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Posted: 11 years ago
#91
Shit this like button.. never works for me..
Annie.. darling this SS is another proof why you count among my fav writers and even hold among top positions.

Vidharth.. so beautiful..
and this story is not the typical one hence i loved it to the core.

Coming to the writing, you were fabulous since the timew e collaborated three years ago (ofcourse that was a disaster since we never completed it) but you see i'm a fan of your writing skills.



Will watch for future updates of this.



Love,
Tich.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#92

Originally posted by: senasenapati

Tum jo aye zindgi me baat ban gyi!!

🤣 Yeh kyun gaa rahi hain tu?

so finally an update...but im late this tym..
Arre, no worries! You read and then give comments.. As it is, I had no plans of updating soon after, coz of my exams. Now my exams are done.

Sabse pehle...this part was awesome blossom yaar!!
Gee, thanks, Suprabha! 😳

after reading it i felt u utilised your vacation in fabricating this update...cause it is described so well..
so another quality of parth revealed...besharam k sath piyakkad bhi h...
😆 Bechaare Piyakkad bana diya?! Oh man!! 🤣 Come on, love! He was just drinking one bottle of beer!!

u were rit..i never get fursat frm his face to notice his other qualities...hahaha...once i catch him on the screen my thoughts are ceased rit der...i think apart frm the uniqueness of the show he is the biggest reason i watch shq...otherwaise i hardly remain stick to any show more than a month...

Ohhh... Once am done analysing their faces, I like to see what other features they have. Like Vardhaan has a lean body and I like that. Randhir stands proud and I like it too. Hmm... It's been a year or 2 years since I visited this forum, because I had been watching IPKKND and had started participating actively on IF! Then, came Qubool Hai, which worked well too for a while, before I lost interest, and so did my visits reduce to no visits at all.. :(
Now am back with SH!! :D

i ve seen him high on booze on the show ...but here your minute descriptions made him look a GRAND PIYAKKAD...uff what to say yaar...looks like you have experimented long over drunkards...hahahaha

Oh god!!! Those minute descriptions were of a normal human being who is thinking too much and not under any influence. 😆 Experimented?! 🤣 I don't know much about drunkards, other than from movies, and shows on TV! 😆

Then he sneeked into her room..and the sentence ...bulged one side...i thought kahin vids ko pillow sochke us par soo na jaye...hehehehe

Aha!!! That would've been a nice situation too!! 🤣 🤣 Then Vidushi waking up and shoving him off of her, as he looks about disoriented!! 🤣

i was literally laughing when sanyu inspecting the liquid on floor...how easily she concluded its parth...hahaha...sari gandi adateein pal rakhi h..by god!!

🤣 Hahahahahhaha... I couldn't help laughing out loud, while writing the scene! 🤣 It was hilarious in my mind too, because it is very real, as people do such inspections all the time!

now coming to vids...girl you have triggered my medical mind...her symptoms and condition...im getting impatient to knw about this fatal disease.

You know, I really need help from you on this! I've already had a disease in mind, but... I don't know... I'll PM you soon about it.

i like the portion where you have displayed sanyus reactions...anxiety... on vids situation...i could feel it yaar..

Sanyu is very close to Vish and I love that about it.

it was superb...loved it so much...you have an amezing skill...and that special imagination power too...keep writing..

😆 Thanks, lovely! 😆

so its my last post on IF until my entrance exam...my test series is going to start...wont be availible to annoy you with my silly questions for few monthes...will miss you and your stories...your replies over my comments...

Aww... All the Best, Suprabha! My wishes will definitely reach you, even if you'll be reading this after your exams! 🤣 🤗

Bye
love
suprabha..

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Posted: 11 years ago
#93

Originally posted by: Gudakesha

Shit this like button.. never works for me..

😆 It's so annoying, I know!

Annie.. darling this SS is another proof why you count among my fav writers and even hold among top positions.

Oh my! Thank you so much, Tich! It's an honour, love! Really..😳

Vidharth.. so beautiful..
and this story is not the typical one hence i loved it to the core.

Aww... Thanks, love! And all thanks to the inspiration too! 😉

Coming to the writing, you were fabulous since the timew e collaborated three years ago (ofcourse that was a disaster since we never completed it) but you see i'm a fan of your writing skills.

😆 Hahahhaha... You and Fizz wrote such amazing stuff too yaar! But yeah, it's sad that we couldn't finish it like we had started out...
Aww... Thank you again!

Will watch for future updates of this.

🤗

Love,
Tich.

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Posted: 11 years ago
#94
Well, HOLY RABBITS! You write and you write like a star. Have you ever considered writing a novel? No, seriously? I seriously consider with the likes of Jaci Burton, Kristen Proby and Jamie McGuire. You're just that good. The plot is good, your writing style is good, your vocabulary is good. It's all good. I would love to read the rest of it. :D
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#96
res:)

i am second😳

unres😛


i read the whole update...😛

but what caught my eyes was the words "accident ..10 years ago..."😲

me want to know..is it bcoz of parth it all happened😕

you left me on a cliff hanger!

how dare you?😡

break the suspense fast!or else...,take it as a warning!🤪

update fast...you are a good girl,right?😃

jiya😛




Edited by dewcute - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#97
lolz.. i thought u abandoned this...

res----



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Ok, i'll be frank I had to all the previous 6 chapters as it has been a long time.
And coming to chapter 7...
Randhir ko ullu banaoing mission
and then the way you described every expression, every intricate feeling in the room was simply outstanding.
And yaeh kya.. beech mein latkaa diya.. when did accident happen? yeah i know 10 years back.. but i mean you got to give us details. Now we have to wait for next chappy.
Update sooner yaar.

Love you
Tich.
Edited by Gudakesha - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#98

Originally posted by: Gudakesha

lolz.. i thought u abandoned this...

res----


Can't afford to do that, or everyone including myself would kill me! 🤣
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Posted: 11 years ago
#99
Reswa. Thank you for continuing.
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Posted: 11 years ago
unresd😛

forgot to tell thanks for not abandoning this😳

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