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Posted: 11 years ago
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The last thing I read before i went to bed was about these 2. Slept with an expectant smile and woke up with a bigger one this morning!
Gave up reading Romance a long time ago but if it's going to be like this I'm loving it!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Divya.S.R

Another update? Oh yes!!

Loved II's naughty comments for shravu.. 🤣
"Dey erangu da, GET DOWNN IF u fall I am going home, Amma is having another baby anyway, I am sure she wont miss you"

Hahaa.. She was getting back on the kid for dragging her into this house I guess..🤣
Shravu cutely was complaining to Sam and then to R&B.. 🤗

Tanmay is not as smart as his wife I guess..😆
This guy couldn't make out head or tail of the teekha conversation and was so clueless..
She should have stayed for dinner must have been fun with sam observing both.. 😃

Hahaha.. They absolutely adorable with their sassy messages to each other.🤣

Please do give another update.. I'm addicted


I threaten my 7 year old frequently like that, I say "I hear Target is having a Clearance on boys this weekend, I will just go buy a couple, or PAY FULL PRICE and buy a girl🤣

Pretty much whatever II says to Shravu IVE SAID THAT to my 7 year old at some point...😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Nisha0604


I threaten my 7 year old frequently like that, I say "I hear Target is having a Clearance on boys this weekend, I will just go buy a couple, or PAY FULL PRICE and buy a girl🤣

Pretty much whatever II says to Shravu IVE SAID THAT to my 7 year old at some point...😆


Hahaha.. That's a new way of threatening a kid to behave..

Thanks for the pointers will be useful when I have a kid in future.. 😆

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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome! Your updates are like food for the hungry...water for the thirsty...and! Air for me. Can't do without them!😳😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
So glad I logged in just in time for a new update!
First, I'm backtracking a bit here to the past few that I missed though.

Vandu and II's relationship seems so amazing! It makes me wish I had a sister like that to talk to. I'm 7 years older than my brother as well (he wasn't a surprise 😆) but needless to say we don't talk about crushes, heartbreaks, and relationships like two sisters would. 😛 Aside from him too, I'm only surrounded by male cousins, so no girl talk unless I'm out with friends 😭

Sam's notes were even better than II's.
Teekas travel from person to person! 🤣
R&B actively making the effort so she has no choice but to come into the house was a smart move on his part. I would say he's coming closer to acknowledging his true feelings about her, especially after his Thai partner asked him that question. 😃

Now coming to this recent update.
II teasing Shravu was adorable. I say playful stuff like that to tease my niece all the time! 😛
He actually walked her out and tucked in the frills of her shawl...Aww, so sweet.
The text she sent him was quite amusing but his response was him in total Rakshasan form. 😆

I have to say that he manages to pull off the unfazed look quite easily, but she becomes flustered too soon. They are total opposites and it's never been more apparent, but at the same time they just can't manage to stay away from each other.

Hope that makes up for my absence Nish! Will be back whenever I'm free. 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Divya.S.R

WOW!! This is one helluva story.. ❤️ I'm in love with it..

Yhm made me fall in love with Raman Kumar Bhalla ... And you made me fall in love with hot & sexy R&B..

R&B and II's fights were fabulous from the start.. And sexual tension between them..
The first or second or third or the nth number of kisses they had was Hawt..
Their fight and then their passionate makeouts.. I can't help but fall in love more with the story..😳
Bhallas seemed to be floored by II.. For various reasons.. Be it the father or son or the sisters😉😆

Like every story.. Without twist the story will be bland.. And here enters Srikanth 😆
The guy is a 10/10 in every parents list but he wasn't able to score that much in II's heart.. 😆
How is it possible when you have R&B for competition.. 🤣

R&B and his cargo's😆 can totally imagine a laid back sexy guy.. That's a view any girl would want to see at work..
Ohh dear!! I need to keep reminding myself that I'm married.. See what you have done!!
But can't help drooling over this guy.. ☺️ lucky II

Now the sisters (vandu and sam) are on the mission of milao their siblings.. Oh so waiting to see their plan.. Well two parts of it must have been done by now..
I'm sure vandu sending II to Sam's place and Sam lying about him not being there must be part of the mission.. 😆

Waiting to see how you play this through.. And yes, please do not stop continue the story..

p.s. naanum oru tam bram dhaan aanal naa oru iyengaar.. 😃
p.p.s sorry for the short comment.. It doesn't justify you beautiful story..


Divya
Its my my mission to collect the MOST addicted people.😈 I will put you in the bin where 40+ others are dreaming You will be in good company


THANKS SO VERY MUCH FOR READING AND LOVING THE STORY😳

I TRY my best not to make it a whiny sob fest, or too DEEP DEEP DEEP DEEPLY emotional mumbo jumbo with odd symbolism and inane metaphors🤣


Its a SERIOUS INTELLIGENT LOVE STORY that happens to be funny and heart warming... and the phenomenal response proves people love it. I am not entrusted with the task of initiating IF teenagers into po*n so my story will not have explicit sex😃


I've kept my characters to a minimum so there are no 100 friends and side characters to deal with, this way people will recall this tale for a long time, recall value is what a writer craves for😉

The 50 odd that regularly read and comment JUST TOTALLY GET the humor, and so its a total pleasure to write

I am told I am extremely funny in real life, so writing humor comes easily I think😳
Edited by Nisha0604 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Seriousreader

Awesome! Your updates are like food for the hungry...water for the thirsty...and! Air for me. Can't do without them!😳😳




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THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: nividances

So glad I logged in just in time for a new update!

First, I'm backtracking a bit here to the past few that I missed though.

Vandu and II's relationship seems so amazing! It makes me wish I had a sister like that to talk to. I'm 7 years older than my brother as well (he wasn't a surprise 😆) but needless to say we don't talk about crushes, heartbreaks, and relationships like two sisters would. 😛 Aside from him too, I'm only surrounded by male cousins, so no girl talk unless I'm out with friends 😭

Sam's notes were even better than II's.
Teekas travel from person to person! 🤣
R&B actively making the effort so she has no choice but to come into the house was a smart move on his part. I would say he's coming closer to acknowledging his true feelings about her, especially after his Thai partner asked him that question. 😃

Now coming to this recent update.
II teasing Shravu was adorable. I say playful stuff like that to tease my niece all the time! 😛
He actually walked her out and tucked in the frills of her shawl...Aww, so sweet.
The text she sent him was quite amusing but his response was him in total Rakshasan form. 😆

I have to say that he manages to pull off the unfazed look quite easily, but she becomes flustered too soon. They are total opposites and it's never been more apparent, but at the same time they just can't manage to stay away from each other.

Hope that makes up for my absence Nish! Will be back whenever I'm free. 😊



THIS IS JUST PERFECTTT Nivi😃
Come by whenever you can and give me a report like this one😳

I have sisters so YES its the best thing, but have no brothers😭 so didnt get chivalrously protected like the girls with bros did, on Delhi buses and such

I wrote that part to essay Akka will not always tease II, she will also tell her mature things that will help her make decisions,
ITS A MIDDLE CLASS STORY Nivi, you will not read fancy language or read ridiculous advice... however old fashioned it might seem to some... this is how middle class Iyer homes function... one child is doing OK, the other does REALLY well... YET they get along and are loving and protective of each other... those that love this story probably ARE ABLE to connect with all that😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Nisha0604


Divya
Its my my mission to collect the MOST addicted people.😈 I will put you in the bin where 40+ others are dreaming You will be in good company


THANKS SO VERY MUCH FOR READING AND LOVING THE STORY😳



Its a SERIOUS INTELLIGENT LOVE STORY that happens to be funny and heart warming... and the phenomenal response proves people love it. I am not entrusted with the task of initiating IF teenagers into po*n so my story will not have explicit sex😃I TRY my best not to make it a whiny sob fest, or too DEEP DEEP DEEP DEEPLY emotional mumbo jumbo with odd symbolism and inane metaphors🤣


I've kept my characters to a minimum so there are no 100 friends and side characters to deal with, this way people will recall this tale for a long time, recall value is what a writer craves for😉

The 50 odd that regularly read and comment JUST TOTALLY GET the humor, and so its a total pleasure to write

I am told I am extremely funny in real life, so writing humor comes easily I think😳


I agree.. It is very much that.. And is pleasant to read one such stories..
Gotta admit.. I quit yhm when the shagun drama of recent started.. Its just illogical and frustrating and clichd .. I used to read the stories..
Until I came across this.. I had bookmarked this in the weekend and yesterday sat to read it and finished it in one go just couldn't comment yesterday since my tablet thought it had, had enough of my torture for the day and switched off.. 😆

Well in that case.. A hi5.. As I'm known to be the entertainer in the family for my ways getting people to laugh..😳😆

This story provides the fun factor no doubt.. And that's why its so addictive.. 😃

Ohh and are giving another update now?? Please do say yes.. 😳


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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Nisha0604



THIS IS JUST PERFECTTT Nivi😃
Come by whenever you can and give me a report like this one😳

I have sisters so YES its the best thing, but have no brothers😭 so didnt get chivalrously protected like the girls with bros did, on Delhi buses and such

I wrote that part to essay Akka will not always tease II, she will also tell her mature things that will help her make decisions,
ITS A MIDDLE CLASS STORY Nivi, you will not read fancy language or read ridiculous advice... however old fashioned it might seem to some... this is how middle class Iyer homes function... one child is doing OK, the other does REALLY well... YET they get along and are loving and protective of each other... those that love this story probably ARE ABLE to connect with all that😃


I don't know about being "chivalrously protected on Delhi buses" but having brothers can certainly curb most/any/all interaction with the opposite gender. 😆 I have more than enough stories to share about my older cousins intimidating my poor harmless guy friends who came over just to hang out/study.
There's pluses too though...I know more about cricket, cars, how to pull off some pretty amazing pranks, and random bizarre fun facts than I ever expected/wanted to. If you ever have a question about those topics, I'm the girl to ask. 😉

Despite not having a sister, I could appreciate that part for how nicely it was written and how well it portrayed what it's probably like to actually have a sis (inspired from your own life I assume). Well done! 👍🏼

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