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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hiii guys. I'm back with yet again another OS. Let me know what you think and pleaseee comment below.
It had been 2 years since Viraj and Nisha had last seen each other. Nisha had decided to quit the academy after she had won the state competition and had given the academy the recognition it had needed. She decided to forget about Viraj. Viraj broke her heart. He did it intentionally. He knew about how Nisha was pretending to be his email waali friend. He had suspected her since the day he heard her confess her feelings on the roof. He got one of his friends to pretend that she was Aarti. He knew she wouldn't be able to confess to him. He made up lies about how the girl sitting in his cabin is the very girl who he had become friends with online. He did it because he believed that he didn't deserve her. She was too good for him. He was never angry with her. He knew her intentions were clean.

Nisha had decided to move to Delhi. She became independent. Dadaji was finally proud of her. She had started her own NGO in Dadaji's name. Every so often an article would be published on her. She had changed. She had become more confident but that was all a show. Deep inside she was broken. Heartbroken. But she would never let anyone see. She was the new Nisha.

After two years she had returned to Delhi. It was Saurav's wedding. He was getting married to a girl from the academy. Nisha was hesitant about attending the wedding, can she go back to Jaipur, the very place she had her heartbroken but then how could she miss out on her best friend's wedding?

Nisha's family were elated to see her. She had become more open to hugs and kisses from her family members. She hugged her Dadaji. Roopan Tai had commented on how skinny Nisha had gotten. Her parents were just glad that she was finally home.

The cousins had thrown a pre wedding party for Saurav. It was at some remote area in Jaipur. Suku and Jwalaa had decorated the small hut where the party would be held. There was music, balloons, drinks and food. Photographs on the wall of all the memories that they had shared. Nisha had made her way to the party with a small box in her hand. The cousins had finally enjoyed their reunion however as Aman was expecting both Umesh and Dolly had decided to go home early. Jwalaa had exams so she and Bunty and Kirti were the next ones to go. Suku, being Suku had set up a date with some girl he had met at the mall so he left soon after. Saurav and Nisha were the last ones left.

"Nishaa" said Saurav as he sat down next to her.
"Don't" she said. "Just don't. I know what you're going to say. But I'm here for you. For your wedding so let's not relive the past."
Saurav thought it would be best not to talk about Viraj and he nodded.

"Anyway Saurav i have a smaaall gift for you" said Nisha as she handed him a small wooden box. "Inside this box are all our memories, photos, tickets, our detention cards and even a piece of your tshirt that i had accidently ripped when we were 7!" she giggled.
"Nisha, you really are my best friend you know!" he said as he patted her shoulders.
"I know yaar!" and she hugged him. Saurav was taken aback by this gesture. The girl who would never hug anyone, had hugged him? Nevertheless, he hugged her back.

The next few pre wedding functions and rituals were attended by the Gangwal family. Nisha had made the effort to dress up for all the occasions which shocked the entire family. At times she would wear her usual western meets eastern tops and trousers at other times she would go full on eastern.

It was finally the day of the wedding, everyone was waiting for Nisha to come down. Dadaji was taken aback. He quickly grabbed his seat. Nisha had come down wearing a dark blue saree, heels and actually had her make up and hair done. She followed by Kirti. Nisha's parents exchanged glaces, they finally agreed that Nisha was confident in her body.

"What?!" Nisha asked as she examined the expressions on the faces of her family. She could help herself but burst into a fit of laughter.

"Who are you and what have you done with Nisha?!" asked Suku.
"Come on guys! It's my best friend's wedding! Anyway can we please make a move? I really want to meet Saurav beforehand!" cried Nisha. The entire family made their way to the wedding but most of them were in shock, especially Roopan.

Nisha started to look for Saurav. She had asked around and she was directed to all the wrong rooms. She made her way to the garden and suddenly she had bumped into someone. "Oh! Sorry" she said, as she grabbed her purse from the floor. "I hadn't seen you" she said as she checked the contents of her purse. Suddenly she looked up. There stood the man who broke her heart. He too was wearing a dark blue shirt with a polkadot bow tie. She was lost for words.

"Miss Nisha" said Viraj, he couldn't believe that she was standing before him after so many years.
Nisha didn't reply, she composed herself and she walked away leaving Viraj in shock. Viraj followed her, "Nisha can we please talk? I really need to talk to you! Pleaseee!".

"No! This is nor the time nor the place!" she said as she stopped. Viraj examined her face. She was still beautiful but she had lost her natural glow. She had lost her innocence. Was he to blame?

"Nisha, please. I can't do this any longer. The past two years have been horrible. You left without saying goodbye." cried Viraj.

"So?!" snapped Nisha.

"So?! Nisha please I know you were my email friend. I'm so sorry that I pretended my friend Puja was Aarti. I thought I didn't deserve you but the moment you left my world had collapsed. I tried to look for you but your parents forbid me. I saw articles written about you. I've collected them all. I knew you loved me. I heard you confess to your cousins on your birthday. I was an idiot! Every person I had ever loved had left me. I didn't want you to leave me. I always felt cursed. So I thought if I pushed you away we would both be happy. But I was wrong. You we're my happiness!" cried Viraj.

Nisha was fuming with anger. He knew how she had felt about him. "You knew?! You knew everything?! Yet you toyed with my emotions and you claim the past two years have been horrible! You have no idea how I felt after seeing that girl in your cabin. You're just a selfish person. You just care about yourself. You didn't even give me a chance to justify myself.. Well Mr Viraj Singh Rathore, two years ago you broke me. And this is me breaking you!" said Nisha as she turned around and walked away from Viraj.

Viraj wasn't going to give up so easily. He promised to himself that he's going to fight to get her back. One day.



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Posted: 11 years ago
#2
awesuuum story
absolutely amazing loved it
i am a new fan of NAUC
nisha as a confident woman n most imp in eastern attire - the concept is amazing
pls do continue though it is as os pls makeit an ss
n viraj breaking nisha's heart - i will not spare him 😡
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Interesting... Please do update soon ...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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its an amazing story .
please continue it.😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome story😊
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#6
Continue or i will cry...such a good story not updated...why...incredibly written..loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
#7
Superb story...loved it...if possible do continue this story with some more parts.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Splendid start...this is amazing.
I love this confident Nisha, wish she would become like this too in the show...yayyy
Plsss continue plsss
Posted: 11 years ago
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There's like a lone tear, rolling down my cheek.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow...amazing story...nisha turns into a confident girl...that is what i want to see in d show..superb👍🏼
Plz continue soon

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