#2 - AsYa/KaBhi : A Hidden Love... CHAP.10-P.128 ! COMPLETED ! (24/12)

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Aashka

@Chillichick

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#941

I had known but not so soon!

The last chapter already?

It's alright as I can understand your reasons!

Damn!

I'm gonna really miss you sis!

Like loads!

You won't be there anymore?

I truly can't and don't want to think about it!

Please?

Stay on IF!

Don't come regularly but visit it once or twice!

Just to say hi!

And once your studies are bit relaxed (I'm not saying over cuz they never are ;-D) you can resume writing and visiting IF!

Please?

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ChocoBerry

@ChocoBerry

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#942

Hey Choti Bajijaan. I missed you terribly and was happy to see you back but your note saddened me. But this time I will not stop you as I know you have studies that are taking you away from us.

I really hope you do really well in every aspect of your life. If you ever come back here, please do remember me and get in touch.

Coming to the story. You already know I love your writing so undoubtedly I loved this update too and as a whole this story was just so cute and lovable. Just loved it completely.

Best of luck for life Choti Bajijaan 👍🏼. Love you lots ❤️ and will miss you 😭 BUT will never forget you 🤗

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sabrinsz91

@sabrinsz91

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#943

It was sooo beautiful.

Zoya wanting to go bopal forever was sooo touching

Really fell in love with all your stories, will be really missing you and your stories.

Best luck and wishes for your future. If you ever get a chance to write any stories do write. A sincere advice that please don't give up on writing.

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jasmine ansari

@AMMY12

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#944

awsm part.
luvd it.
shocked that u ended this ff.
thnx for the pm
t.c

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anopama

@anopama

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#945

Omg all the beautiful stories r coming to an end

All the amazing writers r leaving

I am sad😭😭😭

Anyway Merry Christmas and a Prosperous 2015 to u

Love the update

So zoya decided to move on not mope but he strong

Asad was shocked seeing her reaction it was like last nite didn't matter

He tried to talk to her but she said no worries all good

So Asad decides he came wait to tell her bcuz he could lose her

And he can't afford to have tht happen

Omg I can imagine how zoya felt when he took the ring off her finger

But then he was on his knees with one of the most beautiful proposal

And boy was she a tease and he is no less but she accepted and reciprocate his love

So he got his green card he opens chains of restaurants due to popularity

And then they decides to go home to Bhopal and get married and be with family

Zoya nervousness was so cute meeting her in laws

Love it

I can't really pinpoint a part tht got to me it was all beautiful

But I love when Asad give it to mark and tanveer he was always her knight

And then the love confession

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...parth...

@...parth...

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#946

beautiful ending but i need an Epilogue , i respect your decision .. All the best

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captjs

@captjs

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#947

loved every bit of it. thank you... will miss you and your writings, but can understand how distracting this can get... all the best...

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PrettYSmile

@PrettYSmile

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#948

Last chapter!!..could not have been better...

What to say...don't have much to say...beautiful as always...

Thank you for giving us such a beautiful story...

N wish you all the best for your life...n health n career...
Take care... N be happy...

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jazsidhu

@jazsidhu

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#949

wonderfull n fabulous...

beautifully written...

asad n zoya went backt to bhopal to start a new chapter...

will miss u...

tc...

thx fr the pm...

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jas91

@jas91

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#950

what should i say i m heart broken🥺

ok this story could b wrapped up cuz it made sense

but how cam MIL b wrapped wid 1 part there is so much left😭

I know studies r more imp. so ur reason is ok but i m sad

upar se leaving IF sada ke liye😲💔

can't u keep it & come just 2 say hi once in a while😔

Stay in touch is all i want...ur company is more imp. not d stories🤔 i mean yes u r awesome writer but if u can't take out time its ok but stay just 2 say hi kabhi kabhi

Updt was awesome as always👏

Asad couldn't see her hurt & proposed her😃

Loved d whole proposal❤️

Asad got visa & later they settled in India

Beautiful story it was wid a amazing ending

Enjoyed reading it⭐️⭐️⭐️

Best of luck 4 ur future Bano...I'll miss u...wish u stay still😭

& Marry Christmas & Happy New Year 2015🥳