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Posted: 18 years ago
#81
Part 17

Uday is like

Who cares about that!!!

Jai is like I care about it!!

My wife is an illiterate!!!!

Uday is like

Why are you looking at that!!!

Uday is like

U know she's here for one purpose!!!!!

She's not here for too long!!!!

Jai is like

Couldn't u get someone else????

Uday is like…

Just let it be!!….

Jai is mad

And he walks off!!!!

During dinner….

Everyone was asking Jai

Where they were going to go for their honeymoon!!

Uday is like oh yeah!!!

He asks them

Where do u guys want to go??

I will book the tickets!!!

Bani is quiet

Jai is looking at Uday..

As like wat the heck are you saying!!!

They all tease Bani

But she doesn't say anything!!!!!

She looks at Jai!!

But he hasn't said anything!!

After dinner

Bani was helping clean up!!!!!

She had to.. she was the bahu of the house!!

But the gals did work too……

Bani told them to leave it!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#82
Part 18

After cleaning up and wat not….

Bani went up

She was scared to go up!

Cuz after that incident in the study…………

Wen she came in the room…

Jai wasn't in there

She was thinking

Where could he be?

She went into the bathroom

And changed her night gown

She came and sat on the bed!!!

She waited for Jai to come!!!

But he hadn't come!!!

She saw the time

It was almost 10!!!

Little did she realize

That she went to sleep…

Jai had came in the room

He had been drinking again!!!

He was wobbling and what not

He just went on the bed

And knocked out completely!!!

Next Morning….

Bani woke up!!!

She took her shower and what not!

Jai woke up!

And she's like

How are you feeling??

Jai is likie

My head hurts

Bani is like

I will bring you some medicine!!!

She goes

And brings him back some!!!!



The End!! (please comment!!!)
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Posted: 18 years ago
#83
grt love it
i am waiting for thm to fall in love
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Posted: 18 years ago
#84
Part 19

Jai takes it

And he tells her

That she doesn't have to do these things!!!

Bani is looking at him

She's like

I am ur wife

I am suppose too

Jai is like

Well…

Please don't!!

I don't like it!!!

Bani is looking at him!!!!

And then

She ends up leaving

And doesn't say anything!!

Jai is like damn!!

He's soo confused!!!..

Bani goes down

She saw no one in the kitchen

So she made breakfast!!!!

Uday came down!!!!

Bani came out with breakfast!!!!!

Uday saw her

And he's like

Where's Jai?

Bani is like

He's upstairs!!

Uday asks her

Wats wrong???

U seem sad!!

Bani looks at him

And tells him its nothing!

Uday: Something is wrong??

Bani: No! I am fine!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#85

me first...well sort of...i got too excited and got sandwiched between guli 😆...

still me caught up...jai...a*s...jerk...chi...he was rough with her...did he even realize wha the was doing 😡...ther...me coming after him with danda...chodungi nahin main 😡...but haila...why does uday care...he just wants an heir...chi...🤢...lanat hai uday paar aur bani ke parents paar...chi...koi aaisi parents kissi ko naa deh....cant wait...u know what i want to see...😉

JAZ

Edited by jnawaz - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#86
Part 20

Uday tells her

That no..

That is something is bothering you!!!

He's like tell me!!!

You can tell me everything!!

Bani is like

I was just worried for him….

Cuz he drank last night

And this morning he had a headache…

So I gave him medicine…

But I didn't know that he doesn't like me doing all of these things!!

She's like

How am I suppose to know..

I am his wife

I am suppose to watch him

Take care of him!!!

But he doesn't like it!!

Uday tells Bani

Not to worry about it!!

Jai has a bad habit like that!!!!..

She's like I will talk to him!!!!

Bani looks at him!!!

Everyone was at the breakfast table

Not Uday and Jai!!!

Uday went to Jai….

And he's like

Wat are you doing??

Jai is like what??

Uday: U know what…

He tells him stop being mean to Bani!!!!!!….

Jai is like

U know very well..

That I don't want to be married to her

Uday is like well its too late!!!



The End! (Please comment)

I promise story will pick up!!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#87
haha y does uday cares.
i hate jai
cont. soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
#88
awww poor bani jai needs a kik at his b*tt 😛 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
#89
gr8 updates guli...update soon 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#90
Oh heck! Whilst reading all the updates i was like swearing at Jai's attitude 😡 😡 ..ok so u didn't want to get married but to treat a young girl like that. Drunk on the suhaag raat and really hurting Bani 😡 ...poor thing.

Well now he knows she can't read or write...god knows what more hungama will happen. Uday is trying to reason with Jai to try and be a little nice to Bani...wonder if that works.

As for the honeymoon...don't think they will be going anywhere at this rate 😕 😕

Intersting storyline...keep it coming!
👏 👏
Tazoo!

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