#3 Ashlok Dark FF - My Ransacked Heart/UPDATED/ Chapter 38 /(Pg-135) - Page 99

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: GoWithTheRhythm

Omg Mahiiu dearest that was wow :0 aww thank you so much my sweet Amelia! 😃

That was hot and fark passion desire in its modt natural form Thanks dearu, yep dark earthly desires rising to the surface! 😉

She knows she needs to show him his limits sonehow and keep her self respect at the same time
She does not want to be used and then be thrown away so
I very much liked her condition Thanks dearu, yes she became insecure when he mentioned the name of his ex-mistress although he was lying to keep her at bay but it did made her confident and she went after what she want security! She knows that marriage is a big step to take as he maybe not ready for that and she would be thrown out but as a mistress she will be independent and still will remain secure under his protection!

I like that she gets under his skin and he does not realize it yet
Loved loved loved how they made put and then she told him
He would obly get all of that if he would afree to her
Conditions Yep dear she is surely getting under his skin and making him give away his weaknesses one by one! 😉 She is starting to get close to him and she can feel in her heart that he is affected as well that's why she took a gamble and explored that feeling by kissing him herself! 😉
It was sooo good Thanks a lot Amelia dearest! 😃

Sadly I did not receive any pm :0 no dear i didn't send the pm, but i was going to tonight or tommorrow morning, as i am feeling too tired and not well after continuous studies, my final project taking a toll on me! So I am really sorry sweetheart for that!

So mahi pls continue soon Will do so sweetie! 😳

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: prince_mb

oh my god mahi wat an update👏. Thanks a lot vijju! 😳

seriously my heart was jumping with joy at her boldness.
and shlok treating her as a little girl i was thinking like is she?☺️.
my evil queen im feeling happy with this update of ur's i think its a valentines day gift to all your readers☺️.
Thanks for your appreciation dearu! 😉 And yep told you that our tiny is a tigress at heart, she will shock him, astonish him, heal him and then win over him, with her boldness, confidence and spirit! 😳 Yep it's a valentine gift! 😳

one more question yar i forget to ask b4 that avdhoot had done bad to him and his family and in return shlok took his revenge from aastha right.now my question is he had kidnapped aastha and hurted her physically till that itz k but why he has to break her virginity?i mean he has many ways to take revenge from avdhoot why he has break her virginity? why? why?why...?
now don't bash me for this. T
here is a rule infact an oath in the gangster's book, yeah even gangsters have rules! 😆 The rule is an eye for an eye, Avdhoot and Avdhoot's men raped Shlok's sister, meaning they took away her virginity and then Avdhoot killed her right away! So believing on that eye rule Shlok also took Astha's virginity because ofcourse he couldn't take away Avdhoot's virginity! 😕 But he was merciful in a sense that he didn't hurt her meaning he pleasured her after all and in the end didn't murder her. In the start his intention was to rape Astha and then kill her, but he became infatuated with her and changed his mind! 😉

no pm this time i think ur busy no prblem beta i'll forgive you for this🤪. Yeah dear too much tired and unwell! 😭 Was thinking of sending them in morning! 😉

happy valentines day honey. Happy valentine's day to you too vijju! 😃

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: aymen22

hey mahi it was really a mind blowing update but so short
waiting for next


Thanks a lot dearu! 😃 Yeah dear i know it's short infact i was going to write two chapters as a gift for valentine, but feeling too much tired and unwell that's why was unable to! 😭 I am so sorry sweetheart! 😕

But will update soon sweetie! 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
Mahir! Just read the last 2 updates ! Wow!! Astha is leading an all out assault on Shlok emotions! He had to think quick on his feet with the Mistress lie...Dying to know who saved Shlok! They Love! They Hate! They Rile each other up and get off on it!! They both have what they secretly want!!! each other😉 she may think she has the upper hand seducing him but the moment he touches her and she touches him they are both lost!!! Love it so much! If its possible your amazing story just keeps going from excellent exciting to outstanding and riveting! Thank you sweetie👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update dear,
simply loved it.
Plz update soon
😉
I m so happy , they r started to fall
in love with each other.
"HAPPY VALENTINES DAY DEAR
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Posted: 11 years ago
un res pg 135




Edited by Subhashiniiiii - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update my evil witch, seriously you put another spell on me unlike others, a deadly one, now I want more of your dose😆😆
That was really risky gamble but you know the more risks, the greater rewards..i'll be waitng for the rewards😉😆
astha showed her tongue, so funny..she is still childlike a bit..
so she gambled with her body, I think I can understand because she don't want to be used like a rag then thrown away, so for her self worth she took a risk..
shlok is twisty, he indirectly asked her if she has any problem with cigarette but our dear astha is more twisty, she likes cigarette! does she smoke too?
the last scene was hot as usual, neither of them can stay away from their coochie coo sessions😆😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
Astha has taken this decision? But this comes as no shock, i guess...as she s completely robbed of her innocence...she has nothing more to barter..!! And yea i want more of shlok's thought process all this time...soooper update dear..!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Shlok will have no choice but to agree...can't wait for next part
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wonderful mahi...finally Iam at par with all of u !
Excellent update...astha getting bolder...waiting for the next...

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