'Meant To Be' Love Season, Th-5, Epilogue, Pg -128

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cuteariya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#471

first of all congratz for 2nd anniversary 🥳 🥳
I become speechless after read this chapter
poor aarti suffered a lot 🥺 🥺
she try to hide her pain from yash
poor yash was so broken when aarti shot him from her 💔 💔
prateek & paridhi tried a lot to to distract aarti but didn't work
oh god yash took aarti in same room where that beast force aarti
so she can face the past & move on in her future 🤗 🤗
finally aarti's outburst come out
it's was really painful when aarti was breaking down 🥺 🥺
yash was also cried to see his ladylove in so much pain 😭 😭
finally aarti gave yash all the question's answer
I feel like killing that beast he is so disgusting 😡 😡 😡
hope now aarti can move on with yash
at last it was cute moment when aarti empty stomach made the growling noise 😃 😃
plz update soon dear

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Shashi1984

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Posted: 10 years ago

#472

First of all Nikki, a very happy second anniversary of MTB. I can't believe it's been two years I am reading MTB. It's a very long long journey but still enjoyed every part of it.

And now for update. I don't have to words to say about the chapter. It's a really heart wrenching and emotional chapter.

On Prashant's death anniversary she don't want to come in front of Yash as she don't want to give pain to him.

Kiran's plan becomes successful, and all the family members share their part in making it successful, even Palak played her part so beautifully giving her parents the time they needed. Yash played the most significant part in it, though he feels hurt by seeing Aarti like that.

I was so afraid reading that Yash brought her in Prashant's room. After confronting her parents it is much needed for her to confront Prashant. Although he is not alive but still she is bounded by her past and the haunting memories of the time with Prashant. She confronted with Prashant's picture and hit him. It is very much needed for her to come out of her shell to move forward in the future.

What I loved most is the confrontation of Yash and Aarti about the past events. She was in a misconception that if Yash had made love to her that day then Pranshant wouldn't have done what he did. And very beautifully Yash made her understand.

Aarti felt secured in his arms and answers all the questions and doubts that he have in his mind. She shared all that happened in the past and how she got close to Arpita and shared her pain with her.

The chapter mostly dedicated to AARYA. Loved how she felt comfortable sharing her pain with Yash. The hint you gave about the picture. I think it's time when she was able to see directly in his eyes without hesitating or scaring. I don't know if I am right but it's a guess.

Sorry for the late reply...

Edited by Shashi1984 - 10 years ago

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saf24

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Posted: 10 years ago

#473

Fantastic job on the update Nikki. I think you did a great job with the sequence and the explanations. I really loved the fact that Aarti herself opened up to Yash so they could try sorting through things and so that he can understand her even more. Was really glad that he was able to be by her side when she faced her past. Looking forward to what is in store next.

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ns1970

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Posted: 10 years ago

#474

Firstly congrats on your 2nd anniversary 🥳

Another wonderful update especially how she opened up to yash now waiting for her future with yash to really begin

Thanks for the PM looking forward to your next update

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lovely_nikki

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Posted: 10 years ago

#475

Originally posted by: princess121993
Wooohooo.. Happy Belated 2nd Anniversary ...

AWESOME Update Di... 👏👏👏

You left me speechless yet again.👏👏👏

The scared aarti before the fateful day, her reaction and explosion in the room.. I could imagine each and every scene as I was reading it.

You are awesome. The update is awesome

Cant wait for the next update

Thanks so much my Ex-Editor 🤗

After reading some of the comments even I am speechless . But I am happy that my hardwork of more than three weeks paid off and I was able to put into words Aarti's feelings and emotions 😳

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lovely_nikki

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Posted: 10 years ago

#476

Originally posted by: caller123
Nikki it was heart touching chapter.
I can imagine hoe much Yash had to go through before that. But Dr. kiran was right. It really helped her to open up and come out of it.
I'm glad the way Yash answered Aarthi about if Prashanth didn't do that to her then??
They all have gone through a lot in life.
They need some peace now.
Aarthi has Yash but how many are there who is suffering alone in life?
Manu and Swathi coming to Gay touched me so much. This whole thing has effected them so badly.
I love this chapter.. It was emotional but you brought everything out so well.
Now I'm waiting for aarya romance. I hope you are not going to include rosey's romance (B romance) in the coming chapters. Will you?

Yes Kate it was heart touching..

For some reason I was feeling bad for Yash more than for Aarti. He was seeing her suffering and he was not able to do anything about it. And then she sort of blamed him which was worst for him. His explanation is what made Aarti realize that she was wrong. Yash was right, Prashant could've gone to any length to hurt Yash and then Aarti.

You are so right about other girls who suffer alone. That's why I showed Yash taking the step of finding those goons and getting them punished. They both needed a closure on that front also.

Manu and Swati's scene was in my mind since long long back. I wanted to show how scared and emotional they were. And who better to console them then Gayatri that's why they went to her. But here I wanted to show that Gayatri was also very vulnerable and needed her husband. So Ammaji came to offer all of them support and comfort.

I have already shown AarYa's B romance few chapters back. The promo scene will be on the lines of that ony but with a twist 😉

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lovely_nikki

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Posted: 10 years ago

#477

Originally posted by: Zetter
Aww such an emotional episode it had me crying from the first entry up until the last line...they were happy tears, sad tears and extremely happy tears for the progress my AarYa have made together 😭 ❤️

Loved how Yash stopped Kiran from giving Aarti the sedatives and telling her that Aarti will get through this phase because she is strong 👍🏼 😊

A family that comes together in time of a crisis will always stick together...such is the case of the Scindias.

Can't wait for what comes next! XOXO

Yes Zet this chapter was another roller coaster ride for all of us. But the worst is over now. Now they are sort of free of the past baggage.

Thank you so much for commenting on the sedatives. Till now (after the incident) whenver Aarti had major panic attacks, she was given sedatives. Ever since I had shown that, this scene was on my mind where Yash will say no more sedatives for her. And look Aarti proved his faith right, that she will fight as she's strong.

Yes now the whole family is together, including Ammaji, who has completley changed.

Thanks so much for such wonderful review 🤗. ❤️

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lovely_nikki

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Posted: 10 years ago

#478

Originally posted by: Alamelu
Absolutely brilliant. I loved the way you interweaved arti's anger frustration pent up for the past year all coming out. Like you had mentioned Yash was taken aback when Arti mentioned about her wish that they had made love before. Looks like he too had guessed that is what is making her not hate him but nhold him responsible to some extent to her sufferings. Beautifully brought out especially the part how Yash explains to her that would have made no difference whatsoever and probably wouldave been far worse. Glad it is all sorted out
Loved that ammajo realizes Gayatri needs Surat as much as Arti needed Yash today. Thanks to Kiran and the family to make all this happen. Loved it

Thanks so much Alamelu. I was so eagerly waiting for your comment as you had guessed the reason for Aarti's closing her eyes.

It took me more than three weeks to work on Aarti's emotions as I didn't want to mess up this chapter. Which is one of the most important chapter of this fiction.

Yash had recalled his conversation with Aarti and after talking with Arpita, his doubts were confirmed.

I had told you in PM that how Yash will make her understand that she is wrong, was the main factor here. Yash, by now, knows very well to what extent Prashant could've gone to hurt him physically and emotionally. And after Aarti's involement in Yash's life, there's no way Prashant would've left her alone.

Even I liked the part where Ammaji realizes that today Gayatri also needed the love, support and comfort from her husband.

Thanks once again for yet another beautiful review ❤️