#T3 - SS:'Love Starts After Marriage - season 1' epi pg.37 - Page 10

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Posted: 11 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: Harshika_HR123

Oh god superb writting 👍🏼 i liked it so sikki was the real culprit he wanted to kill my so loving ,caring RK 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 thik kiya RK ne us sikki ke sath but what i liked the most was our stupid madhu ne kya courage dikhya yr 😊 😛 😛 😛 😛 mast tha ise yeh pta chata hai ke kabhi bhi kise pagl ko mast provoke krna nhi to wo tumko kise bhi cheese se maar sakti hai 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 😃 🤣


RK ne jo maar us sikki wo to pta tha mjhe i had predicted that but yeh nhi pta tha ke yeh pagl bhi kuch kr payege but she did it jab sikki ne bola ke he wanted to kill RK to kya maara usko sir pr bartan se

Moral of story agar aap kabhi bhi ghar pr ho to immediately kitchen me jaye & waha ek bowl me ek cup water boil kre & agar koi aap pr humla kre to phir us water ko us pr dale phir us utensil se uske sir pr maar kr bhaag jaye😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆


haha..lovely & Hilarious comment dear. Enjoyed reading it.
yes, sikky s d real culprit lol
haha..i think u like action scenes lol.
yes she got angry when sikky said he tried to kill her rk so she hit him with that pan lol. Then rk gave his quota of beating to sikky lol.
haha.,nice moral. Loved it. Yes everyone shld run to kitchen of they feel like any danger coming nearer to them lol.
thanks dear.
Edited by madhurish - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#92

Originally posted by: bevi-najim

awesome update

wow my hero came in right time
to save his love
sikky he need more kick 😡

wow they going to have twins
wow lovely lovely... 😃😉
sorry for the late comment dear


tjanks dear. Yes our hero saved his love & his babies.
yes twins😳
its okay dear.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#93

Originally posted by: NehaVdian

Finally i m commenting on my most fav priya story aww...thanks neha dear!!
hayeee mere bed rockers i missed blabbering on u ppl but kya karoon after u ppl.lead to my sudden demise my ghost was also finding it hard to come over here lol LOL!! No! No! try hard & come here to comment for me LOL!!
kitna khush thi main ki my poor doctor got one gud break frm his talli
isshhh kaash jab wo taxi mein akele tha
i wld have landed over there n kidnapped him haha...u r so desperate to get him but what to do he came back home as madhu's savior LOL
n had my ways with him ki talli wld have vanished away forever frm his mind my doc escaped from u LOL!!
but duhh it seems by ghostly flight was in no mood to land safely n my doctor fled away again to talli his official damsel in distress lol Yep!! u took ur time to kidnap him so he fled to his talli LOL!!
arey waah talli badi jaldi samajh aa gayi tujhe ki
tera so callled frienddd was making secret plans for u wen u were buzy fighting with ur kisi na kaam.ka doctor huh hindi samajh nahi aati tujhko na ab bhugat psychopan
par wait sabse badi psycho to tu hai haha...she is a dumbo so she quickly understood abt her so called friend LOL!!
to.tera friendwa is second psycho haan haha...1st or 2nd they are psychos for sure LOL!!
pehli baar kari na koi dhang ka kaam
keep it up talli for throwing boil milk on ur sikky pikky one psycho fighting another psycho
huh poora wwf ka maidaan ban gaya lol LOL..talli got mad when he said he tried to kill her bed rocking toy so she beat him hard with pan LOL!!
ahaann so finally doctor is back yup!!
to save his talli but i love this entry this time thanks!!
not for talli but the two lil sweet unborn talli babies awe..yes, he saved his babies too...
baap re ek bachaa kam tha ab bechare ko haha...
teen teen bachhe handle karne padenge lol exactly...3...3...3 babies LOL!!
poor doctor feeling sad for him!!

on a serious note awesome updates dii thanks neha baby!!
i missed u a lot n really sorry for being late i missed u too...dont say sorry for nothing!!
n sorry for not giving seperate comments its okay!!
i m really too tired to do that lol plus my laptop isnt working n frm phone i can manage this much only
no emoticons too oh fine baby!!
my comment is so adhura lol not for me!!

cont.soon will do!!


will reply tmrw frim my laptop. Now i m on my mobile lol😆
Edited by madhurish - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#94

Originally posted by: Shriya.bk

Congratulations on new thread sudha akka 🤗 thanks shri baby!!

Coming to the update
What is this hun? what dear??
That stupid Sikki had to get so much beating from Rk too bad I pity on him 🤣 what? u pity for him?? he tried to kill Rk & he gave so many trubles for rishbala & u r siding him?? too bad hun!! LOL
Arrey why does this talli always be saved hun? 😆 becos she is my heroine!!
I thought that the baby would be a boy as handsome as Doctor! but no you gave us twins 😆
NO problem we all will adjust 😆 yes, adjust!! still a handsome boy is there along with a cute little girl!!
Doctor pls...don't worry a lot for Tallibala instead worry for me na! 😆 haha...no never!!
I totally didn't expect Madhu to hit Sikki with the pan ...I think few of his backbones would be broken 😆 even i think so!! LOL
Sikki ...Sikki...Sikki...just get it in ur stupid thick skull head that " You can never get Talli in any life because her Super boy is always with her"😆 exactly!!!
Sikki one more thing man if you next time have any plan to separate Talli and Doctor then pls...pls...pls...do add me in ur plan because I wanted Rk! 🤣 sikky's chapter is over & no more plotings LOL!! so u dream on my rk but he will be never yours LOL
Doctor pls...pls...be mine 😆 oh baby, already i have given him to neha so u ask her LOL

Tfs for pm b sudha akka ..welcome dear!!



shri i ll reply soon.
Edited by madhurish - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#95

Originally posted by: Abhiya4life

Res 😆
I knew there would be another thread 😃 😆

Unres 😆

There's two of them!!!!!!! 🤣 those poor things...🤣
So doctor did come to save his Tallibala...darn🤣 we almost had her 🤣 Did they ever get that dead puppy out of the room? 😆 Its going to stink 🤣

Sikky has been beat up to a pulp...and now is in jail...that fast? 🤣 did doctor use his powers to teleport him into an empty cell? 🤣 after all he is super boy 😆

He gave Tallibala magical pills and pain gayab? 🤣 Maybe the babies were just mad that Sikky uncle told them a terrible story...and the fact that a decomposing dead puppy was in their house 🤣

Two little babies...and not one for MoDha 🤣 At least one sudha...Tallibala's kids need to be entertained...by their uncle...🤣

Now RK will get two looks of disapproval when his two kids pop out 🤣 welcome to Tallibala's world...where no one can escape 🤣 welcome to hell 🤣

Overall loved the update sudha...you should change the SS to FF...seriously 🤣
Continue soon 😃


i resed it here & instead of editing i have quoted & the reply to ur comment went to next page😆
Edited by madhurish - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#96

Originally posted by: Ni33

OMG...What was that?🤣 The urge for Patil or the teacher with a grudge to enter and shoot RK in his forehead came in part 23... u wanted to shoot madhu only right? now rk too??😭 But now...this wasn't a urge but something that needed to happen...🤣 kill him Ni...make peace to ur death by killing my leads!! LOLYes I know he wasn't even there then...But you writing Madhu calling for him...I knew he would come and hoped for Patil's or the teacher's arrival...🤣Neither of which happened...haha...

And honestly what kind of pill was that RK gave Madhu? Some magic pill removing internal bleeding and losing their babies...🤣 well, i explained abt it to u in scrap!! there are such pills!! Now I know what RK is...🤣 He is a leprachuan...🤣 Watching those horror Movies containing them...I am eagerly waiting for RK's soon demise... watch few more horror movies & kill him in a way which no one could have imagined LOL!! Hey I don't have to wait I'll kill him myself... so fast hun!! I can't let Madhu kill him...She is already dead...Or maybe I can...😉 yes, u can...this reminds me of sullu coming back from death in ur ff : ltkftl LOL Her fingernails would do the trick...🤣 Lets introduce Zombie Madhu...😆 haha...do whatever u please to Ni...u r written for the sad version of LSAM LOL
Madhu and her babies dies...haha..when talli dies & the fate of the babies too ends LOL!! But the souls of those babies hovers around not knowing where to go...i knw where its going...kavya di's rishi bba is on the way LOL!! Then the boy sees an opening at Radhaji...LOL, Ni...opening LOL!! He sees she is about to get pregnant...So he takes the spot... haha...boy is smart who took the 1st spot LOL... While the girl sees the same thing with Deepali and does the same... And so enters Rishi baba to the world as Modha's fourth child...The favorite of the four... successfully u have transferred d kids in two diff wombs...u made them orphan by killing their parents but u gave them new parents too LOL!!
While in darkness Madhu awaitens for her Doctor to return to the now empty apartment...He enters the apartment in Delhi after a long search for a new job with no luck... He goes to the bedroom disgusted, remembering what he did there with his late Biwi...🤣 Little does he know that she awaits for him behind the bedroom door... He enters and close the door with a smash, not noticing her standing there with her long fingernails... Waiting for his arrival in order to get her revenge...He starts unbuttoning his shirt and pants... while a frustrated tallibala figths her natural instincts to jump on him and do some bedrocking...🤣 She quietly nears him while he undresses himself...and then takes the syringe that she searched for earlier and injects it in RK...RK quickly turns around and gets shocked to see his dead Biwi... He killed her...How can she be alive...😆 He decides that the confusion can get cleared later, now the priority is to disable her...When he suddenly falls on the bed...Unable to move...
"Don't worry...I'll take good care of you...Like you did with me..." Madhu evilly smirked
She climbs on top of him and finishes with undressing him...
"What are you going to do with me you sick manipulated shrew?"
"Ah returning the favor for what you did with me...Then I might rest in Peace..." (Like me and Di would let her...🤣)
She begins to lighlty scratch RK with her Nails...And then after some time she deepens her scratch...Separating his flesh a Little each time making some droplets of blood to ooze out... Madhu gets excited seeing the blood and starts to go deeper each time...Unsatisified with the Little blood that oozes out...
"Stop it..."
"Sure I'll stop...At the same time you did with me...When you are dead" It got more brutal...The scratches turned into maim...And soon there wasn't a part of RK that didn't bleed... Madhu covered with his blood...Licked herself...
"I should have done this earlier...Umm...Bitter...I regret tasting your blood... I guess you don't eat enough of junk food or sweets to have a sweet blood like me... Well you won't have a chance in doing so either..." That was the last thing RK heared before closing his eyes for the last time...😆
Ni...awesome yaar...seriously my eyes are wet now not bcos i cried for u killing my leads but the way u have written it...it was so funny..i loved it!! i think u shld have written a ghost story like this instead of posting it in my comment...bala killing her husband...first part how her husband plotted to kill her & how he succeeded & second part how his ghosty wife takes her revenge on him LOL!!
gosh! scratching with nails, sucking the blood... terrific death for Rk...i liked this death more than talli's...bcos this happened in BED LOL!!

Yes I killed RK too...😆 successfully!! And Modha got their Rishi baby...yeah, they did got one in place of the one they lost LOL!!😆

thank u so much Ni..for this hilarious comment!! u know how much i ll enjoy ur comments so i'm not going to tell again!!

feeling sad that this story is gonna end in next part & i ll miss ur comment terribly...



Edited by madhurish - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#97
very nice story
i read in one go n i just loved it...
madhu is so cute n bubbly n on other hand rk so carying ...
plz update asap
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Posted: 11 years ago
#98

Originally posted by: Dd1908

very nice story
i read in one go n i just loved it...
madhu is so cute n bubbly n on other hand rk so carying ...
plz update asap


thanks dear!!
glad u liked it!!
yes they are so cute & caring couple!!
will try to update soon!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Edited by madhurish - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
When u update next part 😕

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