wt a fantastic update deeps...superb indeed...its amazing i have learnt so much from u through this chap..the most important of all...the title of story explained beautifully here...
sex between hearts : melting in each other with euphoric emotions,overwhelming gestures and indomitable passion of faith,paving way to the consummation of feelings 👏...excellent excellent wordings ,the title is sheer deep ..very thought provoking indeed...
loved the way u have shown arnav constant ordeal here...he is a man on roller coaster right now...some time its professional side of his which he excellent capable of to handle ..and then some times its his heart side where he is suffering very very badly and having no clue where his emotions landing him up to...his care his concern...his believes .loved the way arnav ready to support her by all means to bring the culprit to justice...his humour to bring ease to her...and fun thing in this all trauma ambiance,he is after a girl who is innocence personified...poor he ,welcome on board ..get ready for sleepless nights and tanha tanha rehta hoon mien tou bhari mehfil mien ..lol...reason as u mentioned..cause he knew his heart has already surrendered...in all certainty 😊
coming to khushi...i must saltue u deeps the way u showing her characters different shades...some time she is shown crying her heart out at the loss of her parts of her soul...and some time she shown strong enough to stand for the fight of right...sometimes she is shown sweet enough understanding daughter who is ready to support family...bringing out positivity even in her parents damn rude aggressive behaviour saying due to hearing it suddenly they reacting such
uff her words..u mean the parts of my babies...very painful indeed after reading these words i felt like by heart is going to burst with immense pain of a mother whose dream shattered brutally by non other than the man with whom she dreamed a world...u master in bringing out right emotions at right time .. wt an excellent writer u r ...fantastic...loved the way u have written damn professionally the medical procedure...i am impressed..
lavanya being amazing friend ...loved her care and concern towards khushi
awee khushi is worried about the clothes and bill ...true sense this girl is having self respect...and aweee even more for dr.r here...he their to bring comfort to her by any possible way ...awesome...
shashi and garima ...both characters yet again closest to reality...they r trained true sense under the pressures of society here...from the way u have shown garima interest in the clothes khushi wearing...shows her greedy nature...and shashi typical so called MAN of our society...and the reason he gave to khushi about family matter needs to discuss in home and all...u gave him perfect solid reasoning deeps here...amazing indeed.
must say i am impressed with gayatri character here...she proves to be well educated,understanding and top most sensible enough mother and human...seeing her character here ...its easy to say now that arnav is having her traits too...the difference of right and wrong ...and his believes ...kahin na kahin its gayatri and his family support and education which we can see on every step of story
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loved the new FRIENDSHIP in making :)...the convo between arnav khushi ...fun and fantastic...superb deeps :)...the best part about innocence is that its always unsuspicious...:)..some times the people who don't talk much to u are the people who really wanted to ...:)...i guess arnav step towards khushi as friend going to be fab for this suffering girl and his suffering heart :)
ending lines uff breath taking...loved it loads...fabulous wordings...impossible to heal aching heart...indeed...excellent chap over all...love u
Edited by lalarukh - 11 years ago
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