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The Jinx

An object or person that brings bad luck.

It can take you days, months, even years to better your life but it only takes a second for you to ruin someone else's.


Prologue
No one is ever created to be perfect we all have some kind of flaw that makes us unique and make us who we are ...
Many times we cu
rse our flaws and look at them with shame .
But , sometimes for d most blessed of us , God use these flaws to soften our spirit and turn us
into a kinder more beautiful and compassionate
soul ...

Note... This is a fiction inspired by some facts and incidents form our surroundings . If someone find any resemblance in d title and story line they r welcome to leave ur comments on my page (plzz don't pm me)wit
h d link . I'll try my best not to touch any body's work. Need ur love and support to make it an interesting FF.





Part - 127




Part - 128


It was d totally family time for all ,, U&A Sam left after some chit-chat giving privacy to family nd all need rest to after journey ,, Geet took manu ,, change him nd make him sit with his Dadu for written practice ,, Geet became more busy coz she had to arrange nd look after whole family ,, d helper cdn't do all d work ,, Geet had to take charge of cooking for elders bcoz they preferred Ind food .

Maan got busy in his office work but he was eager to meet nd talk Geet ,, he wanted to spent sometime with her alone to ask her what nd how she want her marriage ,, Maan wanted to make every moment most beautiful nd cherishable for her ,, he checked nd replied mails , point down few more work do finish nd then went to spent some time with Yash ,, he find Geet busy in kitchen nd sighed finding no hope for talk .

There Geet was knowingly keeping her busy to avoid her confront with Maan nd marriage talks ,, these sudden changes in situation made her mute ,, she didn't know how to response ,, how she voice out her liking nd disliking ,, she never shared this type of family talks with them nd now it was d matter of marriage ... her nd maan's marriage ... Gosh! This mere thought of their marriage was making her weak nd nervious ,, she took it better to confine herself in work .

At dinner all sat together ,, U&A Sam remained in their home ,, Geet didn't have option so had to sit next to Maan ,, Manu was with his Grt G granny ,, now DM was showering her love on manu ,, she was feeding him nd talking ,, Rashi started d marriage convo again nd Geet lost all her appetite ,, her tummy felt churn ,, she was playing with food ,, Maan noticed her restlessness but said nothing ,, he himself was feeling ripples in his heart nd desired to shares his feelings with Geet regarding their marriage .

All wr settled in their room nd after securing all d work Geet was going to switch off d light but stopped when saw Maan at kitchen door staring at her ,, she gulped nd asked meekly.

Geet: do u want anything ?

Maan came close : hummm,, u know we have coffee after dinner .

Geet step back : aamm,, OK lati hun .

Maan: I m waiting in study .

Geet: hummm.

Giving her a deep thoughtful look he went from there ,, he was noticing that Geet was avoiding him nd not even looking at him ,, how cd he bear that ?

he was waiting for her ,, Geet came nd kept d tray on d table quietly nd turned back without looking at him saying .. ur coffee.

Maan held her hand nd pinned her against d shelf in a swift move ,, he was staring at her annoyed .

Maan: kya hua hei Geet ,, why r u avoiding me ,, humm ,, bolo Geet , jawab do .

Geet startled with his sudden action nd fumbled : nahi , wo ,, essa kuch nahi hei .

Maan : jhoot matt bolo Geet ,,, mrning se mujhe avoid ker rahi ho ,, bolo kya hua hei ? kuch to hei .

Geet meekly: nahi ,, kuch nahi hei .

Maan: to meri taraf dekh ker bolo ,,look at me .

Geet was feeling so miserable ,, he was towering her ,, their bodies wr touching nd she was feeling his warm breaths on her face ,, she gulp hard nd lifted her eyes slowly ,, there was lil anger in his eyes.

Maan: Geet if something bothering u then plzz tell me ,, ur avoidance hurting me ,, u cn tell me anything , if it's related to our marriage too.

Geet looked down again ,, she didn't have any prob regarding marriage but here her heart nd new found feelings wr troubling her .

Maan cupped her face nd made her look at him : dil mei jo kuch bhi hei kaho muje Geet ,, ur silence is hurting me ,, r u not happy with this marriage ? bolo na .

Geet: it's not like that .

Maan: then what is troubling u ?

Geet: wo ,,, wo ...

She fumbled nd hugged Maan ,, hiding her face in his neck she voice out ... everything happened so fast ,, m m ...

He felt trembling of her body , thudding of her heart nd heavy breaths .

Maan: sshhh,,, bas its OK baby .. ( he engulfed her ,, understood that her feelings troubling her ) these feelings troubling me too , u r not alone ,, Geet wd u come for a date with me ,, huumm ,,, chalogi mere sath ?

D date ... hummm , I want to talk many things ,, wd u come Geet ?

kahan ? Jahn bas tum aur mai ho ? hum dono freely baat ker saken ,, bolo na .

Geet nodded accepting his wish ,, she was feeling lil calm now ,, if Maan's closeness troubled her , it soothe her too.

Maan was elated getting her acceptance ,, he kissed her shoulder nd gave his sign smile to popple her heart .

Maan: then fine , TM eve , humm ,,, now go nd sleep, manu is alone in room .

She nodded shyly nd went ,, Maan was watching her with contented smile ,, he felt relief that she was fine with their marriage but need to open up more nd for that they had to spent time together ,, he took a deep breath nd settled in chair to finish his work ,, it was day time in Ind nd he had few calls nd conference meetings with clients ,, he slept very late but came to check his cuties in their room ,, gave sweet GN peck on Geet's head nd went to his room.

Next day day Geet left with Manu for her office ,, Maan was sleeping that time ,, helper nd Rashi wr there to manage d work , so she left lil early coz she had to meet Manu's teacher .

In day time Maan planned for their 1st date ,, he was feeling very shy when he informed his parents at lunch time that he was going out for dinner with Geet so they had to handle Manu ,, all smiled , DM & Rashi said nothing but yash was his Dad didn't miss d chance .

Yash: hummm clear bolo date per le ja rahe ho meri Geet ko,, u have to take permission from me 1st .

Maan looked at him perplexed thinking Dad se permission ?

Yash: don't give me this look ,, remember I m from Geet side like her Dad , so u have to ask me .

DM & rashi wr chuckling nd Maan rolled his eyes at his Dad's antics , but he enjoyed this side of his dad which was showing yash's happiness.

Maan: sorry ,I forgot .. Dad cn I take ur princess for dinner nd to discuss our marriage .

DM: u cn talk to her here ,, she is not living away .

Maan: haaan,, like she is giving me much Bhav ,, DM she is hesitating to express her desires .

Rashi: Maan beta , sab bahot achanak hua hei ,, usse kuch waqt lagega adjust hone mei ,, accha hei kuch time sath raho aur usse chance do apni baat kahane ka .

Yash: Maan tum already bahot kuch ker chuke ho ,, give her time to adjust nd don't force her ,, try to think from her side too.

Maan: ji dad ,, kya mai le jau usse eve mei ?

Yash: if she is comfortable .

Maan: she is .

Yash: then go , i'll manage my kiddu.

Maan: thanks dad .

Yash: Maan u have to apply for reg marriage here also , talk to Geet.

Maan: OK Dad .

At eve Maan reminded Geet for their date ,, she simply got ready in an Ind outfit ,, she was hesitating to inform Rashi nd Yash that she was going out but as a doting mom Rashi solved her prob ,, she very casually said to Geet to bring fav ice-creams for all ,, patted her cheek lovingly nd went out in lawn.

Geet took a sigh of relief end thanked Rashi in her heart for supporting her at every step ,, all wr so caring for her .


Peep hole --- sharing hearts ... some Geet's past ...

Part - 129

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Edited by singh24 - 11 years ago
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😃


so cute

haiye 😳

date time

aur shoulder kiss 👏

chalo kuch toh progesd hua 😆

Yash was funny 😃
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arrey o Babbie
meri jaaneman

aaj chumme ka vaada hai

ab tu jaldi aa

hummein na aur tarsa

areey tu boli


pichle update ko chumma degi

toh aa ja aa ja

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Originally posted by: dqno1

arrey o Babbie

meri jaaneman

aaj chumme ka vaada hai

ab tu jaldi aa

hummein na aur tarsa

areey tu boli


pichle update ko chumma degi

toh aa ja aa ja

😆



😆😆 mai kimi katker nahi hu...😉

jeej se maang ,,,😆😆
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😃 awww so happy to see
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Originally posted by: dqno1

arrey o Babbie

meri jaaneman

aaj chumme ka vaada hai

ab tu jaldi aa

hummein na aur tarsa

areey tu boli


pichle update ko chumma degi

toh aa ja aa ja

😆

😆😆
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😆😆 mai kimi katker nahi hu...😉

jeej se maang ,,,😆😆



Maan aur Geet ki baat ho rahi hai😲

Tumhari aur jeej ki nahi😆
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😆😆 dekho esse Dona..
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Originally posted by: dqno1



Maan aur Geet ki baat ho rahi hai😲

Tumhari aur jeej ki nahi😆


😆😆 kujhe laga tum gane mere liye gaati ho...
dostana geet ne nahi tumne dekh li ho...😆😉


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