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Posted: 11 years ago
i absolutely loath this karan
he is so cheap and disgusting
i hope arnav will soon bring doleful khushi into insouciant khushi soon, which is her true self
can't wait for teasers
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Oh! my khushi. . why she had to marry that Karan.. He is a self-centered, mean, insensitive jerk.. He doesn't deserve Khushi.. I m hating him so much.. But its amazing the way you shaped his character... He is so real and our society is filled with men like him..

Loved the bumping scene.. And I would like to eliminate karan from the picture.. So won't talk about him at all... Khushi's cute sorry expression, Arnav concern for her and above all two strangers got connected with one touch.. That felt so pure.. Khushi's reaction to Arnav palming her belly pierced my heart.. Her damp eyes showed that how much she yearns for love. . So touching...

Khushi sharing with Lavvu about the stranger and how he made her feel brought tears in my eyes.. She only wants to be loved and to feel wanted... And it is too much for that jerk to give her.. I love Lavanya.. She is the only sincere relation in khushi's life.. Glad that Khushi has someone who truly cares for her.. Love the friendship..
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Posted: 11 years ago
Amazing update..
They will b introduced to each other..
Khushi had abortions..
So much going on wid her.. And arnav will reveal it soon..
Continue soon..
Do pm me if possible..
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Posted: 11 years ago
Seems like stupid Karan gets Khushi's babies aborted
And now she will be meeting Arnav whose already on the case regarding the number of abortions
Maybe Khushi will find out and Lavanya suspicion and reasons for not liking Karan might come infront of Khushi
Loved the update
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Posted: 11 years ago
loved the update
hate kara n dr. deshmukh already
smell something fishy in khushi's fainting
is karan the reason for the abortions/miscarriages khushi faced?
can i kill that bas***d😡
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Posted: 11 years ago
Opened the door to his future...
Why did you stopp there.

Simply superb update Deepthi. I loved it a lot. That Karan is really a jerk. Lavanya is right.

I loved the friendship between Lavanya and Khushi and how they are drooling on a stranger.

Khushi also attracted to the most handsome doctor Dr. R ... She felt the warmth in his touch. Now I can understand that jerk never touched Khushi with love or affection. She felt the difference instantly. i can understand how she must have been craving for the loving touch.

Now I am eagerly waiting for the next chapter.. You better give fast.. Otherwise.. My BP levels will rise up. I wanted to write more.. But time Deepu.. Sorry for that.
Edited by lovedrops - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow awesome ff love it
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Posted: 11 years ago
Today I remembered one song and thought it was so apt for Khushi here.
So this is for you darling, hang in there for some more time, because there is always a bright sunny day waiting after a stormy night.

Zindagi ki yehi reet hai
Haar ke baad hi jeet hai

Thode aansu hai, thodi hasi
Aaj gham hai to kal hai khushi


Edited by canapoem - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
i dont understand why beautiful women always end up with jerks.. that was my favorite line... dont worry arnie baby... she is yours .. afterall you are the protagonist of this ff and her husband is just a villain in the story. i am just waiting for the day when arnav will beat the crap out of this "kutta-kameena" karan but i know i have to wait a little longer for that to happen. going back to the story, splendid update as always. loved lavvu and khushi conversation. khushi is going so touchy about the touch . hope she will get more of these touches in the future which i am sure is going to happen. want to see karan's reaction on seeing that handsome doctor as khushi's doctor. buwhahaha... you scolded your wife for that unintentional touch. how will you react when he will touch her on the pretext of examining and too not once but multiple times??... desperately waiting for the next update...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Seriously ppl lke Karan doesn't deserve an awesome wife lke khushi
How cruel he is 😡
Such a crooked mind he has 😡
Finally our hero's entry in heroine's life!!! 😆 👏 😉
Aww armav 😳
Dr Deshmukh!!! Seriously should b thrown out of her job
She is shame to Dr profession
Being a Dr n woman herself she is bad mouthing bout women
Thank God arnav hve her a good piece of mind!!!! N on top she is breaking d rules n regulations!!!
Y do I think tht all this it wasn't a miscarriage tht Khushi went through bt abortion !!!
Creepy Karan n his family members r!!!
Post asap
Eagerly waiting for d nxt parts
Tq 4 d pm 😡
Edited by ambi08 - 11 years ago

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