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Posted: 11 years ago
very emotional and wonderful update 😊but the most beautiful and heart touching part is the precap where manu is asking maan that is he his daddy😭😊awww!! its too touchy😭and I am crying already 😭eagerly waiting for next update...continue soon😊
Edited by ns.1 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Emotional update.
Felt very bad for geet
Proud of Yash.
Precap is very sweet.
our cuty Manu will get DAD & call Maan Daddy.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice part
all scolded annie for her immature behaviour ..geet thinking about yash and rashi pain
maan geet and manu going to ny next day morning yash and family will join them later
eagerly waiting for the next part
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome part
And emotional too... Awww poor Geet
Well written Barbie
Waiting for next update
And please count my like...there's problem in hitting like button

Take care
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice update... Geet s hurt vry badly... Continue soon waitng
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Posted: 11 years ago




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Hello my dear friends...

Updating.


Thank you friends for visiting





DD ki marriage pics nd news yahoo per ...

https://in.lifestyle.yahoo.com/tv-actress-drashti-dhami-ties-knot-boyfriend-neeraj-065806711.html



Edited by singh24 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

(For banner credit goes to my dear laksmi )

The Jinx

An object or person that brings bad luck.

It can take you days, months, even years to better your life but it only takes a second for you to ruin someone else's.


Prologue
No one is ever created to be perfect we all have some kind of flaw that makes us unique and make us who we are ...
Many times we cu
rse our flaws and look at them with shame .
But , sometimes for d most blessed of us , God use these flaws to soften our spirit and turn us
into a kinder more beautiful and compassionate
soul ...

Note... This is a fiction inspired by some facts and incidents form our surroundings . If someone find any resemblance in d title and story line they r welcome to leave ur comments on my page (plzz don't pm me)wit
h d link . I'll try my best not to touch any body's work. Need ur love and support to make it an interesting FF.





Part - 124


Part - 125

There was a stillness in room ,, Geet was sitting quietly lost in her thought ,, Manu was clinging to Maan ,, things changed in a mints ,, nobody thought that it wd ended like this ,, everything was happening between Maan nd Geet in an unnatural way ,, Maan brought Manu near Geet , only their kid cd change d heaviness of atmosphere .

Maan: manu baby ask ur mommy what she want to eat nd what my baby want?

Geet looked up at them sadly ,, she was thankful to Maan for accepting Manu with high head ,, he stood besides her , faced all nd replied back ,, though it was very humiliating for Geet but in heart she was relieved that Maan proved himself ,, he did what he said .. accept manu nd her in front of all even he filled her maang ,,, God they r married now ,, he called her his wife .

Seeing her like that Maan sat near her nd settled manu near them ,, he had to broke her silence ,, lil kid was looking at both with hang face but it was he who broke that silence .

Manu: uncle Maan al u plince Daddy ?

Maan looked at him confused : plince daddy ..? What is that baby ?

Manu: dadu said u al my plince daddy nd mommy is plin sess mommy .

Now both Geet nd Maan got shock nd looked at Manu with open mouth ,, Maan' s heart beats raised listening daddy word from manu's mouth ,, he was curious to know what his Dad told his kid to pacify him .

Maan with thudding heart : ur Dadu said this to u sunny ,, why ?

Manu: u u fight fol mommy like plince n nd melly her ,, u al my plince daddy ,, mommy don't cly ,, plince daddy save u .

Geet gasped nd tears rolled down from her eyes even Maan was chocked ,, maan hugged Manu at once nd kissed him madly mumbling .. yes I m ur plince daddy son ,, I m ur daddy ,,, he looked at manu dearly nd pleaded .

Maan: call me daddy baby ,, Geet plzz tell him to call me daddy .

Geet was pouring tears ,, she smiled in tears nd noded in yes ,, she was awed how uncle Yash filled Manu's mind .

Geet: yes baby ,, he is ur daddy ,, Manu's prince daddy .

Manu: leally ,,, my plince daddy ,, no uncle Maan ?

Geet: no ,, call him daddy sunny .

Maan was overwhelm ,, his aching heart got peace listening daddy from his son ,, he smiled nd kissed maus forehead nd then Geet's thaking her .

Manu: plince daddy ,, u al my daddy , OK .

Maan: say it again .

Manu: u al my daddy .

Maan hugged him again kissing her head : love u my baby ,, ur Daddy loves u so much .

Manu: manu love daddy .

Oh my baby ,, muaahh ,, thanks baby nd thanks Geet for giving me this happiness .

Geet gave a faint smile adoring that father-son love ,, her child got his most precious relation nd happiness , she thanked Yash too inwardly who solved her most puzzled situation to make manu understand that Maan is his Daddy ,, how eassely he taught Manu in this tough time of her life.

Maan: Geet it's Manu's sleeping time hold him ,, I m bringing his milk ,, baby take care of ur plincess mommy ,, I m coming in few min OK ..

Manu noded with a smile nd snaggled to Geet ,, Geet loved him nd manu started his Q bank again ,, Maan left from there with a contented smile ,, 1st he called to his dad nd thanked him nd said that Geet& manu r fine now then he made manu's milk ,,there Manu was bombing Q after Q .

Manu: mommy why al u crying ?

Geet: I m not crying baby ,, I m happy that may baby got his daddy .

Manu: plince daddy .

Geet : hummm,, but call him daddy .

Manu: mommy annie aunty is dilty ,, she scold u .

Geet: it's OK baby ,, she was angry ,,, ur daddy scolded her too.

Manu: daddy hand hult ,, blood ,, I gi ve band aid ,, give me ul pulse .

Manu got up to get Geet's purse to take band-aid ,, he jumped down nd bring her purse ,, opened that nd took out band-aid .

Maan came in with his bottle nd with a water bottle ,, he made manu sit on bed .

Maan: now my baby have his milk nd sleep .

Manu: Daddy , ul hand hult , I put band aid .

Maan: oh my baccha , thank u ,, u have ur milk ur mommy'll fix it . come .

After facing a tortuous hr now these 3 souls wr in peace ,, Manu was sucking his milk nd Maan booked their tickets for US ,, Geet was again in guilt ,, she thought that her presence spoiled d function nd happy moments of both d families ,, Maan sensed her turmoil nd sat near her having her in his arms .

Maan: Geet don't think much nd try to catch some sleep .

Geet: I spoiled d function ,, I m sorry .

Maan: sshhh,, never think that ,, don't blame urself I have booked d tickets nd we'll leave TM ,, now sleep I m coming in few min after talking to dad .

Geet: how r all ?

Maan: he is my dad after all nd he'll handle everything ,, u don't worry , all r fine ,, now sleep baby .

He cocooned her ,, she rested her head on his chest nd sleep in his arms ,, she was lil tense but Maan was contented ,, there was a beautiful satisfactory smile on his lips .

After function Maan went to meet his family ,, all wr in Yash room ,, Maan informed them about their departure ,, DM expressed her desire to take steps for proper marriage ,, there wr only few rituals to perform ,, Rashi too backed DM , a proper marriage is needed now .

Yash : OK , then we'll go to US nd talk there for further steps ,, we have to talk Geet too ,, how is she Maan?

Maan smiled : princess mommy is lil fine now, but blaming herself for spoiling d function .

All smiled faintly after long painful hrs .

Yash : she is very nave ,, didn't want to hurt us , but now I won't let her suffer .

Yash sighed nd settled in his bed : Ok , Maan canceled all prev tickets nd booked for all ,, we all r going TM ,, go nd try to get .

Maan nodded nd went hugging nd biding GM to all ,, he didn't get d seats for all in same plane so he booked d pvt charted plane for all ,, he decided to talk to Annie before leaving this place .

Next morning he informed his Dad -Mom about their flight nd instructed Geet to pack their bags ,, he was looking very serious nd went to meet Annie ,, he brought her out to talk her having privacy.

Annie was still in a bad mood ,, Maan gave her a hard look ,, though it was hard to say but he said to clear her mind .

Maan: Annie , u disappointed us last nyt ,, that was shameful ,, u have to ask me or mom-dad before accusing Geet ,, how cd u stoop low ,, u , u abused Manu ,, u called my son a s ... ,,how cd u Annie .

Annie : why r u telling him ur son ,, he is not urs ?

Maan sternly : he is my son Annie ... Manu is my biological son ,, I m his father.

Annie gasped in shocked ,, it was hard to believe for her ,, she was staring at Maan in disbelief.

Maan: this is true ,, he is my blood ,, how nd why I don't want to explain u ,,there wr many things ,, for u it's enough to know that Geet suffered a lot coz of me nd now on wards I won't tolerate if anybody hurt her ,, she didn't want to come but she came only for dad's happiness ,, after 1 hr we r going back ,, our good wishes nd blessing r with u nd ur family ,, bye.

Maan turned nd moved back leaving a shocked nd puzzled Annie there ,, she was in a very odd situation ,, realizing that in her jealous she became blind nd behaved so rudely ,, she humiliated a girl who already was hurt bcoz of his bro ,, she didn't know anything nd decided to ask everything from her mom, but what about Geet ,, how she'll face her ?


Precap - ---- new beginning ...


Part - 126

sorry for mistakes ...


Edited by singh24 - 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: -lakshmi-



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