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Posted: 18 years ago
So much is happening in this FF, last two parts were so heartbreaking 😭 (apart from the pregnancy news and AJ's first day on the nursery😊)
On part 80 there was a dialogue that omg it cracked me up🤣 I even fell of my chair and read thrice because I couldn't believe was it that written?! When Atharva comes to know about Bani's "prenancy"😆 he says something like "woh andar kaise ghuss gaiye😕🤣🤣" if this was real would be such an awkward scene😕🤢...
The way Jai was supporting and taking care of Bani lightened up a bit, I want to kill that Mohan😡 he ruined what it could have been a cute moment- pregnancy news- Hats off to Senior and Junior Walia's👏👏😆... I feel like hugging Atharva, he is sweet, naughty, caring, loving... there aren't children like him! The one and only Atharva😳
You know when you introduced Sanju it really sounded her. I remember the first time we chatted she said my name is Sanjana but everyone calls me Sanju😆😆
About the name well Bani found a way but I also have an idea to resolve Jai and Atharva's problem... Hehe instead of one lil Bani there could be two lil Bani's😃 Rani and Krishna😉
Have so many things to comment but have to go to bed
Rocking updates👏👏👏 (almost on part 100😃🥳)
Love you

Edited by Nancy_89 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
ah...atlast..hv read it....namaste g....hw r u g.....aapko..india ke 60years..of indpendence mubarak ho......chalo back to reply...it ws an awesum update...arthrv is cute...n i lyk...d description of skool...n teachrs...interaction wd children....chalo mein bagte hun ab...colg jana hai...mere teachers itne ache nai hai na....bye..tc...n plz cont soon....
luv
swati!!!
Edited by swati_bhatia - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
❤️ my pyaari billi # 2...U made my day.. 😛😛 Just logged in and saw a dhamakedar update!!! hayee..mein tho abhi bhi ussi nursery mein baiti hoon 😍

Ooh..so it was our munni who was the object of cliff hanger in the last part!! Yaar that was the most fantastic one..She came home early so that she can leave Atharva at the nursery..Atharva was so excited to see her there and the whole family joined in to welcome her 👏 ..the true essence of a joint happy family..I just loved Anjali 🤗

Both father and son beating themselves up in taking care of their precious person..Both the Walias are so adorable(but any day I want my sweeto 😳😳 )

The whole Nihita part jsut cracked me up really 😆 😆 Haye..haye our Gulli baby and Davia jaan are getting married to Varun n Rishi respectively..Though dollies shaadi, shaadi tho shaadi hain, haina Tazo 😉 😳😳 Tho girls details kab de rahi ho 🤣
Yaar, this Nihita kiskey oopar gayi hai?? I mean I don't think Anu or Rohith are like this..I am sure Jigs ki poori arrogance hai ismey..Mere sweeto ko dara rahi hai 😡😡

Loved the small small moments like going to the pooja ghar, takign blessings from all elders, advices to my sweeto by mama n papa and mainly Jai carrying his 3 most precious love to the pooja ghar!!!👍🏼

The mega hit of this whole part was the nursery👍🏼 Aur kyun na ho, mein jo thi mere Sweeto ke saath..In fact I am still there only..I am planning not to go from here, kahiin mere Sweeto ko miss kardoon tho 😕 (Yaar mere khaney peeny aur soney ka intezaam kar dena 😉😆 ) Atharva darling, don't be nervouce, mein hoon na 😃

Oh God, mera sweeto bahuth boltha hai yaar..Sabi jagah "Prenant" ka rap laga ke rakha hai..aur oopar se Sanju is so curious to know about "Prenant" Mein kya karoon 😕😕..God I think I am going to need extra energies to keep my Sweeto out of that love n Prenant topic..

I just can't say how much I loved the whole nursery part..it was just so real. Tanu madam are u still up or just fainted after seeing JW!!!
Anil and Sanju are so cute..That Bobby just cracked me up.. 🤣🤣 Kushboo had to start the music immd to keep him off by advertising his antics 😆😆 ..Kushboo this is just a start..there are so much to go through 😉😆😆

My sweeto drew for everyone something or the other..Hyaee..he complimented his Rano massi as well..and drew her with chashma 😆😆..Drew for Bani some flowers..for his father his office...It was all awesome.

The last part about the name discussion was fabulous..I should say that KDKP has only one superstar and that is my Sweeto 😊😊 His small brain works so much..Took the name Rani from his mom's pet name..The argument between baap-beta about the name was very touching..Rani and Krishna..Finally the ending was just awwwwwwwwww as u had mentioned..The symbol of true Happy Family 😛😛

God, I have written so much..But you deserve extra hugs for this part 🤗

Chal, ab mein chalthi hoon..TB # 1 se meeting karna hai ki thode din ke liye mein tumhaare TB clan mein shaamil nahi ho sakthi...u see I have got a wonderful job at a nursery with my sweeto.. 😳😆😆

Love,
Rama madam 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
Great update! I luved the parts of jai taking care of bani so cute. Atharvs first day was pretty interesting. I hate mohan hurting poor bani.Last scene was very good showing a happy family. Please continue soon! ( I was just wondering how old is Atharv?) 😊
Edited by idfan - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
Hi friend thanx for the lovely comments.(all replies on page 90 😊 ) 😃 Glad everyone enjoyed the last part with Atharv's day at the nursery. Hope u like the next part…bahut mushkil se type kiya hai …particularly after the AD-DDG announcement this week. 🤢 Sorry in advance if it bores u.
Jiggy this one is for u 🤗…MOTW mein acchi khaasi gril ho rahi ho….i will pop by to grill u too…so be prepared 😆
Tazo!


Part 82 - Dastak (for those who don't know what that means…it means to Knock!)

Few weeks later

Over the last few weeks Bani had been recovering well from her injuries. The bruise to her head and hip had healed and she was back to her normal self, going about her daily chores. Atharv had also become accustomed to going to the nursery on a daily basis. He really enjoyed his time there and would rave about it each day….telling the family what he learnt what he did. Both Jai and Bani loved listening to him talk about his day. The way his eyes twinkled, his smile, his expressions, clearly reflected how much fun he was having there.

Today the entire family was at Anu and Rohits place. They had just moved into a new home and were holding a small pooja and get together. (btw readers isn't it strange how Jigyasa didn't think of living with her daughter rather than going into the chawl, in KS…Anu ek baar bhi ghar waalon ki khabar lene nahin aye 😕)

Anu and Rohit wanted Bani to attend but she refused because of Atharv, who didn't want to skip nursery, to attend the pooja. Atharv had even argued with Anu over the phone why she couldn't have kept the pooja after nursery time. So Anu had to explain that the panditji had told them this time was auspicious to hold the pooja. Bani apologised to Anu for not attending but said she, Jai and Atharv would pop by later in the day.

Seen as though Bani was home alone, Jai decided to take the morning off from work. He planned to first drop Atharv off to nursery then go shopping with her.

In the car

Atharv (sitting up into Bani's lap): Mama….aap log shopping jaa rahe haina?

Bani: Haan beta…u want something? (tidying his hair)

Atharv: Woh Mama…meri liye dher saari crayons aur pens lena….mujhe Sanju ko dena hai. (aye hai 😉 mera chhota romeo)

Jai, looked at him and sniggered.

Bani: Sanju ke liye…kyun?

Jai: Haan… mujhe bhi batao…(me too 😉)

Atharv (putting his arms up onto Bani's shoulder): Woh Mama…she's very nice…mujhe apni crayons deti hai…mujhe bhi dena chahiye na?

Bani: Sanju teri best friend haina…toh zaroor dena chahiye…I will get some crayons, pens and other stuff for u…ok? Sanju seems like a very nice girl… hum se nahin milaoge kabhi

Atharv: Aap log aate ho…woh ghar chali jaati hai… everytime miss kar dete hai…(slapping his head…giggles 😆)

Jai: Awww…and what about ur other friend…Urmmm...Anil na?

Atharv: He's the best 😃 👍🏼…pata hai uske paas bhi Spiderman ki game hai…meri jaise… he's nice…bas woh Bobby!! Urghhhh...i don't like him…bahut ganda hai! 😡 Sab ko sata ta hai! 😕 Feel likeeee….(fisting his hands) (steady now sweeto!)

Bani: Beta…aisa nahin karte… no fighting ok…acche bacche ban na…tumhaari koi complaints nahin aana chahiye

Atharv: Mama…I am good…bas…sometimes…gussa aata hai

Bani: Hmmm….like ur Papa

Jai: Mein aur gussa? Arre gussa toh mein hota hi nahin ab…tum joh ho…bas tumhe dekh leta hoon..toh gussa…yun chala jaata hai..(clicking his fingers) 😆

Atharv: Papa aise? (tries to click his fingers…with not much luck…but continues trying)…oh ho! Nahin ho raha!

Jai (chuckles): Haan aise…(clicks his fingers again)…keep trying ..ho jayega! 😊

As the car stopped at a traffic light, a young boy selling flowers, tapped the window on Jai's side…

Boy: Saab…phool…le lo na…madam ke liye… 😊…bahut khoobsoorat taaze phhol hai…

Jai, smiled then bought a bunch of pink roses, paid the boy, then hand them to Bani.

Bani 😳: Thank you! They smell great…and so pretty.

Atharv 🤔(watching the smile on Bani's face as she looked at the bunch of roses): Urmmm….Mama…mein…iss mein se …(counts on his fingers)…urrmmm…thweee flowers le loon!

Jai: Haiii…mera baccha toh bada romantic ho raha hai…Sanju ke liye? 😉

Atharv: Uffo!!! Nahin… 😕 (irritated)

Bani: Toh phir?

Atharv: Rama Madam…Khushboo Madam and Tanu Madam!!! 😃 They are the best….!! 🤗 (lucky girls!) Mujhe always help karte hai….(they never let u out of their sight I bet 😉)

Bani: Awww….that's really thoughtful of u …(takes three roses out)….yeh lo beta! Tumhaari teachers bahut khush honge

Atharv: Thanx Mama!

Jai: Don't u want to give Sanju one…apne baal mein lagaygi! (Jai stop teasing the boy😆)

Bani (nudging him): Aap bhi na… isse encourage mat kijiye…

Jai: I don't have to encourage the boy…he's too smart…mere se bhi dus kadam aage hai…abhi yeh haal hai toh bada hoga tab toh ladkiyon ki line lag jayegi (chuckles)…teachers to bahut khush hojayenge Atharv ke iss gesture ko le kar.

Bani shook her head…then looked at Atharv…putting the roses away carefully in his bag.

They arrived at the nursery…Atharv jumped out…kissed Bani…then ran off.

Bani: Arre …bye beta….kitna excited ho jaata hai yaahan ponchte hi… bhaag bhi gaya!.

Jai: Ab hum bhi chale….

Bani: Chaliye 😊

Bani and Jai are about to sit in the car …

Atharv (shouts): Mamaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!!

Bani, turns around…to see Atharv calling her over.

Jai: Bula raha hai…(Both head over)

Atharv: Mama….woh hai Sanju!!! (starts waving at her as she is dropped off by her mother.)

Sanju races over, smiles at Atharv..then looks shyly at Jai and Bani. 😊 😳

Bani (bending down to her): Hello…tum Sanjana ho na?

Sanjana (nods): Hmmm 😳

Jai: Hey…nice to meet u….aren't u a pretty little girl. Atharv says u are his best friend….bahut acchi dost ho.

Sanjana giggles….shuffles her feet about shyly. 😳 😳

Sanjana's mom comes over and introduces herself to Jai and Bani.

Sanjana's Mother: Hello…mein Mrs. Mathur…Sanjana ki maa…

Bani: Bahut khushi aapse mil kar…Mein Bani Walia….aur yeh mere husband Mr. Walia

Mrs. Mathur: Aap logo ko kaun nahin jaanta…iss shehar ki sab se bade log…its really nice meeting u. 😊

Jai: Atharv aur Sanjana ki acchi khaasi dosti hogaye hai…bahut baatein karta hai….aye na kisi din hamare ghar par…

Mrs. Mathur: Zaroor aaungi…aap bhi kisi din haamre yahaan aaye…bas yaheen nursery ke peeche waali street mein hi rehti hoon.

Bani: Sure…hum ayenge kisi din

Atharv (cutting in the conversation): Ok Mama, Papa…jaana hai…byeeeeeee…Rama Madammmmmm…(runs off ) mein aapke liye kuch laya hoon!!!! (jump up and down dear!! 😆 ur sweeto has bought u something)

Sanjana also runs off saying bye to her Mama.

Mrs. Mathur: Bye beta…(turning to Bani)….accha mein bhi chalti hoon….nice meeting u Mrs. Walia… phir milenge

Bani: Bye Mrs. Mathur…(she leaves)...she's really sweet isn't she Mr. Walia? No wonder Atharv likes Sanjana…she's very much like her mother.

Jai: Hmmm…toh rishte ki baat karen? (laughs 😆) (so soon Jai? 😆 )

Bani (glares at him then laughs 😆): Aap bhi na…kya sochne lage… ab chale shopping.? (Both smiled at each other and headed back to their car. )

In the car

Bani: Mr. Walia…. aapko office mein koi zaroori kaam toh nahin haina? I mean shopping mein zyaada time hogaya toh

Jai: Nahin Bani…it can wait…duper ko chala jaaunga…abhi tum aur hum thodi se shopping kar le…enjoy lunch some place, then I will drop u off at home and thennn I will head back to work, theek hai?

Bani, nods happily. 😊

The Mall
When they reached the mall the first shop they ended up in was for children…toys, clothes u name it everything under one roof…Bani got busy in buying clothes for Atharv, whilst Jai went to the toy section. He looked at some toys for Atharv, then spotted some new video games.

Bani, turned around to see where Jai was, to show him a t-shirt for Atharv, when she spotted him looking at some video games.

Bani: Mr. Walia…(walking over)….no games!

Jai: But…

Bani: But kya? Bahut games khel raha hai aaj kal..ankhen kharaab hojayegi uski…

Jai: Bani…yehi toh umar hai yeh sab khelne ki

Bani (raising an eyebrow): Toh phir aap kyun baith jaate hai uske saath khelne mein…(hands on hips)

Jai 😳: Woh….actually…I give him company…khelta thodi hoon…bas…

Bani: Rehne dijiye sab pata hai mujhe…raat ko mujhe yeh keh kar ke "Atharv ko sula kar aata hoon" aur phir video games chaloon kar dete hai…u think I don't know. Bahut bigad rahe hai aap.

Jai: Well…that…I mean…urrrmm…le loon? (Making a sweet face 😊)

Bani: No…yeh rakhiye aur chaliye…(drags him away)….help me pick some clothes for Atharv.

Jai rolled his eyes then followed Bani. They picked out some clothes for him, picked up the crayons, pens etc …which he had asked for. A friend of Bani's happened to enter the shop and both got busy chatting. This gave Jai a moment to sneak away and buy that video game.

As he paid for the game and quickly slipped it into his pocket, just as Bani said bye to her friend and turned back towards him.

Bani: Kya hua? Why are u looking all flustered?

Jai: Na…kuch bhi toh nahin…garmi haina….shall we go? Payment kar diya hai maine sab samaan ka.

Bani: Haan chaliye…(makes her way out…Jai sighs with relief) (bach gaye janoo! 😆 )

Both shopped around some, Jai bought Bani some new sarees and salwaar suits, then took her over to a jewellery store….gazed in the window.

Jai: Bani…woh dekho…those earrings…beautiful aren't they?

Bani:Hmmm…very pretty,

Jai: Lets get u a pair….they will look great on u.

Bani: But already hi kitna kuch le liya…aap apne liye bhi toh kuch lijiye.

Jai: Arre jis ke paas tum ho usse aur kisi cheez ki kya zaroorat… (wraps his arm around her waist 🤗)

Bani: Phir bhi…I want u to buy something for urself.

Jai: Toh mein bhi ek jodi earrings le leta hoon… happy? 😆

Bani: Not a bad idea!!!

Jai: Bani…I was kidding dear!!

Bani: Why don't u get ur ear pierced…and wear that one (point in the window)

Jai: Bani plzzz…yeh sab mein nahin karta…business man hoon…koi rockstar nahin! 😆

Bani (laughs): Toh phir woh ring le lijiye…its really nice…will look great…chaliye (drags him inside the store)

Jai asked the assistant to get the earrings out first…then put them against Bani's ear.

Jai: Ab khoobsoorat lag rahe hai…(to the assistanrt) …suniye isse pack kar dijiye.

Bani: Aur haan woh joh gents ring hai…woh bhi dikhaye…(assistant shows her it Bani puts it on Jai's finger)….told u it would look good….(to the assistant)….sunniye yeh bhi pack kar dijiye….aur haan woh gents earring bhi dikhaye zara…the small diamond one!

Jai: Bani…I am happy with the ring sweety…usse kyun le rahi ho?

Bani: Meri marzi!! Just in case u change ur mind on having ur ear pierced!

Jai: Bani…I am not getting my ear pierced!

Bani: Dekhte hai! (takes the bag of the assistant…sniggered and walked out 😆)

Asisstant: Sir…I think u really would look great with that earring ur wife has just bought. 😉

Jai, rolled his eyes, smiled at the women then made his way out. He looked around as he couldn't spot Bani and wondered where she disappeared all of a sudden till she called out to him. She was sitting over in a coffee shop…waving him over. Jai smiled and joined her.

Both sat in the coffee shop and enjoyed a late morning coffee...when Jai's cell rang.

Jai (answering): Kya? Oh god…can't u guys handle it…I am a little busy….(Bani looked curious…Jai groaned 😕)…accha theek hai. (hangs up)

Bani: U have to go?

Jai: Yeah…koi problem aagayi need to look into it personally. Sorry sweetheart..kitna mazaa aa raha tha, socha toh tha ke saath mein lunch bhi karenge..but…

Bani: Arre…its ok…chaliye. (Both head back to the car)

Jai asked the driver to drop him off to the office, which was closeby, then take Bani straight home. Jai kissed Bani goodbye when they reached the office, then told the driver to drive back safely home.
On the way back, Bani remembered she needed to pick up her medical reports, from the doctors surgery, which she left them behind on her last visit, so told the driver to head there first.

When she arrived at the surgery she bumped into her Doctor, Dr. Davia (ab happy hona Davia darling…gudiya se Doctor ban gayi 😉).

Dr. Davia: Arre Mrs. Walia…aap yahaan?

Bani: Woh mein apni reports lene aye thi last time yaheen par bhool gayi tha na…

Dr. Davia: Actually aaj mein aapko phone karne waali hi thi…accha hua aap khud hi aagayi…kuch baat karni thi aapse…aye mere saath

Bani (concerned): Koi problem hai?

Dr. Davia: Mrs. Walia…aap aye toh sahi mere saath….

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Bani arrived back at Walia Mansion around 1pm that day. A little lost in her thoughts, she made her way into Walia Mansion….when Tony called out to her.

Tony: Maam…aapke liye lunch le aaoon ya aap kha kar aye ho?

Bani: Huh?

Tony: Lunch Maam…le aaoon?

Bani: Oh…haan Tony...le aao…Mr. Walia toh office chale..mere liye kuch le aao

Tony brought out lunch for Bani, which she sat down and ate very slowly…thinking about her meeting with the doctor.

*******Flashback******
Dr. Davia: Mrs. Walia…baby seems to be developing ok…but….ermmm

Bani (worried): What is it doctor?

Dr. Davia: It seems….there could be some complications….

Bani: Kaisi complications?

Doctor: Ji…baat yeh hai ke….

( Guys u will find out later what the problem is sorry about the cliff hanger…but at least its not at the end of this update 😆 )

*******Flashback ends********

Coming out of her thoughts…despite losing her appetite… she made sure she ate up everything. Bani pondered over how she would tell Jai about what the doctor had informed her, she knew she couldn't hide it…but if she told him ….he would be extremely worried. Sighing, she got up from the table…when Jai wrapped her from behind 🤗

Bani (turning around): Aap? Aap aa bhi gaye?

Jai: Baniiiiiiiiiii….(taking her in his arms tightly and kissing her deeply ❤️) Mmmmmmmmmm (satisfied…pulls away): Haan… gorgeous…mein agaya!😉

Bani: Bahut jaldi aagaye…and ur looking very happy…baat kya hai? Aur itni acchi kiss kyun? (putting her arms around his neck 😊)

Jai (rocking her gently…his forehead resting on hers): Yes Baniiii I am very happppyyy…cuzzzzzzzz….i am back home 😉…office ka kaam jhat se nipta ke agaya tumhaare paas. Now we can have some more fun.

Bani: What did u have in mind? 😳 (running a hand across his cheek)

Jai: Hmmmm…that is a good question…well…. ghar pe hum akele hai right? Baaki sab ko toh aane mein time hai…and we still have a few hours til Atharv's nursery is over…sooooooo…shall we…head towards our room….and snuggle up!😉

Bani: Aap bhi na… 😳 (punching him lightly)

Jai: Arre… I thought u would get all excited…koi probem hai? Bhuji bhuji kyun lag rahi ho?

Bani: Nahin…bas…nahin kuch nahin…thodi si thakaan mehsoos kar rahi thi

Jai (caressing her cheek): Oh….i hope baby isn't troubling u too much in there…(bends to her stomach) ….heyyyy Krishna Rani …Mama ko zyaada tang toh nahin kar rahi na? U be good in there…Papa ki baat maanogi na?

Bani: Na…baby seems fine…(changing the topic…smiles)…accha bataye aapne khana kha liya?

Jai: Nahin…maine socha tumhaare saath hi kar loon…like I promised (touching her nose)

Bani: Oh…maine toh abhi abhi kha liya…aapne phone kar diya hota… that u are coming back home….

Jai: Its ok sweetheart….tumne time par khana kha liya that is more important…but u can join me for a little refill na! 😉

Bani 😊: Mein khaana lekar aaye..

Jai (holding her back): Tonyyy….khana lekar aao…

Tony Ji sir.

Jai: Aur tum mere paas yahaan baitho…(taking over to the dining table and sitting next to her)

Bani: Office wapas jayenge aap?

Jai: Tum kaho toh na jao..😉

Bani 😳: I'm mean… aur kaam hai aaj?

Jai: Actually kaam toh hai…ek legal matter discuss karna hai, but since Tarun is gonna be handling that matter I thought why not invite him home…yaheen pe meeting karlenge… kuch ghanton mein yaheen pe aa jayega (Tarun is back again)…and til then all my time is urs. 😃 😉

Jai and Bani talked together over lunch. She wanted to tell him about what happened at the surgery but couldn't bring herself to say it….Jai was way to happy and she didn't want to spoil his mood. Finally she decided that she won't tell him at all…instead take care of herself like the doctor suggested that was the only way and leave the rest to god.

Jai finshed up his lunch then got up to go to washroom…Bani got up too… and was clearing the table away when she heard a knock on the door.

Bani: Tarun hoga…bahut jaldi aagaya….(shouts to him)….Tarun aajao….

Knocks again

Bani: Arre… andar kyun nahin raha…(deciding to go open the door herself…she opened it)

Bani stood there frozen. Her face paled… stepped back slowly…then ran into the house screaming.

Bani: Mr. Waliaaaaaaa…Mr. Walia….Mr. Walia!

Jai (rushing out): Kya hua Bani?

Bani hid her face in his chest, hugged him tightly

Jai: Bani whats wrong? Whats the matter? Kaap kyun rahi ho aise?

Bani (whispers): Woh….woh …

Jai: Bani kya? (looks up as Bani points behind her back…holds Jai even more tightly)

Jai 😡 : Mohan!!!! (still looking black and blue) (Oh heck! Uski toh mein!!!! 😡 Phir agaya?)….How dare u come back here 😡 😡…pichli baar maine kya kiya tha bhool gaya…or u want more.
(Give it to him Jai!!! 😡 )

Mohan (ignoring Jai…walks upto them both): Hi Bani…kaisi ho? Apne pyaare Mohan ki yaad toh bahut aye hogi? (Pyare Mohan! 😡 My foot)

Bani, doesn't look at him…her head still buried in Jai's chest.

Jai (arms wrapped around Bani): Mohan! Tumhe to ussi din khatam kardena tha mujhe…aaj yahaan aane ki himmat toh na karta 😡

Mohan (low voice): Kya karoon…kisiki yaad bahut sata rahi thi…aana para mujhe..aur woh hai ki hamaari taraf ek nazar dekhti bhi nahi (Such a B*****D 😡 )

Jai getting very mad 😡…pulls Bani away from him

Jai: Bani andar jao!

Bani, looking down..shakes her head…hugs him again.

Jai (pulls away): Bani plzzz….sweetheart andar jao. (Bani reluctantly goes inside..stands at the door)

Mohan spotted her peering from the door…winked and smiled at her 😈 Bani looked away in disgust. 😡

Jai turned to face Mohan 😡… and punched him hard in the face ….then again…and grabbed his collar 👏 👏 (do chaar meri taraf se bhi laga dena! 😡)

Jai: Bahut badi galti ki hai tumne yahaan doobara aane ki 😡 😡 …aaj tumhe zinda nahin chhodunga! 😡

Mohan (smirks): Agaya na gussa Jai…teri yehi sab se badi problem hai…(starts yelling)… Inspector saab dekh liya na aapne …

Jai (looked up and saw the cops enter): What..the…!

Inspector (pulls Jai away from Mohan and handcuffs him): Mr Jai Walia…aapko arrest kiya jaa raha Mohan Khandelwal pe jaanleva hamla karane ka…aapko joh bhi kuch kehna hai police station mein aa kar kahiye

Bani (runs back out): Nahinnnnn…Mr. Waliaaaaaaaaa…(grabbing onto Jai again…then looks at the inspector)… Plzzz inspector saab…inhone kuch nahin kiya..😭…sab inki…(looks at Mohan)

Mohan: And what exactly did I do? (crossing his arms over his chest 😈)

Bani: U…. aap…woh….😭…(looks at Jai..hugs him again)

Jai: U bloody well know what u did….ab saara ilzaam mujhe pe daal na chahte ho

Mohan: Oh yeah so are u gonna tell me what exactly I did to provoke such an action from u?

Jai: U were….(stopping)

Mohan: Go on…say it…I am listening… so is the Inspector (knowing Jai wasn't gonna tarnish his wifes name)…so what exactly did I do? All the details plzzz….(whispers in Jai's ear)…apni biwi ki acchi khaasi badnaami hogi agar uska naam mere saath joda gaya…I will say she is a characterless woman and twists things in such away woh khud hi apna muh kisiko dikha nahin payegi

Bani also heard what he whispered and grabbed onto Jai tightly.

Jai (moving her away): Sweetheart nothing to be afraid off…kuch nahin hoga… ….(cups her face).. look at me…plzzz ghabrao mat…be strong… (Bani nods…composes herself a little…moves aside)

Jai: As for you…you B*****…(grabs his collar again)….sharam aati hai mujhe ke maine tujhe jaise ghatiya insaan se kabhi dosti ki… 😡

Inspector grabs Jai and starts taking him out.

Bani: Mr. Waliaaaaa…Oh god 😭….please Inspector saab inhe mat lejaye…inhone kuch nahin kiya…sab inhone…sab inke wajah se…😡 (gives an angry stare)

Inspector: Sorry maam..inhe lejana hoga report joh darj karay hai…Mohan Khandelwal ne

Bani: Lekin baat woh nahin hai….woh….he tried…he was…(unable to say it… remembering that day again…she gasped for air… began to feel faint)

Jai (holding onto her and seating her down): Bani…kuch mat kaho…I don't want to bring that all up for u now…tumhaari tabiyat kharaab hojayegi…have faith in me…mein abhi jaa rahe hoon…jaldi wapas aaunga…

Bani: Nahin Mr. Walia….plzzz….😭…don't leave me

Jai: Bani…bilkul chinta mat karo…ghar waalon ko phone kar ke bula do…Bani listen to me… be strong…(wipes her tears and looks deep into them)…mujhe kuch nahin hoga…I'll be back before u know it.

Bani, controlling herself, nodded.

Inspector: Chaliye Mr. Walia

Mohan: Soooo…looks like Mrs Walia is home alone…how nice! 😈 Chhota Walia bhi Nursery mein hoga….how convenient

Jai (being dragged out): Godammit Mohan …if anything happens to family…u are in serious trouble. 😡

Inspector: Chaliye Mr. Walia

Mohan: I am coming too…mujhe bhi dekhna hai ke THE GREAT JAI WALIA salaakhon ke peeche kaise dikhta hai..bye Bani..see u soon! 😉

Bani, scared but Jai's words to be strong kept ringing in her ear…so calmed a little and grabbed the phone was about to dial out when the phone rang….

Bani (shaking): He..Hello….

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Police Station

Jai: I want to call my lawyer.

Mohan (whispers in his ear): Oh u do that…in the meantime I will just go and pick up Junior Walia…with sweet Bani...(out loud to the inspector)…..inspector saab ab toh aap ko meri zaroorat nahin hai na…bahut saara kaam hai mujhe…(lookly slyly back at Jai)

Jai, lost it again 😡…threw another punch at him! 👏

Inspector (grabs Jai takes him to the lock up): Aapko lock up mein bandh karna hoga…bahut hogaya…

Mohan, laughs. 😈 (does he liked getting punched by Jai or something 😕)

Jai is put behind bars. (this is not good 😕)

Mohan (gloating): See Jai…mujhe buri tarah se maar ke tum ne kitni badi galati ki hai. Adhmare haalet mein mujhe hospital ke bahaar phenk wa diya na…kitne hafte behosh raha mein.

Jai: Mar gaye hote toh accha hota! 😡

Mohan: Sorry to have disappointed …hosh mein aane ke baad maine tai karliya tha…ke tumhe toh mein chhounga nahin…ab dekho aagaye na mushkil…aaj jail ki hawa khane ki naubat agayi…(whispers again)…..and ur darling wife is allllll alone….she would just love my company right now…

Jai: U touch her and u will die Mohan…and this time I mean it. 😡

Mohan (ignoring him…continues): As for that little Atharv…even he's at his nursery!! (Jai glared at him..fuming. 😡)Aaj toh tumhe bail bhi nahin milegi…courts bandh jo hai…ab do dino tak toh tumhe yaheen sad na hoga …

Tarun (arrives.): Not if I can help it…inspector saab yeh lijiye Jai Walia ke bail papers. (Haila my Tarun! 😃 Ahem..sorry thodi excited hogayi 😳 😆…sahi time pe entry! 👏)

Mohan: What the! 😲

Tarun: Mohan…tum toh ek ghatiya dost nikle lekin Jai ke abhi bhi kuch acche dost hai joh uski bure waqt mein kaam aate hai…(Mwahhhhhh…ok did I just do that! 😳) Mein ghar pe hi aya tha jab Jai ko police le ja rahe the…toh mein forun bail papers tayaar karne chala gaya…court bandh hone se pehle…rahi baat Bani Bhabhi ke… toh mere hote hue unne koi bhi nuksaan nahin kar sakta hai…maine already ghar pe security ka extra intezaam kar diya hai…aur Atharv ko bhi nursery se ghar le aya hoon. (Jai sighed with relief)

Inspector: Mr. Walia…aap ja sakte hai…

Jai came out of the lock up….smiling at Mohan, as he stormed out.

Jai: Thanx Tarun tum ek sacche dost ho…I was really worried kahin Bani ko kuch ho na jaye…iss Mohan ka koi bharosa nahin…kahin dono ko uthwa na le….I really owe u one Tarun…

Tarun: Kya Jai tum bhi…itna toh kar hi sakta tha…

Jai: But how did u know about all this

Tarun: Actually jab main tumhaare ghar poncha toh dekha ke bahaar police khadi hai…lekin woh andar nahin jaa rahi thi…darwaaze pe khade hue sun rahe the…mujhe ajeeb laga toh mein peeche ke raaste se andar aaya aur saari baatein sunli…tumhaare aur Mohan ke beech…jab tumhe police le ja rahe the…maine tumhare ghar ki security bada di..Bani bhabhi ko phone kiya…and told her not to worry…I'll handle everything. (Oh so he was the one that called…nice work…I'm impressed 👏)

Jai: Thanx a lot Tarun. 😊

Jai and Tarun made their way out of the police station and walked to Taruns car. Closeby Mohan stood next to his car, kicked his car in anger then slammed his hand against it in frustration.

Jai: Tarun iss Mohan ne aaj hadh kardi…I want him behind bars… 😡

Tarun: Lekin Jai kaise?

Jai: Dammit kuch bhi karke…mere parivaar pe buri nazaar daal ta hai…mujhe jail ke hawa khilane ki koshish ki 😡

Jai: Tarun hit me!

Tarun: What? 😲

Jai: I said hit me godammit!

Tarun: Jai…lekin.

Jai: Maarta hai ya mein tumhe maaru! 😡

Tarun, threw a punch at him.

Jai : U can do better than that….come on!!!

Tarun threw more punches, Jai saw his mouth bleeding…then banged his head deliberately against the side of the wall a number of times…giving him a nasty cut.

Tarun was like 😲 😲 ….Jai walked up back up to Mohan…grabbed him by the collar!

Tarun, finally understanding what Jai was upto…smiled… ran back towards the police station

Jai ( holding onto Mohan's collar…whispers ): Mujhe jail ki hawa khilani thi na tumhe…ab dekhte hai….

Seeing the police Inspector coming, Jai deliberately fell to the ground.

Tarun: Dekhiye inspector…kaun kis pe jaanleva hamla kar raha hai? Apni aankhon se dekhiye.

Mohan: Lekin maine kuch nahin kiya…😲 …he was…

Jai: What…main apne aap ko maarunga ab? Come on inspector! U believe that…look at this…(show the nasty gash on the side of his head) …sar pod diya…ab mein report darj kar waata hoon…

Inspector arrested Mohan and took him in 👏 Jai filed a report against him. Now he was sent behind bars.

Jai (smirked): Mujhe jail mein daal ne ki koshish ki…ab tum do dino ke liye saddo! 😡

Tarun: Enjoy urself Mohan!!! 😃

Jai and Tarun made their way back out….

Tarun: That act was sure good Jai…it certainly got him behind bars…

Jai: Yeah but just for a couple of days…I want in there for life!

Tarun: Arre tum uski chinta mat karo..mein hoon na…actually I dug up so old dirt on him…u know after that incident with Bani bhabhi..i asked around about him aur pata chala ke ek ladki ka already rape kar chukka hai…lekin uska muh usne paiso se bandh kar diya…aur woh case bandh hogaya. Main soch raha hoon…uss ladki ko thode zyaada paise de doon…aur yeh case doobara open kar wa doon…that will surely send him behind bars….ainda se kisi aurat ko choone ki koshish bhi nahin karega.

Jai: U do that…Tarun…jitney bhi paise chahiye…mein doonga…but u do it…keep him in there!

Tarun: Abhi chal..tujhe hospital le chaloon…kitne zor se maara hai apne aap ko…Bani Bhabhi to dekh kar hil hi jayegi.

Jai: Yeah I know….but I just wanted to get that B*****D behind bars at any cost!
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Back at Walia Mansion

Jai and Tarun arrived back home

Bani: Oh My God!! Kya hua aapko…yeh chhot…(cries 😭)

Atharv: Hohhhhhh!!!! 😲 Papa kya hua? (standing up on the sofa)

Bani 😭: btayena…yeh…?

Jai (cheerfully 😃): Bani…relax…mamuli zakhm hai…its nothing …uss Mohan ko sazaa delane mein mujhe khud ko chhot dena para…

Bani: Khud ko chhot?

Atharv (butting in): Papa…apne gundon ko maara! Mein hota toh…yun….(throwing punches in the air)…phir yun…(kicks in the air…jumps off the sofa…. throwing another kick in the air)

Tarun (picking him up): Arre baap re…tu toh apne baap se bhi zyaada khatarnaak hai!! (Atharv grinned 😃)

Jai: Bani I will tell u all the details later…(not wanting Atharv to know all the gory details) (yep…kahin woh playground mein shuru na hojaye!)

Bani: Woh….abhi kahaan hai? Phirse…yahaan toh…. 😕

Jai: Bani u don't have to worry about him one bit…(taking her in a warm hug 🤗)…he won't come back.

Tarun: Haan Bani Bhabhi…jail ke hawa kha raha hai woh…aur mein kuch bhi kar ke usse waheen pe rakhunga…don't worry one bit.

Bani: Tarun thank u …jis tarah tumne sab kuch sambhaal liya..inhe ghar le aye…Atharv ko bhi sahi salamat ghar le aye… Thanx.

Jai: Haan Tarun thanx once again…(patting his shoulder)….u have been a true friend today….

Tarun: Arre aap dono bhi enough of the praising…its ok. (really Tarun u were very good..Tazo bhi keh rahi hai…swati maarna mat…accha kaam kiya aaj 😆)

Jai (taking Atharv from him and giving a big hug): As for u….sorry u had to cut ur nursery day short today

Atharv: Its ok…toh ab Nihita ke ghar jaana hoga? 😕

Jai: Na will give it a miss…bahut drama hogaya aaj

Atharv: Yess!!! (fiddling with Jai's button….when he noticed something in Jai's pocket)…arre yeh kya hai? (pulls something out) Wowwwwwwwwwwwwww…Papa u got this!!! 😃 😃 (yes that video game)

Bani: Aapne yeh kab khareeda? I said no games!

Jai: Woh…. (pakde gaye!)

Atharv: Oh wowwwwwwww…..Papa..chaliye na….khele…pweeeessseeee 😃 😃

Bani: Nahin….tumhaari Papa ki haalat toh dekho aur games khelne ki baat kar rahe ho…

Jai: Lekin Bani…mein….

Tarun: Atharv…I will play with u…let ur Mama look after ur Papa…hum khelte haina! 😉

Atharv: Yayyyyyyyyy …Tarun Uncle…(got down from Jai…then dragged Tarun to his playroom)

Bani, stared at Jai.

Jai: Gussa ho?

Bani: Haan…ek toh video game khareed liya aapne…aur doosra…aapne aone aap ko chhot ponchaya iss liye…(running her hands lovingly over his face)…aisa kyun kiya aapne…bahut dard ho raha hoga?

Jai: I'm ok sweetheart…uss Mohan ko andar bhejwaane ki ka yehi tareeka dikhay diya mujhe..i wanted him behind bars at any cost…lekin Bani tum toh theek ho na?

Bani (just wrapped her arms around him. 🤗 ): Aapne kaha tha na be strong …was trying to be…ab aap mere paas aagaye hai…kisi bhi cheez se nahin darungi…sab cheez ka samnaa karungi…(closing her eyes)


….to be continued.

Okay friends don't know how this part was…I'm not too happy with it… really had trouble putting it together…mann hi nahin lag raha these days…sowieeee Plz comment… if u feel like it. 😔 Will try and make the next part better.

Tazoo!
Edited by Taz234 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago

👏😆 😆

Jiggu sorry😉........Tanu.....nothing to say.....kabhi kabhi aisa hota hain na😛

Back to the update😊

Great part Tazooooooooooo as usual. Everyday I felt loving Atharv more and more🤗🤗. Thanks beta for the rose😃. Thweee hugs aur le lo🤗🤗🤗. Beta abhi se Romeo ban gaya😆 ...morning shows the day na😉. Wondering what's wrong with Bani😕. But Bani you needs to share with your hubby right awaw otherwise you will be in trouble sweety😔. MOHAN😡..you are such a jerk.....B*****d😡🤢......he needs to be behind the bars forever....he deserves this place😡🤢. Good job Tarun👍🏼👍🏼. Yeh Atharv na kuch chhupa nehi jate isse......bohut smart hain😃. Please update sooner😊

👏

Edited by khushboo2006 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
Hey Jaani!!!! Whats cookin?????😳

Wowzers!!!!! Another fab part!!!!!! Haila i just loved it!!!!!

Aww Athrav is sooo cute!!!!!!!!! Sanju ke liye crayons... haila... Romeo...... baap pe gaya!!!!😆

What is wrong with Bani???? 😕😕😕 Why you leave at a cliff hanger!!!! thats soo not cool! hope she is okay!!!!!... plz dont kill!!!! killing is not the way!!!!!😕

How to be all romantic at a young age.. by the great JW!Haila....... Mohan!! Omg!! What the heck!!!😡😡😡 how dare he... he soo deserved it!!!!!!..... stupid cow i tell ya!!!😡😡😡.... he omg!!😡😡😡 i am soo mad!!😡😡 but then jai....😳😳😳... nice!!!😳😳

He bought the game!!😆😆 bad boy! men will never learn!!!! its always for them!!!!!... oh sure they say its for the kids😆😆😆..... jai ur too funny!!!😆😆

it was an awesome part as always!!! i loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!! please cont soon!!!!!

Love you babe!!!😳

Edited by *Guli* - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago

saved!! ugh guli always gets there!! and khusboo!!!😭 well top 3!

Great update!! Arthva is adorable!!!!! and he thougth of bringing the flowers so cute.. Kept it right here by my bed!😆😛

and Sanjana?? 😳 .. abhi se shuru???😉

Bani tell Jai about what happend at the doctors.. he ownt be too pleased that you hid it from him!!

and that mohan was back.. i was getting really scared there for a second, but tarun came and sorted everything out!👏 *phew*

Jai beat himself up and Tarun helped???😲. that must've hurt!!! keep mohan in jail now.. police in india are really good at maar pitaye!😆

Arthva found the game?😆.. Im telling you.. bara ho ke jassos banega.. maa ki tarah!

I LOVED it!😛

Edited by bugs_bunny - 18 years ago
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Ok not that bad me is 4th 😆

Mind blowing part Tazo hun 👏 I loved it 😳

Finally u fixed that b*****d Mohan 👏 😆

It's was a really cute beginning with Jai and bani in the car 😳, bani is fully recovered, 😳 , then jai bought some flowers and Too cute Atharva wants some for his teachers 😳 Rama, Tanu aur Kushboo ke to bagh khul gaye 😆

I loved when jai said to bani to talk to sanjana's mother : rishtey ki baat karein ? 🤣🤣

Then sweet moment, shopping in the mall , jai with a earing 😆 i prefer him simple 😳, and ya he's a buisness man not rockstar keep the earing aside 😆

Jai is such a sweetoo, when he wanted to buy vid games : "Leloon ?" 😳 , and thanks to bani's freind he finally bought them 😆

Yaar yeh kaisa flashback hai ? sad flashback 😭 , what happen to bani, why does have complications ? 😭 i guess it's because of stress 😭

Then Action sequence 😆 with the **** 🤬 Mohan ( yaar naam bhi nahin lena chahti uska 😆 ) , he ploted so jai goes in jail 😭

But yay Tarun came on time , our Hero, ur hero Tazo 😆 , batana na yaar kya hua , kyun chor diya tha tumne usse ? 😆

Very good plan Jai, now Mohan is behind teh bars 👏 but jai hurted himself 😭 and Tarun gave him some light punches 😆 so he prefered hurting himself by his own way 😆

Good idea Tarun, now with the rape case mohan will stay forever in jail 😆

Happy ending 😳 no worries bani jai is fit, and Atharv got his vid games and took ur hunk to play with him 😆

Now really Tazo u'll have to unveil the TT angle in ur next part : Tarun and Tazo angle 😆

Beautifrul part, with every emotions, sadness 😭 ( bani's reports) , sweet moments 😳 ( car and reunion , should i add ur Tarun 😆 ) and action 😆 , very good job, nicely written and done 👏

Please continue ASAP 😉

Lots of jhappiz 🤗

Humera 🤗

Edited by sonu4ever - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
TAzzzzz ab kya hua Bani ko? yaar please no more complications... aaur yeh Mohan 😡 😡 send him on a one way ticket to he**... Tarun 🤗 you were right on time buddy... Aur hai mere Jai koh kyun mara, magar chalta hai atleast Mohan is behind the bars for now, besides Jai will enjoy having Bani take care of his wounds.. great part.. please continue soon!
Kripa

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