Fan Fic - The Outsider - Page 54

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Hi Rekha!

What a war of words and amazing treat with laughter therapy. Jai Walia this time won the match without losing any set.

".......... "How was Dinner yesterday?." ........."I was talking to the Dog, not you.".............."I didn't know bushy eyebrows were in." .........."Tony, now we know how the Silk Curtain cloth went missing 8 years ago."................"Yeah…He does look different. Perhaps, because he is the first one born in his family without a tail." ........

Hoping next time Bani is going to make a huge sixer which would bring Jai Walia back into the match again. But wondering how JW would discover the truth about Pooks. Bechara kabab me haddi toh hain uparse yeh new found Dodo Lover...God save our beloved Pooks!!!

Please continue sooner.

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di that was awesome!
so its war in this household😆
i love tony..set match sab kucch😆
but Bani bhi kucch kam nahi hai
i can't wait til she wins the next round
please continue soon😃

YEAH!!!

hey di,

i was waiting for you to update!!

fabulous part!!!

i wonder how they will behave next!

i hope their misunderstandings get cleared soooon!!


please cont soon
thanks
sunju

Rekha
Fabulously done !!!
The word dueling between JB is reat !!
Jai seems to be in the lead now but am sure Bani will be his match soon!!!
Continue soon!!!
Nina

Oh the updates are the funniest 😆
their comments to each other 😆...bechara Pooks kaha phas gaya
plz cont. soon

Just read both the wonderously lovely part.
It is really funny,but why is 'Buns' losing and King Kong winning.It is so bad.I hope in the next part Buns win.
With Love,
Shiya

Originally posted by: ShiyaNasreen29

Just read both the wonderously lovely part.
It is really funny,but why is 'Buns' losing and King Kong winning.It is so bad.I hope in the next part Buns win.
With Love,
Shiya

Don't worry Shiya,

Buns will win in the next part! The first one belonged to her, when she lambasted Jai, the second one belonged to King Kong when he got the better of Buns and now the third one will again go to Bani!

Can't say the same for Pooks...😆

Thanks for the replies guys, I will get back to all of you soon!

Cheers,

MT

Wow! Beautifully penned parts, MT.

Absolutely loved the humor and banter between Jai and Bani.....two comments I absolutely loved were "I was talking to the dog"....and the one about the silk curtain going missing 8 years ago!!! Hilarious.

I really hope the next part will have Bani winning serve, set and match against Jai! I think she deserves a chance now!

Loved that you have made Pushkar into the real pooch!!

Eagerly awaiting the next part!!! Thank you!!!!

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Di read both parts and i must what a perfect timing to enlighten all of our moods. first when i read the first part of this part i was like what non-sense why are you doing that? but then i read it all in full details and i was like brilliant idea! i mean it is the perfect timing and it is by far the funniest 'war of the words' i have ever read! 😆 😆

I guess u were thinking bout ur audience when u wrote these two parts.
i love it!
love the insults that Jai gave to Bani. Must say this time around Jai has more wit than Bani and i guess u put an extra effort to bring out this personality of Jai.

thanks for brightening my night di!(and partial day)
rooj

Rekha,

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Great part. The story is fantabulous and I loved the way it has developed but honestly the best part about the entire FF till date has been the scenes of Jai and Pooks. I just love the way Pooks is intimidated by Jai and keeps on looking for corners to hide. Bechara- one wants to feel sad for him given the state he is in with Jai always and to top that he is intellectually challenged too 😆 😆 😆 but honestly who cares when one is enjoying the devilish charms of Jai Walia fighting for his woman 😳 and given how much I enjoy Jai pushing Pooks corner to corner and Bani refusing to make things any easier for him, this part has been an absolute treat for me

Well No matter how much we love our aristocratic, arrogant, intelligent Munna 😳 (in real KS or any FF), In the end we all want him to come out stupid for misunderstanding Bani, kneeled in front of her and begging for her forgiveness. 😆