Abhigya:SS:The Girl Nobody Loved: COMPLETE - Page 10

Originally posted by: Humzy

wow awsm chapters

loved it

very nicely written

continue soon

Aww, thank you Humzy! Updates are int he works I promise! 😆

Originally posted by: Shafoo

that is nice i like it

Why thank you so much! <3

if only the show writers took lessons from u!

Originally posted by: Rozy77

hello dear😊
just read parts 3 and 4... and after that all, again😃

i commented on parts 1&2 and was in complete awe of this ss but due to time, couldnt really convey exactly what i felt..

im just loving this ss😃
really, i cannot get over how amazing, so freaking amazing it is.
you are an incredible writer👏... take a bow⭐️

i love the intensity.. the pain, the anguish, the remorse, sorrow and especially the longing ❤️.

its all so heartbreaking. wonderful but painful and passionate❤️. and that's what is making this story so addictive for me👍🏼

i feel so bad for pragya😭... she's been through a lot of hardship, still struggling to move on and yet her heart keeps on beating for abhisheik..

in your story i can definitely sympathize with abhi... he had me when he confessed he loved her, he's in love with her, he fell for the memories, misses her, needs her☺️

i just wanted him to pull her in his arms. i cannot wait for that particular chapter..

poor daadi. but i hope pragya doesnt misunderstand his intentions.
and it appears there's some foul play with the media. wondering if the psycho duo is behind it..

please continue soon
am so excited for the next part
take care

Awww!! Hello there!

😳

You are just the sweetest thing! I am so glad you like the characters and how they've been dealing with the circumstances, angst is always a tricky thing you never know who's going to love it and who's going to want to bury you 10 feet under for writing it.

As for the 'pull her in his arms chapter' - Oh God I know- I was *this* close to making him do it - to hell with all the angst I needed some Abhi loving - but my stupid muse wouldn't let me. It's not my fault I swear - blame the muse!

As for the rest...well...I guess we are about to find out aren't we?

<3

Originally posted by: adventure_gurl

amazing update,, the way you described how he revealed Dadi was dying and they were still married, better than actual serial, keep up the great work! Loved it

Originally posted by: indi

Thank you, advena!!!! That was lovely ... every line, every word, I savoured!!!! Always wanted Abhi to suffer ... but can't help it ... my heart is now breaking for him 💔!!!!

You are indeed a wonderful writer 👏!!!!

Originally posted by: kdsubs

That - that line - that is precisely why we writers write. To have our stories resonate. And to hear back from the few readers who care enough, when it does resonate.

Amen to that.

Originally posted by: kdsubs

Sigh... "I tend to ruin everything i love, only because i am convinced i don't deserve it..." - Perfect! The snatches of songs/poems you add, always suit the update. Yet, this one is perfection.

Nothing is so cruel as hope, is it? Especially when everything is beyond hope. Or seems like it. Abhi knows what he did. He has even grown enough to assess the impact of what he did on Pragya. And yet, hope lives on. And not only lives - it grows.

I so want this story to have a not-traditional-ending (aka, they really don't get back together). And yet - hope. Abhi's hope, his tight clasp of that thin thread of light that lets him breathe on, live on - just for that, i want them to get back together.

Hope deserves to live on...

Hello Twinnie!

Gosh I know what you mean, that line just hit me I swear, I was physically rocked back, and instantly I knew Abhi for all his confidence and showy drama, was that boy in the corner who was terrified of love, real love, because he didn't think he'd ever get it.

I know someone who says 'if' is the cruelest word in the world, and I suppose hope is basically worse because hope is about more than a factual 'if', hope is an emotional 'if' it's the if, you don't dare voice, the one lurking in your heart even when you know it's impossible.

The rest - I can't answer yet - Or maybe I can...- No. Stay strong Advena, no clues - I just know I'll end up giving spoilers. So this is me being MUM.

But GOD why do I have such awesome readers?! Why do the know everything?!

Dammit, can't even hint now.


Much Love,
-A 😉

Originally posted by: sukisona

I really like this, it's different but still in character and completely realistic for the show. Just one question. What happened to Aaliya and Tanu? Or will that be addressed later?

Either way, I really like this and I can't wait for the next update. ❤️

Aww thank you- I am so glad you find the characters relevant! Aaliya and Tanu, may or may not make an appearance later on it depends on how long I make the fic honestly I never know what the next chapter will hold. 😆

Originally posted by: sam78

Awesome updates.

Aww, thank you!