Divan FF: Help her change part 4 page 23 UPDATED - Page 9

Originally posted by: Viji15

Thank you so much :)
lol yes good change is always welcomed right :)

Very very right :)
now read d 2nd part too
nd 1rqst write more stories yr :)

omggg superb duperb update plxx write more I love it so much :)

this was just awesome
im speechless i dont have words for it

Hi 😃
Well I'm new to India forums and its because of you. This story of urs my cousin had shared and we both were goin gaga over it, u don't understand how many times I read the first part alone. You wrote it so beautifully I dunno if anyone else could of captured these divan behaviors so nicely.
To b honest when I read it on twitter that u might post a second part, i was waiting like literally! ur like giving us a glimpse into their world and I'm addicted. I was going to tweet u my appreciation but unfortunately there is a word limit with twitter and i needed more 140 character to express 😆 . so I'm here . 😊

UR update is awesome!!! I love it entirely but there are few things I wanted to mention specially.

1."They began shooting, as usual he was goofing off in between the takes and cracking jokes, with each of his attempt he turned to look at her making sure she found it funny enough to even smile and she did. Naturally every time he looked, he couldn't help but wonder what went wrong in their relation. He wasn't friends with the guy but met him few times and that was enough to say he was a gentlemen, the "good boy" type and she, she was perfect, she was ideal. He snapped his thoughts once he realized he was being just like everyone else,curious and judgmental . And that was the difference between everyone and him, he knew better, he knew her."
That was so nicely said, I respected Sshardiv a lot, I think most people would of wrote about SM negatively, especially when it come to divans but u put so nicely. & "he knew better, he knew her." That line !👏

2." She asked him for a selfie, he obeyed like always. She did it for the fans and he only did it for her. Posing for a picture with her was different, it always made him cautious. How he could not be when she is such a perfect poser with her ramp walk model posture. She never posed silly, especially with him and he, he just followed her cue." - - 😳😳 SUPERB!

3.He was called for a picture just as he thought of going for a smoke, normally he would have lit the cigarette then went but he knew she didn't like it, so with the unlit cigarette he sat next to her for pose."- - I love this entirely! Mad respect for him for this.

4. '"Not once he asked about her break-up, not once he said any comforting words, did he not care she wondered. But she was happy with his not caring attitude for once. He was being casual, he was being himself and that made her feel normal. Surprisingly feeling normal never felt better to her."--- I was completely bowled over reading that. U put out this great moral in your writing, acting normal around a person with a heartbreak is probably better then 1000s of comforting lines. ACTIONS MATTERS THEN WORDS!! 👏.

Sorry for writing such a long reply but i wanted to express my thoughts. Keep writing yaar, I beg you. I will be egarely waiting for the next update.😃❤️. Also wanted to mention, the beauty of story is how you kept Divan so pure and real even this is a fictional story. Hats off!👏👏

P.S Would love to read you other Divans stories a well.

Best,
Nashid

OMG THANK YOU for writing another part :) loved loved loved it! you r an awesome writer and the way you have described the situation and their thoughts ware exceptional.. LOVE DIVAN .. *fingers crossed*' and hope you write more :)

lovely update...love ishra.divan..wish to happen something like this..

Originally posted by: Dmug

Both the parts are beautifully written!! Nice use of events that happened which we all witnessed!! Its good to have such a friend in life who would not be judgemental and will treat u normally when all around u r trying to sympathise!! And yes being treated normally does make u feel at piece and assures u that its ok and life will be better if u choose to make it better!!

There is lot of admiration and respect in their relationship thats for sure!! I would not comment if anything transpires between them though i would be happy for both of them as i love them together 😳

And if u wish to continue pls do would love to read it!! 😊

Thank you so much !
Yup I consider that a true friendship , no judgmental always the same no matter what the situation is!
I too hope for the same😳 lets see what destiny has in store...

Originally posted by: janani_divan

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Originally posted by: yhmmylife

Very well written...

Very shuttle

I wish everybody to have one friend like that in your life non -judgmental...

Thank you😊
yup i too wish for the same!

Originally posted by: .Harshita.

Aww it was PERFECT...just like our DivAn...😳❤️

Loved it completely...

Hope to see more of it...U know we greedy DivAnis n IshRaholics...😉

Thank you! Divan level different level perfect, if only i can get them into words😳
i hope to see more in real😉