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RenuHooda

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Posted: 11 years ago

#291

Yaa I read 4th part
AWSOME WONDERFUL UPDATE Love IT

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Mirabell

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: .MistyMornings.
Chap 5 pileeej😃

Hello-Hi-Bye-Bye!!

In twenty four hours..:)

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Jignasha

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: Mirabell

Hello-Hi-Bye-Bye!!

In twenty four hours..:)

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Mirabell

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Posted: 11 years ago

#294

Originally posted by: Chokri_ASR

Thank you for all the love!!! :) Love it.. Love it..

ps: I dont know how to do these gifs.. :( Or I would try to get one in as well.. :)

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Arshi67

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Posted: 11 years ago

#295

Unres'd here 😳

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srilathas

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Posted: 11 years ago

#296

wow!!!!

as u rightly said, text messages can really make certain things simple which cannot be done in person...

Awesome work dear...

HAPPY NEW WISH TO U TOO!!!!

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Mirabell

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Next chapter.. It will be up pretty soon... So... :)

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Meena

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Mirabell

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Posted: 11 years ago

#299

Chapter 5: Appetence

Available on Blog. Request access. :)

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How inadequate and insufficient words are sometimes. A "thank you" carries with it so much more than eight letters. I appreciate your comments, questions and your support as always.

Next update, next Saturday.

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Meena

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Posted: 11 years ago

#300

Your words never fail to leave me breathless, M. Right from the very first damned sentence, I'm left breathless.

What is a reader to do?

And this scene not only left me breathless, but left behind this strange, broken ache inside of me, one that made me want to pull Khushi into a warm, long hug and never let her go. You make me feel, and I tell you this over and over again but god, you do.

I'm sorry, but I won't be able to pick a line this time. I'll have to copy the entire goddamned scene that brings fresh tears to my eyes every time I read it, makes me wish that Death didn't have a no warranty, no return policy, that NK could come back and give her those toe curling, knee buckling kisses that make her lean in for more instead of that cold, lifeless glass.

Hell. I've got tears in my eyes again. Never ever has an author made me wish so deeply for someone, someone that isn't even the main character! I'm not supposed to want NK to be with Khushi, but damnit I do.

This was achingly beautiful, that made my eyes prickle and my throat close and even then I went back to read it again.

I can't decide if I love you for that or hate you for it. You outdid yourself.

Love always,

Edited by chotidesi - 11 years ago