Originally posted by: Ni33
OMG...What was that?🤣 The urge for Patil or the teacher with a grudge to enter and shoot RK in his forehead came in part 23... u wanted to shoot madhu only right? now rk too??😭 But now...this wasn't a urge but something that needed to happen...🤣 kill him Ni...make peace to ur death by killing my leads!! LOLYes I know he wasn't even there then...But you writing Madhu calling for him...I knew he would come and hoped for Patil's or the teacher's arrival...🤣Neither of which happened...haha...
And honestly what kind of pill was that RK gave Madhu? Some magic pill removing internal bleeding and losing their babies...🤣 well, i explained abt it to u in scrap!! there are such pills!! Now I know what RK is...🤣 He is a leprachuan...🤣 Watching those horror Movies containing them...I am eagerly waiting for RK's soon demise... watch few more horror movies & kill him in a way which no one could have imagined LOL!! Hey I don't have to wait I'll kill him myself... so fast hun!! I can't let Madhu kill him...She is already dead...Or maybe I can...😉 yes, u can...this reminds me of sullu coming back from death in ur ff : ltkftl LOL Her fingernails would do the trick...🤣 Lets introduce Zombie Madhu...😆 haha...do whatever u please to Ni...u r written for the sad version of LSAM LOL
Madhu and her babies dies...haha..when talli dies & the fate of the babies too ends LOL!! But the souls of those babies hovers around not knowing where to go...i knw where its going...kavya di's rishi bba is on the way LOL!! Then the boy sees an opening at Radhaji...LOL, Ni...opening LOL!! He sees she is about to get pregnant...So he takes the spot... haha...boy is smart who took the 1st spot LOL... While the girl sees the same thing with Deepali and does the same... And so enters Rishi baba to the world as Modha's fourth child...The favorite of the four... successfully u have transferred d kids in two diff wombs...u made them orphan by killing their parents but u gave them new parents too LOL!!
While in darkness Madhu awaitens for her Doctor to return to the now empty apartment...He enters the apartment in Delhi after a long search for a new job with no luck... He goes to the bedroom disgusted, remembering what he did there with his late Biwi...🤣 Little does he know that she awaits for him behind the bedroom door... He enters and close the door with a smash, not noticing her standing there with her long fingernails... Waiting for his arrival in order to get her revenge...He starts unbuttoning his shirt and pants... while a frustrated tallibala figths her natural instincts to jump on him and do some bedrocking...🤣 She quietly nears him while he undresses himself...and then takes the syringe that she searched for earlier and injects it in RK...RK quickly turns around and gets shocked to see his dead Biwi... He killed her...How can she be alive...😆 He decides that the confusion can get cleared later, now the priority is to disable her...When he suddenly falls on the bed...Unable to move...
"Don't worry...I'll take good care of you...Like you did with me..." Madhu evilly smirked
She climbs on top of him and finishes with undressing him...
"What are you going to do with me you sick manipulated shrew?"
"Ah returning the favor for what you did with me...Then I might rest in Peace..." (Like me and Di would let her...🤣)
She begins to lighlty scratch RK with her Nails...And then after some time she deepens her scratch...Separating his flesh a Little each time making some droplets of blood to ooze out... Madhu gets excited seeing the blood and starts to go deeper each time...Unsatisified with the Little blood that oozes out...
"Stop it..."
"Sure I'll stop...At the same time you did with me...When you are dead" It got more brutal...The scratches turned into maim...And soon there wasn't a part of RK that didn't bleed... Madhu covered with his blood...Licked herself...
"I should have done this earlier...Umm...Bitter...I regret tasting your blood... I guess you don't eat enough of junk food or sweets to have a sweet blood like me... Well you won't have a chance in doing so either..." That was the last thing RK heared before closing his eyes for the last time...😆
Ni...awesome yaar...seriously my eyes are wet now not bcos i cried for u killing my leads but the way u have written it...it was so funny..i loved it!! i think u shld have written a ghost story like this instead of posting it in my comment...bala killing her husband...first part how her husband plotted to kill her & how he succeeded & second part how his ghosty wife takes her revenge on him LOL!!
gosh! scratching with nails, sucking the blood... terrific death for Rk...i liked this death more than talli's...bcos this happened in BED LOL!!
Yes I killed RK too...😆 successfully!! And Modha got their Rishi baby...yeah, they did got one in place of the one they lost LOL!!😆
thank u so much Ni..for this hilarious comment!! u know how much i ll enjoy ur comments so i'm not going to tell again!!
feeling sad that this story is gonna end in next part & i ll miss ur comment terribly...