kuchh is tarah mile hum..FINISHED...sk ff - Page 65

Originally posted by: golu_1677

awesome 👏 .

I hope kash n sujal r both safe

well read on the nxt part to knoe weder they r safe😉...thnx!!

i came early frm coll...so u get to read the nxt part pretty soon today....i wrote the whole part in between lectures 😉 😉 ...waise bhi 50 min lectures are so boring 😉 !!
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PART-53

sujal ws stunned...at the turn of events....kashish had seen rishi raised his hands to hit sujal with wooden piece....she pushed sujal...but cudnt save herself!...she got a blow on her head...."aaahh"..she yelled in pain....the view blacked out in front of her n she fell on ground holding her head....sujal ws just watching kashish falling down....he ran to hold her.....and BANG!...vivan , who had gained conscious n witnessed rishi hitting kashish...pulled the triger of his gun....the bullet stuck rishi in his ribs...blood oozed out from him n he dropped on floor....DEAD!!

sujal still had kashish in his hands....he ws just staring her pretty face....the blood from her head reached the corner of her face...

viv:jaldi karo....hospital le chalo...

sujal didnt replied...but picked kashish in her hands n ran towards his car!

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doc:the operaton ws successful....she is out of danger....

everyone ws so tensed....the operation took 7 hr to complete...listening this...they atleast smiled a bit...but sujal....

mehek:thnx doc..can we meet her
doc:she is kept in I.C.U....no 1 can meet her...
varun:we can atleast see her...
doc:u can see her from outside...!!

kashish's dad....ws standing against the glass window in the door...he saw her lil girl unconscious , he instantly got tears in his eyes....he loved her...nxt moment he turned away n sat on the seat...unable to see her like that...

everyone was sad....they kept looking her thru the small glass window...
varun ws standing besides sujal at the end of corridor....it has been 12 hrs since he had brought kashish to hospital n had not spoken a single word since then....varun ws worried seeing him like that....

v:sujal bhaiya(kept a comforting hand on his shoulder)...aap kashish bhabhi ko nahi dekhenge...she is out of danger bhaiya...

he didnt replied...neither turned to face him...just stood there...silent...sad....broken!
varun understood , he needs sometime with kashish...alone...he took everyone veena , mehek n sinha out of the hospital....

sujal stood near the small glass window....the sight made him more sad....he saw kashish laying on the bed....all medical appratus surround her....she seem so small...with those machines kept around....he so wanted to touch her....comfort her...take all her pain....it has been long since he had seen her laughing....listened to her non-stop chattering....her blush...he put his fingers on glass...as if caressing his love....a tear rolled down his cheek....he felt his heart crying....so loud..he kept his hand on his heart....one more tear trickled down....

he felt a hand on his shoulder....it ws the doctor...seeing him he held his hand n asked...not with words...but with eyes...he understood wat sujal meant...

doc:she is fine sujal....lekin her brain nerves are not responding....she will take time to recover....

sujal ws just staring doc straight into eyes....doctor continued...

doc:may be months!!

and he left...he himself felt sad for sujal....sujal stood there looking kashish...his kashish....

teriyaan meriyaan bhul gaya,
bhul gaya haan re teri,
hey maai main ke karna jeet nu,
howe na je meet,
howe na je meet...

bindiya lagati to kampati thi palkein, maaeri,
chuniyaan saja ke wo deti vaadein kal ke, maaeri,
mere haathon mein tha uska haath...
thi chaasni si har uske baat,

maaeri aap hi hasdi,
maaeri aap hi rondi,
maaeri yaad wo , yaad wo aaye ri...

gala-on kardi , maai ahka naal lad di,
maaeri yaad wo , yaad wo aaye ri...

baarishon mein lipat ke ma,aati thi wo chalke, maaeri,
dairiyaan ho jaye to roti halke halke, maaeri,
phir se main ro-un , phir wo gaaye,
thandi hawayien banke chhaye,

maaeri heera-on gaandi,
maaeri gidyaon pondi,
maaeri yaad wo , yaad wo aaye ri...

jaantan langdi,
maaeri mantaan mangdi,
maaeri yaad wo, yaad wo aaye ri...

ab kya karoon , kaase kahoon , ae maaerri......

(it is the best song , from euphoria)

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doc:arrey aao sujal,betho..
s:doc kashish kaisi hai?
doc:sujal mera aaj bhi jawab wahi hai jo 3 weeks pehle tha...abhi bhi uski brain nerves respond nahi kar rahi hain....
s:aur kitna time lagega...??
doc:it will take time sujal....

sujal ws silent now...but his eyes speak millions of words n ...request!

doc:nahi sujal....main tumhe roz kehta hoon....aaj bhi keh raha hoon....main tumhe uske room mein jaane ki permission nahi de sakta!
s:1 baar doctor....sirf 1 baar...main dekhna chahata hoon wo kaisi hai..
doc:hum wo dekh rahe hain sujal...
s:main aapki in medical tests ko dekhna nahi maanta doctor....plzz let me meet her once.....
doc:sujal hum ICU mein kisi ko bhi allow nahi kar sakte...
s:main 5 min se zyada nahi rukunga...plzz..
doc:theek hai...waise bhi mujhe pata hai....mujhe tumhare aage haarna hi padta....jaao...dekhlo apni kashish ko...

sujal smiled a bit....it ws 1st time in weeks he had smiled....he ran towards her room....as he ws nearing....his heart started beating fastly....he entered the room...he could listen to soft beep sounds from machine....her heart rate....he sat near her....but ws scared to touch her....she wore oxygen mask....syringe ws injected on both her hands that lay on her either side....her head ws bandaged....but still she had the glow on her face.....he so badly wanted to kiss her....but cudnt decide where.....he so badly wanted to hold her...but agn frm where??...tears rolled down his cheek....it has been 3 weeks.....he ws so lonely without her.....

mere khyalon mein...khyalon mein bas tum
meri nigahon mein....nigahon mein bas tum

wapas aa jao,
mere paas tum sada , wapas aa jaao
mere paas tum sada....

suna mera jahan,
bhula main hoon kahan,
jab tak hai jaane-e-jaan,
tera rahoon.....
piya.....wapas aa jaao...
mere paas tum sada , wapas aa jaao
mere paas tum sada....
(extract frm a song 'teri yaadein' , lovestory on sab)

he had waited fr 3 weeks fr kashish to gain conscious....he can wait his whole life.....

tera karoon intezaar,
tu mere dil ka karar,
itna hai aetbaar,
maanonga na main bhi haar...

he lay his head on bed near her hand....and cried....he wanted to comfort her....but ws so helpless...he cudnt kiss her cheek...her eyes...her forehead....cudnt hold her hands...the bandage , oxygen , mask n syringes on hand stopped him frm doing so...he lay there crying....not able to bear more he stood up n ran away frm there....


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end of part-53

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gr8 part but really very very very sad.....poor SUJAL and KASHISH itne pas ho kar bhi itne dor....
yaar plzzzz kashish ko jaldi theek kar do for SUJAL and for the readers....
plzzz next jaldi post karna....
and and and the songs u used were perfect to the situations.....

omg girl you are just giving me heartattack........are yeh kya ho gaya kashish ko.......ple use jaldi se thik kardo taki unki shaadi kara sake.......ple continue soon,.......cant wait any more.........thanks

love

kashish

😭 yaar so sad....poor sujal..i cant see him like this...this part was quit emotional 😭 😭 😭

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awwwwwwwwwwww.sujaaaaaaaaaaalllllll......... 😭 yeh kashish ko kyaaaaa huaaaaaaaa....plz kashish thik ho jaye...can't see him lik tht yaar...cont soon[/SIZE

ohh...that's so sad 😭 she got hit while saving him 😭 make her better soon plz 😭 nd r8 part...u have described their emotions very well 👏 👏 👏 cont soon 😊

ohhhhhhhh my godddddd that's aweful . how could this happen 😲 . i mean that was kashish who got hurt on her head and not rishi 😭 .god thanks for showing that rishi dead 😡 .he was really a fuss in the whole story 😡 . and what the hell why these doctors are not doing anything 😭 . i mean her brain nerves are not working that is so striking man . how could this happen . god!!! i am like crying now seriously 😭 . uske saath hi yeh saab hona tha 😒 . and sujal i just can't see him like that . pata hai he will be the most broken hearted person in whole world now at that moment. 💔 ,with all the tensions around him 😭 . yeh saab uss rishi ki galti hai 😡 . sujal ki halat dekhkar i was not feeling anything, i was so stunned to see him like that, ki was not at all kinda reacting 😭 . only crying crying and crying 😭 . the doctors also said ki months lag sakte hai thik hone mein and were not letting anyone meet,not even sujal 😡 . bohot bura laga yeh soch kar that sujal apne zindagi se itne din durr raha 😭 . and now after three weeks , he beg doctor to let himmeet kashish for 5 min and docs says yes 😉 . woh jata hai and sees her in that condition . aur dekhte hi rehe jata hai.u know mehndi maine aaj taak kabhi kisi story mein sujal ko itna deewanapan nahi dekha kashish ke liye except in kth 😉 .but in your story it can be revealed ki woh usse kitna pyaar karta hai 😳 , that he wanted to touch her comfort her. apne bahon mein lena chahta tha usse but he is so striked and shocked seeing her like that ki usse laag raha hai ki kahin uske chune se kashish ko kuch ho na jaye 😭 . but mehndi i feel ki abb jab sujal kashish ke paas hai na,toh she will react now 😉 . like abhi dheere se woh usse touch karega aur woh kuch kahe ga usse and she will feel something due to which she will start reacting 😉 . menhdi that part was superb and tooo good yaar ⭐️ . it was so emotional and sad too 😭 .specially the way u have described kashish in hospital is fantastic and description of sujal's condition seeing her is just amazing 👏 . like u show every shot soooo perfectly and all the minute things which u cover in ur story brings it a new flavour in itself ⭐️ .hey mehndi kashish ki halat kinda critical hai and sujal toh pura gham mein jaa chuka hai and he is more than half dead seeing his love, his life,his kashish in that situation 😭 .mehndi plzzzz...... kashish ko jaldi react karvao. let her again be that healthy,soft, hasti-khelti pyari,masuum and bak bak karne wali kashish 😉 .plzzz.....sujal ko uska pyaar sahi salamat lota do 😭 . i wish saab thik ho jaye 😉 .the part was great as usual mehndi as i say the words fail to describe it 👍🏼 .continue soon yaar plzzzzzz......can't wait any longer.bye.takecare. 😊 😛 😊

Originally posted by: golu_1677

wonderful part. but sad 😭

Originally posted by: togepe30

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dnt be sad guys!!😊😊

they will soon b togeder!

Originally posted by: neh0307

😭
gr8 part but really very very very sad.....poor SUJAL and KASHISH itne pas ho kar bhi itne dor....
yaar plzzzz kashish ko jaldi theek kar do for SUJAL and for the readers....
plzzz next jaldi post karna....
and and and the songs u used were perfect to the situations.....

kashish jaldi theek ho jayegi...😊...!!