ASYA(KABHI) SS- Remember Me-Thread II Completed

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@-silentbang-

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#741

Yippee... Happy ending... 🥳

Loved it...

Please... want an epilogue also😳

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@yum_immy

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#742

Oh u have no idea how happy im with this happy ending 🥳

Shedding tears of happiness 😆

Finally AsYa reunion 👏

Mona- Rabart covo was too good 👍🏼

Awww Zinia is tooo cute ❤️

ZoHu... Beheno ka milan 😃

Me love this song... Tu hai ke nahi

A HAPPPYYY FAMILY

Good job 😉

Huggie for this chap 🤗

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Asif

@asifiqbalsh

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#743

Nice ending
Previous ending was real story & as u said that she didn't remember her husband & he died that was heart breaking. U changed the ending for giving us a happy ending. Thanks for that. I agreed that it's very difficult to read that ur favourite died but it's a life & we have to accept it. I appreciated you for ur writing skills. Waiting for your more stories to read on. thanks for pm

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Priya_KABHI

@PriyaKABHI

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#744

Thanks for PM.

It was Awesome and Beautiful Ending.😊

The Flashback Part was Just Fantastic.😊

I Just Loves Asad(KSG) Part,I Loves it.😊

ASYA(KABHI) Love Moments and The Whole Family Part was so Nice.😊

The Whole SS was So beautifully explained.😊

I am Going to miss this SS.

Will You Please Write Epilogue for this?It was Your Opinion only.😊

Please Write Like this Wonderful Stories on ASYA(KABHI) and Pm to me.

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(Missing KSG and KABHI So Much)

PriyaCherry.

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Prashni Singh

@-SilverSparkle-

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#745

Reserved!

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Unreserved!

I think I should say "Thank You" for chapter 11, even though I respected your version of the end. You wrote an alternate end for your readers', you really are amazing. 👏

There were two elements I loved:

1. The entire Asad adopting Zinia and embracing her as his own little princess, I absolutely love and obsesses over AsYa as parents especially Asad as a dad, I think he would have been a fabulous father, something I expected to see at some point in the show, alas.

2. AsYa from the moment Zoya walked into that bedroom, absolutely awesome stuff.

"But I am not going to forgive you for this. You still act like a jerk, stupid, fool man"

"Protect me from what? From you; from your love so that you can face every death of your own. You did not share with me about Zinia. Why? Why you did not share the whole truth of my Ammi's death?"

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"Ammwi, Ammwi, you came home finawwy. Zinia misshed Ammwi everyday"

"Aww..babuni..Ammi is here only from now. You will never miss her from now on"

"After changing in his usual kurta he went to meet Zinia and welcomed with the most awaited moment of his life. Both were sleeping. Zinia was enveloped with Zoya's arms. Asad tucked the blanket properly over them and kissed there forehead. His lips lingered on Zoya's forehead more than the needed time."

"He was not going to sleep alone today. He lied beside Zoya and embraced both of them with his arm."

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^^^ For this you have to promise to write AsYa as parents OSs, pretty please! ☺️

Zoya's recurring introspect of Asad's pain, feelings and hurt before she met him was higly endearing, I also loved how everyone wanted her to go to him to "make him happy"

Keep Well!

🤗

P.S Have I told you I really enjoy your unique style of writing?

Well

I do

Please write more!

Edited by p_s05 - 11 years ago