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zaya.harshika

@zaya.harshika

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Posted: 11 years ago

#481

Fantastic updates!

Outstanding!

Really...love your story!

Kitkit.. <3

Update nxt part soon

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KitkitMkb

@KitkitMkb

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Posted: 11 years ago

#482

Sim I don't have words to expres my happiness when I see they thee is a new update , in all the chapters I could feel zain's loneliness sadness and that is just because of you , seriously don't have words to describe the beauty of your writing ! Love you and take care ! ;)

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StarsOnEarth

@StarsOnEarth

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Posted: 11 years ago

#483

Weekend double dhamaka!!!!!
27 th chapter:
Emotional and painful are small words to describe. Zain slept hugging Aliya's pic even though she is so near, I mean really so NEAR!!
"So near yet so far"
28th chapter
Each note was making me smile ...
Zain's longing for Aaliya ,his feelings and emotions are just portrayed in a fantastic way.
Continue soon

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StarsOnEarth

@StarsOnEarth

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Posted: 11 years ago

#484

Originally posted by: Zainedil

Aww dear I didn't say that to mke u all feel bad ,I am sorry
It's a creative instability, I thought u all might hve read it
Sorry I don't want u all to choose, it's just that I thought u might hve observed the same incidents happened but with diff version
Extremely sorry, just wrote what I felt
Sim

Oh!! Plz don't be sorry
Not ur fault!!
We all have right to express what v feel!!
That's it!!
😊

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Aarohi2009

@Aarohi2009

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Posted: 11 years ago

#485

Oh my god!
Double dhamaka
I must say u r very punctual 😛
Loved both the chapters.I can feel zain's pain and longing for aliya.Its only because of ur skill of writing that we can feel every emotion.
I guess next chapter ll be romantic one
😉
Thanks for pm
Luv u sim

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Riya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#486

Wow sim...

Such amazing updates!!!

Read 26a,b,c and 27 and chp28 together!!!!

They are just amazing !!!!

Fantastic!!!

Pls continue soon...

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katmaan

@katmaan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#487

Omg sim this was so cute I mean...the notes and zain I love him man...bichari rhea she is trying so hard ...

Gosh the fact that aaliya will come to know about her existence and leave gives me shiver

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seriously???

@Uniquely...me

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Posted: 11 years ago

#488

Ok I am still in chapter 25...all three parts were awesome...

From Suraiya's feelings to Rehman getting a bit less gabbarish to Aliya's pendent part...I just loved how you wrote it so beautifully...

Each and every emotion...its bang on...

You just gave us what CVS couldn't...

The rest three I will comment by tomorrow...inshallah...

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deepika

@..DancingDoll..

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Posted: 11 years ago

#489

Read 26,27,n 28 part in a go..
Gosh.! U wrote so amazingly..
Loved it..
Aww..poor zain..hw much he have to suffer..
Finally rhea realize her mistake..
Excited for d next part..

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Crazy4HarshIka

@Crazy4HarshIka

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Posted: 11 years ago

#490

Omg!So Bad Yaar This Made me Cry Horribly. From last two hours I was continuously crying under my blanket,Hiding.I have read from 12 to 28 in one go.u r superb Sim.MindBlowing.

Zain n his pain,If I was there in Zain's Place I would have got 2/3 heart attacks or clotting probably after all the misery.Ur a Superb Writer.u have that power to bind your audience.

JUST AMAZING...

P.S We have tlkd on Twitter. N this one is the biggest comment f mine so far.lol 😛

JAYA.😊 Plz Continue Soon.