#3 Ashlok Dark FF - My Ransacked Heart/UPDATED/ Chapter 38 /(Pg-135) - Page 48

Originally posted by: aymen22

awesome part when shlok story will end? I think two more updates dear, the revelations are big! 😉
and what will happen after ending of story That's a secret dear and will be disclosed in further chapters! 😉

Thanks dear for your comments! 😃

Originally posted by: swathin

superb update

a bit confused...

..i m sure it ll b cleared in next prt

Originally posted by: nim_var

Nice update Mahir. Now I am a bit confused..who is Avdhoot the Prince charming or the neighbour who betrayed...or was it the prof where Shlok was able to snare Avdhoot and bring him into the lion's den??/

Thanks nimms! 😉 The prince charming is not Avdhoot, but is related to Avdhoot and the yep you are right the neighbour is that professor Prabakhar Joshi! 😉

Wicked to sit in front of Avdhoot and then tape his mouth and narrate the tale. Poor aastha...

Yeah dear, Avdhoot is really a nuisance and a menace to the society! people like him should be locked up forever, you'll know why in the next update! 😉 Astha is really in a pitiable condition all because of dear daddy! Paying the price of her father's sins!

Originally posted by: charanyaaj

Beautiful update mahir! 😊 Thanks dear! 😉

I didnt get pm 😡 You were quick dear! 😆 Sorry buds mom was calling me to go to the market with her, i couldn't refuse her, 😕 so i came back from the market and then send the pm! 😆

Shlok is telling his story. When will this story end? I think two more updates, it's a big revelation dear! 😉
As usual u stopped in mid... Yeah so you could come for more dose dear! 😆

So his master prabhakar joshi also not helped his family.. Very sad

Yes that's why Shlok lost faith!

U r awesome writer dear. Seriously u explained the dead feelings of shlok very well👏👏 Thanks dear! 😳
No doubt that we are expecting more from you... You still are! 😲😆
Thanks fr the update... My evil pleasure dear! 😉
I want more... Its not enough Will continue soon dear! 😆

Originally posted by: Sadh123

Woah...!!!! Awesome...so the neighbour is shlok's sir?! Poor niranjan and his daughter...they really had to go through so much! Aastha's reactions were conveyed beautifully...avdhooth!!! He s really d darkest prince i have ever heard...and no ofc he s nt d knight n shining armour..avdhooth is definitely d personfication of cruelty!! No wonder shlok has turned into a hearltess mafia...

P.S : u have again made me want more like a person searching for oasis n d desert! Pls do update quickly 😉