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Awesome..

👏👏 👏 👏👏

feel bad for both of themmm,... khushi wants a divorce n arnav not ready...

house is beautifully made 😃

waiting for next!

A perfect epigraph for the update Jigs. The sun streaming in burning his eyes is more than just a literal wake up call.

We end up saying such hurtful things when tired, when angry, when frustrated. Pent up emotions cause us to lash out at the one closest to us, and then regret it instantly. It may be our insecurity talking, but words which pierce our sense of self are not easy to overlook. When not dealt with they fester away and cause the sense of outrage to harden until eventually the initial reason is all but lost in the miasma of misery. Every relationship needs nurturing. And that of a husband wife, sabse zyaada. These two started out with so much love, it permeates every tangible thing in their living space.

I loved the way you wrote their morning after. As ever, just so real. One can easily picture the scene, their years together making it appear superficially harmonious. The inherent attraction for the other very apparent. How quickly that changed. All the grievances waiting to be aired bursting out shattering that fragile appearance of calm.

You have an excellent eye for detail, making each scene vividly alive for the reader. Their clothes, their surroundings, the slow revelation of their background, all a pleasure to read. But, the best part is the way you show their thought processes. Getting me into the head of the protagonists. I love that.

I really like your Aman. I liked how he understands Arnav, how he cares for him, how he just knows him. Arnav's going to need all of that in the, undoubted, turbulent times ahead. As ever, your last lines leave me wanting the next update to be yesterday!

Oh, and anytime Arnav chooses to make me a flat white, with or without his T-shirt, I will not be commenting on the inappropriateness of his attire ;)

~unres~

Ok, the last line had me in tears..wonderful Jigs.. I can feel the anguish and my heart went out to Arnav..

So clearly this is the case of insecurities and lack of trust on Khushi's part exacerbated by his long working hours and one female client.. I see clearly Arnav is trying not to give up on the marriage and I trust him that he is loyal towards his marriage.

Being a professional herself, doesn't Khushi understand that there men and women at work place? If she has doubts, there are other means to clear her doubts.. Instead she accuses him, argues with him and now wants to end the marriage?? Sorry, I find her very irresponsible at this point..

Looks like this Alisha has played some games on Arnav's back and Khushi has bought into her lies and has immediately judged Arnav guilty.. Or everything is in Khushi's head😕

I think it's good for Arnav's sanity to go ahead with the divorce