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Posted: 11 years ago
That was beautiful update...

I am grateful to Arnav as he did is best to give kushi when she needs... i really thought Kushi's father is a sensible person not a coward who can fear of world not for his own daughter... i really feel sad for kushi, though she is well educated, she dont have the courage to go against to her loved people who is doing injustice to her..

I feel bad for Arnav, true, he dont know what is his future because that his future now depends on kushi...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Mayvs2013

somehow from Arnav side i felt it very fast... i thought gradually he will understand... Kushi somewhere its too painful n noone to understand her pain even in her own family...



I think I understand why you felt it fast from Arnav end. In every story, he is shown as someone who doesnt know the meaning of love. But in this story I was determined to show him as the man who knows what exactly love is. Also I wanted to highlight love at first sight here, as I believe they do exist. 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: deepthiya



I think I understand why you felt it fast from Arnav end. In every story, he is shown as someone who doesnt know the meaning of love. But in this story I was determined to show him as the man who knows what exactly love is. Also I wanted to highlight love at first sight here, as I believe they do exist. 😃


Every emotion is born from the heart(tag line)...love ,one of such emotion...and i guess seeing him mature enough ...dealing every type of patients and people around ...if he had shown slow or taking time in understanding his feelings that would be lil out of place :)...and once a great writer told me ...cause he is the man who knows wt love is actually :)...so its obvious he can differentiate between normal and special feelings easily:)...happy to see arnav having dhak dhak :)
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: canapoem



And what does Khushi mean when she said that "did Karan even fake the hospital bills?". Why was Karan receiving money from some one to cover her hospital expenses? Was Khushi's father or someone paying the bills?





Oh no that statement has no hidden meanings. We all know how kanjoos karan is when it comes to money and how he taunted her to be careful about spending. She wondered, if he taunted her all these years on hospital bills without actually paying a dime.



What does he mean by stain of broken marriage? so according to him, what happened to Khushi was ok and she should have adjusted and stayed with that jerk?

You will get to know more about Shashi and Garima in the next chp..Until then lets wait...



So Deeps, she did not file a complaint yet right???

No She did not, as you have read, Shashi took her home.

Edited by deepthiya - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: viveka698

A clever tease you are! Garima was the real shocker, not Shashi! It was distressing to see a mother so desensitized towards her daughter's condition...could it just be because of hardening economic circumstances?...or is there more?

I would like to continue perceiving Shashi with tinted glasses on - until you prove him completely unworthy, at least. Brushing past his crude behavior, he was at least emotional and receptive to the situation...far better than the disturbing indifference Garima has shown so far. As I see it, he was just being the man of his family...slowly coming to terms with the predicament his youngest daughter's life is in...and trying to take right decisions on behalf of his family.

A. He has already considered her daughter's marriage broken and wants to take her back home although he might be wary about the consequences. Therefore, less likely to leave her stranded or pressure her to go back to her husband and in-laws.

B. He didn't sound quite like a dictating patriarch passing final verdict when he said you need to discuss and take opinions of your mother, father and sister. An equitable start, irrespective of the outcome.

C. The moistness in his eyes...is that guilt for throwing his (then) teenage daughter to the wolf and jackals?

Societal Pressure / Social Conditioning are a given considering their economic background and I will be surprised if they react otherwise. What I want to see is how they will rise beyond it - if they so choose to. Seems to be that behind every controlling man there could be an equally empty-headed woman who is just uninterested / ignorant / incapable of providing valuable and wise advise or making right decisions for their family / off-springs.

I fell head over heels for your Dr. R. He is so...transparent! It was endearing how he wished to envelop her in a cocoon and shield her from anything & everything.

P.S.: Sankranti Subhakanshalu!



And I fell head over heels on your analysis😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ShahSAIR

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one question Maa why i am seeing Gayatri Maa in U..? while writing her pov or lyns did u imagine urself..? i am not saying u r Arnav's mother coz wo K Mom hai..lol bt Gayatri is js lyk u.. her evry move evry lyn resembles u.. strict bt loving js lyk u Maa..😛


Really? I didnt notice that. But definitely I didnt place myself in her role. Hell I will never be Arnav's mom, that sole title goes to K - LoveDrops..😆



Shashi Guptaa and Garima Gupta..😡

You will get to know more about Shashi and Garima in the next chp



"It would be easy to mend a broken heart with time but it is nearly impossible to heal an aching heart waiting in uncertainty of future - Unable to move on nor hold on..."


What I meant in this line is, His heart is not broken but its in pain, unsure if she will return in his life or going away forever.


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Posted: 11 years ago
im one of old stalker for ur superb stories...😉
i read tvk 1 &2..superb ones.
and agian
i jst read all 7 chapter ...ofcourse this one also..
ur jst awesome
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Posted: 11 years ago
I read some of the comments people are angry on Shashi , Let me say my POV Shashi Gupta he is a middle class father with 2 daughters he got one of his daughter married and has one more. All these 6 years he might have heard rants from Khushi's In-Laws about Khushi not being able to give them a kid and to top it one fine morning he gets a call from his Son-In-Law saying that she left the house or has been kidnapped , What would be his condition , it is not about the faith on your kid or anything first thing he was worried is about her safety. Then when he comes to the hospital he hears a total different story so what is he supposed to do ? He does not have a clear picture of what has happened and to top the confusion Khushi never complained about her husband or her in-laws to him so according to him the are good people right.
So he need time to know what had happened and for that he need to talk to his daughter and then talk to her in-laws and even after knowing the truth if he still asks her to go back to her husband then I would say he is wrong but as of now I would give him a benefit of doubt
Edited by Srilathalolla - 11 years ago

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