oh wow so u write more stories to along with arranged love hmm sound interesting.
so coming to the story this is absolutely fantastic.
the concept is new, different, interesting, superb nd lovely :-)
loved ur story arranged love nd i m sure this one also will be nd is super duper hit
intro is superb!!!!! different from ur other stories
Now part one
The starting is awesome. shilpa nd her cute antics. so sweet :-)
loved how she is confised abt the dresses which is totally similar just different colours. :-)
then her phone conversation with that guy amol is funny :-D
The next scene is really heart touching its a really beautiful where shilpa feels armaan presence . her emotions is described really well by u each colour of emotions happy to see het love after so long, betrayed, angry, shock ,pain loved, each nd every single expressions is described or presented very well or perfectly written by u dear
"Aasmaani" the name is beautiful nd unique yaar i just loved it :-)
loved both mother daughter moments :-) aasmani is sooo cute they way she react to ridhz talk is so beautiful nd cute md sweet
The flashback is also awesome after reading it i just feel anger build up inside me for armaan omg how can he do this poor shilpa has to suffer so much feeling bad for her.
Now Part second
armaan side story hmm tje confusion is cleared in this part
he is also sad by all this nd he is not really at fault but at the same time is also at fault. its just a case of misunderstanding
so armaan also feels shilpa's presence happy that he too loves her nd feels the same for her .
ridhima is also guilty nd armaan too . loved armaan side flashback too nd again u very well described the dream sequence with reality nd armaan point of view nd his side story nd pain too is also fabulous hope everything will be fine soon :-) nd it will be as destiny is planning this as they both again come together in a total filmy way :-)
Now this part ,Part third
the starting is spectacular shilpa in armaan arms nd then eyes speaks or do the talks :-) :-D
but their moments was so soon disturbed by amol *pout*
omg loved jealous armaan he nd thought ate cute nd funny.
Amol anger is too much yaar but happy that he loves shilpa so much.
again beautifully presented or expressed the emotions or thinking of these four ( ridhz, armaan, shilpa nd amol) by ur words
loved how amol react or behave with both ar (armaan nd ridhima) nd loved how armaan convinced him of his love for shilpa
The mall scene of ridhima nd aasmani is soo soo cute. aaasmani 's antic specially her efforts for whistling nd then huffing with cross hands that is cute i just so loved that scene in today's part.
then tje naughty girl jumps from tje trolley so risky thankfully she doesn't hurt herself but tjen roam in the shop luckily armaan was there nd she remember him wow wat a memory i must say
this scene is also heart touching nd lovely nd beautiful.
the way armaan feels the connection between them is lovely nd the best scene of the this part
nd then armaan realize or found abt aasmani being his nd shilpa daughter nd his reaction is worth watching
nd the bond of both father nd daughter in such short Span is superb loved how armaan talk to aasmani nd the way she reacts or responds to him
loved how armaan confessed his love for shilpa nd clear her misunderstanding regarding ridhima.
hope he will soon convince her :-)
now plz yaar do continue soon dont take too long nd plz give an update of arranged love its been two months :-(
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