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Deepthi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#731

Im your new reader..
You are an amazing writer :)
I managed to read all the chapters in two days..mesmerizing!

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divya_divs

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Posted: 10 years ago

#732

I feel like i am reading a suspense thriller😉 awesome😆 waiting for the next update 😃

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dsbj

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Posted: 10 years ago

#733

wonderful update.. wonder what will happen next .hope arnav will return home safely.

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Onlooker

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Posted: 10 years ago

#734

You completely switched the track..leaving us bewildered and anxious..

Laxmi story begins..Now who is 'he' here? I think I may have to reread the chapters for it..Devi..you are weaving magic with your words..the last part was sheer poetry..

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Mirabell

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Posted: 10 years ago

#735

Originally posted by: viveka698
My brain is working overtime today - I have a feeling Lakshmi sacrificed herself to protect Kashi all those years ago. Perhaps, Shankaran will save Kashi from Shivan this time...and sacrifice his life too...some poetic justice...both lovers sacrificing their lives for Kashi...

Ooh..now that's a thought. I like this possibility... Magic makes all kinds of anachronism possible. :).. You know I feel so inadequate reading this by myself. I truly appreciate all the comments as a reader, on this thread. :)

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bernad_shaw

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Posted: 10 years ago

#736

I was wi seeing what the significance of the shaavathaalam episode was. Just like Lakshmi , kashi believed it too that being with Arnav would kill him. She wants shivan to take Her life.

I wonder how she came with Lakshmi when she was sleeping in between her parents. Devi for the life of me i have no idea how you are going to tie it all together, but right from day 1, if you are writing the story, I am all for the ride

Priya..

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kclovearshi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#737

Originally posted by: Mirabell

Ooh..now that's a thought. I like this possibility... Magic makes all kinds of anachronism possible. :).. You know I feel so inadequate reading this by myself. I truly appreciate all the comments as a reader, on this thread. :)

I think Lakshmi was a Mangalik like Kashi and asked the Cobra to bite her as her beau wont leave her. They were also deeply in love like Kashi & Arnv were and she wanted to save him from death. Looks like Kashi wants to have same fate as Lakshmi but Shivan is not co-operating :)

This all started from Devaki's curse. But it looks to me Devaki and her lover are re-born as Kashi & Arnav..so may be Devaki will retract her curse now :)

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kaprasin

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Posted: 10 years ago

#738

Oh.. Lakshmi's story has started. Now will the next update continue with Kashi or Lakshmi? You write magic.

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lakraj80

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Posted: 10 years ago

#739

Amazing update Devi, simply awesome. Thanks for the pm.

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Dhrashtee

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Posted: 10 years ago

#740

😭 How did I miss all these updates? Off to catch up 😉

***EDIT***

I wish there was more to Devaki's chapter.

Hopefully, after the actual rituals, we will not see so much of "revenge" between Arnav and Kashi. In the mean time, will enjoy Lakshmi's story. I can't wait for all the loose ends to tie together. I would hate for the story to end but I am too impatient to find out all the secrets.😳

Pls cont soon...with longer updates... if possible.😳😉

Edited by dhrashtee - 10 years ago