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rimi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#141

Thank you everyone for all your comments...😊

Now coming to the next part...A small insight into Dilawar Naazneen relationship...offcourse along with pathan's part too..😉😉😉

i hope you would like it..do leave your feedbacks...😊😊

oohh yes...Happy holi everyone...fill your face and your life with beautiful colors...😃

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I ran towards them calling out loudly when the man turned to me with a frightened face. I ran faster and reached her.

I could see the wounded skin on her face and neck. Even the front of her dress was torn and exposing her inner skin and she was struggling to hold the torn cloth in place.

rest in the blog...😳

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Shravani / Arohi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#142

Res//Unres

YAY!!!!!!

Me first...

Awesome update

Loved it

Nazneen had a strong effect on Sikki

So Pathan was the first blow to Sikki

And here Arjun comes in picture

Interesting

Let's see aage kya hota hai

Waiting for the next part

Continue soon..

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Snehajain

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Posted: 11 years ago

#143

Awesome update...

Arjun & Riya both were working together...😃😃😃

Sikander was feeling uncomfortable with the presence of Naazneen in his house...😃😃😃

Sikander toh Naazneen ki dimple smile, uske innocent expressions pe fida ho gaya tha...😆😆😆

Sikander gave her keys of his house...😲😲😲

Ibrahim-Rafiq samajhdar hai...😆😆😆

Sikander regretted for his anger on Naazneen...Naazneen chali gayi...aur Sikander ko sharabi bana gayi...😆😆😆

Finally Sikander gave in & landed in the pub where Naazneen was performing...😆😆😆

That Manager...😡😡😡 😡😡😡...But I think that was planned...😉😉😉

ASR ki entry ho hi gayi...story mein nahi FB's mein...😆😆😆

Arjun is shocked to see the relation Dilawar & Aman share...😛😛😛

Aman itni jaldi haar nahi manega...😆😆😆

Continue soon...Thanks for PM...

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GOLDIEE ABROL

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Posted: 11 years ago

#144

Loved it Rimi

Awesome update

I just Loved the tactics of Nazneen

she is really digging sikander & getting out dilawar from it

but yes no doubt she had a great impact on sikander

Might be because he found her equally innocent like her Sister

Sikander saved Naazneen from that filthy Manager good

but his rudeness & restlessness shows tha he was scared sharing his private life

So Pathan was the first Blow to Siki

& Arjun came there in the picture

this is getting more interesting

Lets see what happens next

Thanks for the PM

Continue soon 😊

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Tabassum Nitol

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Posted: 11 years ago

#145

Awwwsssmmm Update
Loved it
Supperbbb...
Amazing...
Wonderfully Written
Nazneen is getting out Dilawar from Sikander
He was feeling guilty n restless
Let's see what happen next
Continue Soon
Waiting for next part
Thanks for the PM

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Delusional Minx

@Delusional_Minx

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Posted: 11 years ago

#146

Awesome update Di

loved it

Riya worked for Arjun.. but only reported him.. he never knew what she did..

Sik was restless as Nazneen was in his house.. he felt the fear of being exposed!

Sik talked rudely with Riya n she left!

Sik was feeling guilty of his behaviour.. he started drinking more n taking more drugs..

Rafiq n Ibrahim warned him but he didn't heed them!

Arjun had raided Pathan's consignments n girls!

Sik was now disturbed.. but again Riya came into picture!

The manager.. I think it was kinda planned to distract Siki!!

Aman came back..

Arjun guessed his relation with Aman.. was surprized! hehe!

Aman had already talked with DIG.. his condition.. he's too curious to know the story! haha!!

Arjun said "apni ki gayi galti ki saza mili he".. kounsi galati??!!

waiting for next update

do continu soon

thanks for pm

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kunchu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#147

you did it again rimi

wow read 2 parts together

yeah i am lagging behind

sorry abt that

but its a wonderful work rimi

no words

great jo

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rimi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#148

Originally posted by: skrafty
Res//Unres
YAY!!!!!!
Me first...

Awesome update
Loved it
Nazneen had a strong effect on Sikki
So Pathan was the first blow to Sikki
And here Arjun comes in picture
Interesting
Let's see aage kya hota hai
Waiting for the next part
Continue soon..

thanks skrafty...i am glad you liked the update...yep Arjun has come...stay tuned for the rest..😳😳😳

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rimi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#149

Originally posted by: Snehajain
Awesome update...
Arjun & Riya both were working together...😃😃😃
Sikander was feeling uncomfortable with the presence of Naazneen in his house...😃😃😃
Sikander toh Naazneen ki dimple smile, uske innocent expressions pe fida ho gaya tha...😆😆😆
Sikander gave her keys of his house...😲😲😲
Ibrahim-Rafiq samajhdar hai...😆😆😆
Sikander regretted for his anger on Naazneen...Naazneen chali gayi...aur Sikander ko sharabi bana gayi...😆😆😆

i so love this observation of yours...devdas siki..😆😆

Finally Sikander gave in & landed in the pub where Naazneen was performing...😆😆😆
That Manager...😡😡😡 😡😡😡...But I think that was planned...😉😉😉

you arent good at guessing in this story...😛

ASR ki entry ho hi gayi...story mein nahi FB's mein...😆😆😆
Arjun is shocked to see the relation Dilawar & Aman share...😛😛😛
Aman itni jaldi haar nahi manega...😆😆😆

Continue soon...Thanks for PM...

thanks gabbu...stay tuned...i am waiting for your take on the next one too...and your guesses as well..😆😉

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rimi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#150

Originally posted by: --GOLD--
Loved it Rimi
Awesome update
I just Loved the tactics of Nazneen
she is really digging sikander & getting out dilawar from it
but yes no doubt she had a great impact on sikander
Might be because he found her equally innocent like her Sister
Sikander saved Naazneen from that filthy Manager good
but his rudeness & restlessness shows tha he was scared sharing his private life
So Pathan was the first Blow to Siki
& Arjun came there in the picture
this is getting more interesting
Lets see what happens next
Thanks for the PM
Continue soon 😊