THE LOCKET REPOSTED - COMPLETED - Page 109

cha 16- oh my god dev such a charmer he took the limelight. n what an idea for promoting chocolate we build chocolate building. u r awesome writer. mr chopra was full fida. now how geet got hurt. beautiful song which was perfectly apt for the situation.

cha17- very beautifully written. maan got special birthday gift as their first talk, first closeness, first hug n then gift. earing segment was awesome. adores geet n pinky dosti. she even wears salwar to accompany geet. maan laughing at adi plight. bechara adi was only jumping around stalls to buy food for pinky.

Awesome part

Chap - 17

Sorry for being late just finished chap 10 updated comments on pg 93. waiting for the next chapters

Originally posted by: Jannat-Fictions

I honestly don't know what to say with this story, it's so beautiful written, each character has their own story, loved the chapters 4 -8.

So Geet and Maan secretly are attracted to each other, won't say love as they hadn't admitted here.

Lol Maan thinking of dancing with his Geet during office times, since college they'd known each other and were attracted.

His father has definitely rubbed off on him, the authoritive manner MSK speaks in and shouts gives me shivers. Love Maan Singh Khurana.

I loved their silence and the rain walk home.

That stupid hostel teacher, Ms Iyer or whatever her name is.

When I'd come across Adi Pinky and Sujal's bit I was momentarily silent just blinking as I was reminded of a proposal that'd happened when I was 17.

Like in our families our marriages are arranged and the guy says yes or no first because had the girl said yes, it'd be weird for her and family if they guys says no afterwards.

So after meeting him an all, he wanted it to happen but his parents weren't sure. So they said no and we said no as well.

My uncle worked for his dad and he was asking my uncle to go and speak to his parents, and my mother was like WTH. If he's like this before marriage, afraid to speak to his own parents then what would he be like after marriage.

Anyways back to the Locket.

Locket reminds me of the diary Geet has read secretly, cannot wait for them interacting now that he's back after 2yrs. Wonder how their love story will be.

The songs chosen are really wonderful, to be honest I've barely heard most of them, think I only knew the one or two. But listened to them as I read and they were so apt for each of them. Especially Adi, Pinky's song.

Oh oh... Forgot to mention Dev & Tara's interaction, Dev is so funny. Love the songs he chose and the name I - Star. Absolutely loving NT here, she is so much different from the vamp we've been shown but her strong personality is similarly to the NT from the show. Absolutely loving the way you've scripted the characters here, keeping them similar to our Ghsp but different and in your own flavours.

Will hopefully read the remaining tonight.

Dev ko padi!🤣

lovely update!!!!!!!!!!
itni detailing tara ke baare mein...lovely portrayal!!!!!
dev babu totally attracted to tara😃




beautiful update ji..kya kahen...speechless!!!!!!!!!!
maan ne geet ka dream pura kia aur geet ne maan ka😃😃
waiting eagerly for more😃

sorry for the late comment