were not just about how Ayaan will handle it...somewhere deep down this is going to affect her too and she knows that.----you know my heart went out to her di! How much can this woman take...she was broken, yet she re-built herself for her but then she is still hurt...some wounds are never healed...I loved the scripting about La's emotions..perfect..it touched me...

But later she realized she was holding onto a mirage; something that was not her own, ever!

Even now she will be able to cope with this tide with her son's presence. Still it hurt somewhere deep down.

Arnav's accepting Kushi and him are happening would have killed La at heart...because hearing it confirmed directly from the man you love is like feeling him pull the trigger at you...its blinding pain...

Lavanya: All the Best. But don't hurt my child. (I liked this warning...)

Arnav: I won't hurt my son, not even for my happiness. (Poda...I don't trust you)

Arnav: You okay with it? (Ha ha...are you joking, idiot!!!!)

Lavanya( stopping midway and turning sideways): Did it ever matter to you? (Well done!!! I loved this response. It never mattered to Arnav that's the truth..he always took her for granted)

Lavanya (looking straight ahead): My consent is never an issue Arnav. I don't have any right over you now. I'm not your wife. You have every right to live your life the way you want. I'm just afraid for my child. (What else could have she said...it's the truth...she never had any right over Arnav..he never loved her..oh man! That hurts badly)

Lavanya gave a sarcastic smile (why sarcastic? )

Lavanya was standing by the glass door watching rain cascading down. (Lovely scene frame) Rain is always the company in heartbreak...

She was beautiful, intelligent, from a good family, had a wonderful personality - yet she could not impress the man in her heart. She had wondered why Arnav could not feel what he felt for Kushi, for her. What did she lack? She never got any of the answers ever. -excellently scripted...I saw myself reflected here...

With Ayaan coming into her life, she had actually forgotten these questions and insecurities (yes, children or work which you love could make you forget those questions for a while yet when sometimes something happens and your Pandora box would be opened again giving rise to those old insecurities of "Whys".

She knew Arnav was hurt and suffering the last few years after Kushi left him. Ayaan's presence did provide him some comfort, but he was never completely healed. His medicine was always, Kushi. All he wanted in this world was Kushi. What could make him live and not survive is Kushi.---see!! Here La is concerned and understanding of Arnav...even considerate unlike Arnav...Arnav I can bet would never have thought about La for once like this...

She loved Arnav for the way he loved Kushi. She was jealous of Kushi for winning such a love from a man like Arnav. Even in past, when she had expectations of Arnav returning her love, she never expected him to be capable of such an intense love. She could never raise such a fire in him for her. If Kushi was able to do it, then she is his true soul mate. She has made peace with this little fact. And she was ready to live with it.---It would have killed her to finally accept this reality and each time when she recalls this little fact it would hurt her. Its not easy to live with it...it takes great effort to accept the fact the man you love loves another woman who is not you...

Arnav was never hers to begin with. But she was always Arnav's and will always remain his; not for him but for herself."reminded me of KKHH that train scene of farewell between Rani and Kajol...

If a feminist is to hear this interior monologue of Lavanya, she or he will judge Lavanya to be a weak woman pining for the love of a male who is not deserving that love. But this was not her weakness, nor blind love.---weak or not...weakness or not, blind love or not...La's love is true...its not an easy love..but her heart is like that...once you love a person that deeply for years, its hard to let go...in La's case, she was his wife too... .However I do not agree to the next part------". It was just a woman's respect for a man who was capable of loving a woman truly. ---Olakkaaa ...I agree Arnav loves Khushi truly yet his love isn't pure...it was built on other's pain..Honestly if I was La, I cant respect Arnav for loving Khushi..Of course, I can understand his love for Khushi and that would make me jealous of Khushi like you mentioned La was...however I am 100% sure that I wont feel respect for Arnav loving Khushi truly...it would make me yearn and long for such kind of love, question my incapbilites or lacking only...I would like to hear thoughts if anyone agrees or disagrees to this part of the story...I am talking like a wounded woman I know but would love to see this angle in different perspective than the one you have come up with...A woman is not made like that..yes I think it ironic " Yes it's ironic that a woman can think like this of a man who she loves and who doesn't requite her love. But its true. This was Lavanya's true feelings about Arnav despite everything that happened in their lives.---No I wont agree...put a real woman in her place...she cant feel respect even though I agree she can still go on loving him...but it wont be based on respect..it would be based on the golden moments they spent together...based on those old memories..she cant forgive him for the wrongs yet she cant stop herself from loving him...it's a difficult situation in life...like I told earlier..stuck and cant move on.. It's not like she has forgiven him for what he has made out of her's and Ayaan's life. She won't say he is not guilty or that it doesn't hurt her to witness this development in their lives. But despite all that, she can appreciate Arnav's love for Kushi. She always will, even when she will continue to love Arnav. Judge her if you want, but that is Lavanya. ----Ok she can appreciate and understand Arnav's love and need for Khushi but she cant respect him based on it...samathikulla njan...I wont judge La...I only disagree on this respect part, other than anyone I can understand her love for Arnav who hurt her badly...

Nice update
I hope Ayaan vl understand his dad
Please continue soon
Happy married life

Awesome Update, I hope the talk goes well with Ayaan.

nice update
so kushi thot to give it a chance
lav.her character always amazes me.such a strong one
waiting for next

hope they get it this time