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Posted: 11 years ago
Phone conversation left me speechless here more with the added mysterious elements of the D day when everything changed between Arjun-Saakshi.




Their marraige rituals were completed?
The one thing that is clear here is that some where deep down it's Saakshi who was in his thoughts & for whom Arjun had that feelings of being more than just friends BUT was it the same from Saakshi's end?
"I am very selfish, Arjun.. I want to gather as many memories, and sounds of laughs I can, to last me when I'm all alone.."

New Entry 😈

Ayush's Maasi Tina 😆😆Khush ho jaege wo if u r getting what i am trying to say here.😉

P.S.:That sibblings song is one of my favorites.Kal wahi gaayege hum dono😉😆

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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update
some relations r so natural that anger, distance , pain nothing can change them and so is arjun radhika's relation they r connected through their hearts and so even after so much happened even after not talking to each other in 2 yrs when arjun called radhika they connected instantly
is radhika right in what she is thinking abt arjun and sakshi were they more then just friends
did arjun had some hidden feelings for sakshi which he himself couldnot understand 🤔
arjun's first impression of sakshi was like he was attracted to her then how come he was marrying roshani 🤔
and what was this bride swapping thing did arjun and sakshi got married 😕 still so many questions
and why is sakshi still away from arjun

thanks for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awwwsssmmm Update
Loved it
Supperbbb... as always
Amazing...
Arjun-Radhika's conversation Wonderfully Written
So natural n pure
Radhika is comming back
Flashback was very nice
Loved Arakshi's frist meet Arjun was impressed by her
Every emotion was described so well
Lovely Update
Continue Soon
Waiting for next part
Thanks for the PM
Edited by _Nikita_ - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
beautiful part di
love it
sorry 4 short coment
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Posted: 11 years ago
That fone call was so nice. I was waiting or that
Arjun-Di relation hai ithna spl
new entry! I know I know!!!
cant wait for Di meeting Arjun
Ye bride swapping kucch samj me ni aya
Roshni knew about it, Sakshi took part in it
all blamed Arjun for it, even after Roshni was a part of it
shaadi was over?
Ithna lollipops
jaldi bolna
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Posted: 11 years ago

Hellooo sautan meri😈🤗

I am finally here... still in a crazy state coz of you know what!🤪

Awwieee Ayush and Arjun are soo adorable ❤️ that little scene was too cute😳

Hmmm... so who's this new guy?😕

Arjun and Radhika's convo *sniff* *grabs a tissue* ... it was so emotional and need I say that you penned it so perfectly *wipes tear* (darn it! I still have khamoshiyaan goonjing around me)

"Radhika wiped her tears and almost grinned at the childishness in his voice which reminded her of the days when she would pretend to be angry with him, when he didn't finish the greens on his plate."

They're so beautiful *sniff*😭😭

Uhm ... Hold on a second. Did Roshni die on the day of their marriage? My brain is a little muddled up after the holiday... perhaps I'm missing something that I read before! And Sakshi had disappeared from that night on only na? Oh and is that why Sameer deserted Radhika? Or there was another reason... something that you haven't revealed it... Maybe my mind is really muddled, so if I ask stupid questions then you know why! 😛

Ahh the song! *pleasant distraction from you know what* It's so perfect for them... sigh! I have major goosebumps now... I have this friend from IF ... more like a sister. She and I used to sing this song for each other during DMG days hehe.. it just reminded me of her 😃

Ah ah ah the flashback! It was so... I know it was small but it was soo goosebumpy... and this line did something to me *shivers*

"He kept his eyes glued to hers, as she slowly unfastened the knot that was binding them together."

Ahh Arjun and Radhika.. their teasing... I love them too much! Let her come to him sooon.. so we get more scenes and also more flashbacks. Haan haan I know greedy me 😛 Who told you to pen down such a beautiful relationship, eh?

"Stunts nahi karunga, toh meri macho image ka kya hoga?" 🤣🤣🤣

Second part!!

I don't know if I finished my comments on the first one lol.. I was a bit lost in reading so anyway. The first meet! Haila! You know the first meet in ASD is still etched in my mind.. the sound of rain is still so real, the car, their first ride *sigh* Ok I am getting distracted. Anyway, I think this first meet adds up next to it 😳 It was simple and yet there was something very beautiful about it. And, you knocked me down with this line:

"She was indeed like a breath of fresh air, the first ever he had taken, and he realised he was in awe at the existence of something so beautifully innocent."

Darn it woman! Where do you get such beautiful words from?

Oooh a letter! Why didn't you reveal the contents? Oh maybe later, right?

Love the ending bit.. where he thinks about her 😳 Hmmm what did happen?

Hold onnn I see "to be continued..." and I just started the second part 😕 Was I that engrossed or was the second part too tiny? *raises eyebrows*

I want longer chapters! *stomps foot*😛😛

Okay u managed to temporarily distract me from you know what but now I am back to humming it once more! God save me... US!🤣

Ok, let me go dig out my tanpura and open my book of bhajans. Yeah.. ab aur kar bhi kya sakti hoon? I just heard a few of his really soft Bengali songs and drifted into heaven.. Upar se mum was like, imagine him singing it for you and I was like 😳 don't I always feel that?🤣🤣

Chalo, we're both goners. I think I'll just sleep tonight🤣

I forget to say! Beautiful chapter... but I felt it was short *forever complaining me*

Chalooo u write the next part.. tab tak I'll dream about ASD *dreamy*

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Posted: 11 years ago
Its always an awesome feelings to read on Arjun-Radhika.
I always love to read it.


So Sakshi end up marrying Arjun.


Awesome chapter.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Avniii avniii...i started reading from scratch...and started typing my comment too on I-F but then puff all got gayab because some error problem with IF 😡😡

My detailed comment went to paani😭😭😭

Anyhow let me start again 😃😃

First of all i loove the banner you made for the story ...very beautifully done and i can see daljeet in it...yayy am excited as i just loove her 😃😃


Prologue:

Its niice to read about sameer past as we never really get to read about it,always saw him as arjun bestie,his supporter and guide,this is something different which am really looking forward too 😛😛

Comiiing to arjun,am always eager to read about him not only becuase he is hotwaa hehe😳😳 but also because you always write something different about him and it always amaze me 😃😃

Chapter 1:

I really love Radhika character,very different...sweet and endearing 😃😃

Liza and shree banters are alwayss soo funny and cute and especially the glares they earn after from the two seniors hehe😆😆

Such a pure and strong bonding between arjun and radhika😛😛

Me super duper liking this story 😛😛

Avniii sachiii bolo,is there some kind of genie or i dunno what in you...where do you bring these awesooome ideas always huh...and then writing amazing stories of of them despite being super busy...you're truly a superwoman,hats off doctorji 👏👏👏

Sorry my previous comment got deleted and hence this short one 😭😭


Chapter 2 :


Am already excited for radhika entry in ETF yohooo

Awww arjun and ayush friendship...ayush is sooo cute and i just loove this nameee 😳😳

Haha arjun "arjun ishhhne giraaya" am trying to imagine chotu arjun saying that 😆😆

Radhika along with being arjun best-friend, an elder sisters, shes's also been quite like a mother figure to arjun 😛😛

Seriously was not waiting for such a revelation about sakshi,her past and about her relationship with arjun...now am understanding the story better...i had some confusion but now all are cleared 😛😛

Fantastically written avniii...looove it 👏👏


Chapter 3:

Ohkay am in loove with ayush

Finally finally radhika and arjun conversation ❤️❤️

Sooo emotional it was...yet it feels sooo soo good to see both bhai-behen talking to each other after two loong years and still nothing changed,they're still like before...some relationship never ever really changed 😃😃

Yayyy sakshiii true entry...just loove the way you described her,i just loove her style and especially bangles 😃😃

Avantikaaa avantikaaa avantikaaa just looved loooved loooved the update...me too very curious about the bride swapping but am sure there must be some strong reason behing,i guess sakshi wanted to save someone...am not the right person to say this considering me reading all stories soo late but hehe update soon 😳😳

Thank you sooo sooo much for starting another beautiful story, its indeed very interesting and me reading all updates in a go is a tiny miny proof of that 😳

Biiig biiig hugs to you
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Armagadon


answered in bold :) 😊


Hey Devi Maiya.. Kitni shaitaan ho tum!
But it's nice knowing you, u know.. Ahem.. bass bass.. Meri Sautan ko paseene choot jayenge if we team up! 😆


Originally posted by: Swara85

Ress..

Unress..

New entry..Aha...Waiting..If what I'm thinking is right about who is he, then I m waiting for his entry in ETF..😉

Glad Ayush had his Aunts with him, but still he must be missing his mom and now his dad too..He is such a cute kiddo..Arjun and his convo was pretty cute..😊
Arjun and Radhika's talk was the most awaited one and it was superb..😃Happy that Arjun let go off the guit and talked to her to get his Di back..And even more glad that Radhika also decided to take a step to mend their relationships.

Waiting for Radhika's entry in ETF and Sameer's reaction.
The little flashback in which, Radhika's nervousness, Sakshi's entry and Roshni-Sakshi's planning..It was sweet.

So Sakshi got married to Arjun instead of Roshni..
What led to Roshni's death, why she was in her place, and why did she disappeared???? so many questions...I have imagined all the possibilities and now I'm even more confused...😆So update soon..very eager to know..
Aur us letter mein kya likha tha..??
It was an awesome update..!👍🏼
Cont soon and thanks for the pm


Haha.. You may be right about that one, u know! 😉
Yup.. Ayush is like a live firecracker in this one.. 😳
Oh oh! There's a twist in there.. the marriage wasn't complete.. You'll know if you read the previous one.. 😆
Shaanti baalike.. I promise I'll reveal it all soon.. Won't delay it like last time.. Pakka promise - gulabwala.. 😉

Letter bhi padhne milega.. But in due time.. Di ko toh aa jaane do.. 😉

Thank you soo much for the follow, and comment.. Means a lot!


Originally posted by: Devangana

Nice update. Waiting for Radhika, Arjun and Sameer to come face-to-face. Please update soon.


Oh yes.. Very soon.. Thanks..

Originally posted by: sairam175

Awesome part

Arjun finally talk to her
Radikha agree to come back
What Sakshi matter?
If Arjun love Sakshi?
You expressed radikha and Arjun feelings very well
Con soon
Thanks for pm


Thank you.. 😃
I hope the next chapter explains some stuff..
As for Arjun's feelings, you'll have to wait a bit.. 😳


Originally posted by: Snehajain

I read last 2 updates together today & from past 4 hours I m thinking what to comment but nothing is coming in my mind...

You are superb in writing emotions...👏👏👏 & maintaining suspense...😆😆😆

I just loved Radhika & Arjun's relation...🤗🤗🤗
Everyone has guilt & anger for themselves for the mistakes they had not done...
A step to put everything at place has been taken in the story & that is Radikha's decision to come back...

I can just say Please Please Continue soon...And Thanks for PMs...


Arre!! Why?? 😆😆
Itnaa kya confusion tha...

Thanks so much.. oh haan.. i get the taunt! 😉
Yep.. exactly, with Radhika's entry, the stage is set for revelations to begin..
Thank you soo much..


Originally posted by: miss_precious

I now understand why you had to start a new story... Sakshi is different

And looks like radhika Mis interpreted arjuns relationship with the two girls

But why did the bride swap happen

Please update soon

Btw iv been trying to read lady in red but it says I'm not invited to ur blog ""


Oh you bet! She's very very different.. 😛
Maybe she did.. But what's different is that Arjun-Roshni's marriage was more of an arranged one..
About the bride swap, Will reveal it soonish..
I need to sort some stuff out before that..

Oh, now you do..

Thank you! Glad you're following.. 😃


Originally posted by: EashaYousufzai

Awesome awesome update didu..

Loved it very very much..
Superbly written..
You portrayed Sakshi quite differently here..
I am loving it by every update..
Please con soonz..
Dying to know more..


Thank you, Easha.. 😳
Yup, that she is..
I hate what they did to her on the show.. Absolutely loathe it!
Anyway..
Will do..
Glad you've liked it so far.. 😃


Originally posted by: anitasharma

Superb update
so bride swapping in arjun's wedding, sakshi in place of roshni
happy that radhika decided to return back
curious for next part
update soon



Thanks dear,,
Yup... But with a twist! 😃





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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: kumarvisu12

awesome yaar. Pm me waiting for sakshi mystry. Roshni betry Arjun. New entry in etf may be lover of roshni. Waiting


Hey.. Thanks..
Well, not exactly..
And the new entrant - Nope.. he's not negative.. Quite the opposite actually.. 😆
Read on! 😃

Originally posted by: NainaSM

superb

ayush and arjun cute
arjun called radhikaa
bro sis convo superbbb
radhikaa ne bohot kuch saha hai
sakshi roshni radhika flashback awesome
lekin hua kyaa ? want to know
continue soon


Thank you..
Good question! All in due time, friend.. 😉


Originally posted by: Sakshithegreat

Awesome
So Arjun and Sakshi are married
Why did they do the bride swap
When is Sakshi and Arjun going to meet
Hoping soon continue and pm me
So many questions 😆 😆


Ermm.. There's a little twist in there..
Haha.. I love questions.. Keep them coming!
And I hope to answer some in the following Chapters..
Thank you.. 😃


Originally posted by: Humzy

awsm chap

loved it
continue soon


Thanks!
Will try my best..


Originally posted by: misakiscarlet

amazing update..
finally arjun called her dii... phone call aas descibed vry beautifully...
loved it.. cant wait to see radhika in the team
contd. soon
thnx for pm


Thank you..
Very soon.. 😃


Originally posted by: fly.high

brilliantly written update with enough amount of emotions, and suspense and even shocks at some certain points...

had guessed the bride swapping thing by previous update...nf it confirmed in this one...but still wonder wat led sakshi to take roshni 's place in the marriage

emotional in the conversation of arjun and radhika

and who is this new character entering the team...do give a face for him when u reveal him...

continue soon avni

love
Birdie


Thanks, dear..
Glad you could relate to all of that!

Oh.. There's a long story in there.. Will reveal in bits - starting from the next one.. 😛

As for him! I had Shaleen in mind.. Mind you, Shaleen Malhotra and Arjun were/are/will NEVER be the same for me.. 😈
I know silly.. Feel free to imagine anyone you'd like to.. How about Mohit Sehgal? 😉


Originally posted by: drunkiiebabe

Amazing updateThanks for the pm


Thank you so much!


Originally posted by: Jannat94

Awesome one Sweety

Thanks for the PM
Update soon


Thanks dear.. 😃


Originally posted by: Areesha566

beautiful part di
love it
sorry 4 short coment


Thank you..
That's okay.. 😃


Originally posted by: _BlackPearl_

Its always an awesome feelings to read on Arjun-Radhika.

I always love to read it.


So Sakshi end up marrying Arjun.


Awesome chapter.



Pleasure!
I love them loads..

Errm.. A twist there, is all i can say for now..
More in Chapter 5..

Thank you!

P.S. : your sig! <3
Waiting to watch him in Khamoshiyan.. <3 <3


Originally posted by: ll-Farheen-ll

Phone conversation left me speechless here more with the added mysterious elements of the D day when everything changed between Arjun-Saakshi.




Their marraige rituals were completed?
The one thing that is clear here is that some where deep down it's Saakshi who was in his thoughts & for whom Arjun had that feelings of being more than just friends BUT was it the same from Saakshi's end?
"I am very selfish, Arjun.. I want to gather as many memories, and sounds of laughs I can, to last me when I'm all alone.."

New Entry 😈

Ayush's Maasi Tina 😆😆Khush ho jaege wo if u r getting what i am trying to say here.😉

P.S.:That sibblings song is one of my favorites.Kal wahi gaayege hum dono😉😆


Hahaha... D-day is the mother of all Lollipops, trust me.. 😉
who knows? Go figure out for yourself!
Sab main bataungi, toh tum kya karogi? 😛

Perhaps, yes.. Or no.. More on it in the following chapters..

😆😆 Oh! I really doubt that, gundi.. Pehle toh khushi se pagla jaati woh, but you know how we feel about he-who-must-not-be-named now.. 😛😉

Darn! miss ho gaya na.. Sautan ko aane do.. Phir pakka gaayenge.. 😉

Thank you ji.. 🤗
*Lag jaa gale* Kachumbar bana dena hai tera toh! 😛


Originally posted by: sisodia_shefali

nice update
some relations r so natural that anger, distance , pain nothing can change them and so is arjun radhika's relation they r connected through their hearts and so even after so much happened even after not talking to each other in 2 yrs when arjun called radhika they connected instantly
is radhika right in what she is thinking abt arjun and sakshi were they more then just friends
did arjun had some hidden feelings for sakshi which he himself couldnot understand 🤔
arjun's first impression of sakshi was like he was attracted to her then how come he was marrying roshani 🤔
and what was this bride swapping thing did arjun and sakshi got married 😕 still so many questions
and why is sakshi still away from arjun

thanks for pm


Very well said..
It's these ties that run thicker than blood, very often..

Perhaps, yes.. Something like that

More on it in the upcoming chapters..
Sorry to keep you hanging and confused, but I really need to sketch it out well..

Thanks a lot.. 😃

Originally posted by: _Nikita_

Awwwsssmmm Update
Loved it
Supperbbb... as always
Amazing...
Arjun-Radhika's conversation Wonderfully Written
So natural n pure
Radhika is comming back
Flashback was very nice
Loved Arakshi's frist meet Arjun was impressed by her
Every emotion was described so well
Lovely Update
Continue Soon
Waiting for next part
Thanks for the PM


Hey..
Thanks so much!
Glad you could relate to everything..
Lots more coming up! 😃


Originally posted by: kunchu

That fone call was so nice. I was waiting or that

Arjun-Di relation hai ithna spl
new entry! I know I know!!!
cant wait for Di meeting Arjun
Ye bride swapping kucch samj me ni aya
Roshni knew about it, Sakshi took part in it
all blamed Arjun for it, even after Roshni was a part of it
shaadi was over?
Ithna lollipops
jaldi bolna



Hola K!
Yup.. it is.. 😃
Haha.. You bet! (This time he's gonna steal your heart a bit more..) Guess why! 😉
😆😆
Questions ki barsaaat.. Break lagaao, behen..
Will reveal everything in due time.. Oh and won't delay, pakka.. 😳
Thanks so much K.. You know it means a lot! 🤗

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