TH# 1 JJ FF:'Kingdom of Dreams' : (CH1 to CH3) - Page 23

Originally posted by: lashy

Read it all at one go and it made for such a wonderful read (and this coming from one of the poorest readers in the world!)

Am I dreaming...Hello Di...🤗 a comment from my fav writer...

"Your brother, has violated me already...

"Then there is only one way...he has to marry me with all the honor and respect and treat me as his rightful wife."

Such a gripping start 👏

😃 Thanks

And Shehenshah has his younger brother Shehezada Jalal-ud-din Muhammad to fulfill this dream of his. Age twenty-two. A true warrior. Highly trained in all kinds of warfare. Jalal was a lethal weapon on the battlefield The Unbeaten' as they called him.

Awaam feared him like hell. The folk tales about the cruelty of this warrior brother of Shehenshah were very much exaggerating but Jalal really never cared about them. 'People should be frightened of the warrior' that was what his Khan Baba always taught him.

I loved this description of Jalal... loved it!!!!! *sigh*

Yeah...me too..😳 I was tired of seeing him as Shehenshah all the time...😆 so made him a younger brother...

"Yes Shehenshah, Raja Bharmal's eldest daughter Jodha is said to be the exquisite beauty of the Rajputana. Whoever marries her will help Amer to crush down the revolt of Sujamal and Amer will get assurance against Mughal Sultanate as well. They call her'Registaan Ka Gulaab'. Many mighty Kings are willing to marry her."

Jodha' as soon as Jalal heard that name he felt his heart skip a beat.

AWWW😳

And, the sword fight between bro and sis was very cute indeed! 😊

"Of course, I was cheating but only with Bhagwantdas Bhaisa, with everyone else I fought fairly. You can ask anyone if you want to. And I have every right to cheat. Have you seen him? He is more than 6 feet in height and his hands are so big. Look at me I am like a fragile doll in front of him." Jodha was always ready with an explanation.

So cute!😳

You liked it...😛 we never got scenes like this in show except for few starting episodes...but this is how brothers and sisters are...right?

"And you are no less, my dear brother. All you need is to keep your head when all about you are losing theirs."

Wow!👏

😃 I am sure everyone is going to love Nasir as elder brother and Shehenshah...a calm, level headed guy...he is born emperor as Jalal says...😳

"Ammijaan, I am here, she is here. I am ready to get married right now if you want me to."

Jalal stated irritatingly, while Nasir settled himself on a comfortable seat. He knew this argument will go on for the whole night now.

This sounded delightful!😆

Playing a refree between mother son duo...😉 tough job indeed...

"Oh you will...when the right time comes. Just remember my words. Jodha, bravery is not when you try to fight a whole army and get yourself killed. BRAVE is the one who accepts that he can't fight a whole army alone and finds a way around. Now, why are you looking at me like that?"

I loved the interaction between Dance master and Jodha! So creatively penned.. inspired from some place????😳

Thanks Di...🤗 Well I wrote the dialogs myself, but the description of the fight comes from 'Game of Thrones' TV series...best example of how historical serial is made...

Jodha in this story will be a warrior too...fierce and unique in her own way and to be a warrior you need to be trained like one...

"Whaaat?" gasped the horrified heroine of Jodha's daydream. "You did not ask me before fixing it."

ROFL!😆

Problem with Jodha is she wants to be a heroine for her people...😆

The legend says that he is as tall as a tree! A fierce warrior. When he comes on the battlefield nothing and no one can stop him or escape...

His huge war horse Sultan' is as black as sin with only a white star on his forehead...

And he rides with a giant beside him, called Zahir who carries a huge war axe and chops up everyone...

He keeps no prisoners unless he means to torture them...

He laughs when his victims scream with pain...

My God what a terrifying ordeal to go through - hearing all this about her enemy as she is bound and gagged a prisoner! Her thought processes as she lay saddled on those horses were wonderfully penned!😲

Of course...😭 someone kidnapping them all of a sudden and that too happens to be their biggest enemy...and remembering all the tales of his cruelty

Half in fear and half in curiosity, she slowly opened her eyes and for the first time, she actually saw Him. He was huge. His hair was black and his black cloak was billowing out behind him. He had strange eyes deep and piercing, which were blazed with fury right now. His shoulders were massive and broad on which she had just made a cut, his chest incredibly wide, and his arms bulging with muscle. One look at him and Jodha knew that he was a skilled warrior.

WOW! Every girl's dream is Jodha's nightmare here..

That is the first impression of his in her mind a skilled warrior...her bad luck that he is her captor...

Catching Jodha's trembling chin between his thumb and forefinger, Jalal stared hard at her smudged face, his lips twisted into a smile. "How could anyone possibly call you a beauty?" he said with deliberate, insulting sarcasm. "Registaan ka Gulaab?"

😆

Don't laugh di...😆 Jalal was actually disappointed after seeing her like that...

"Jiji?" Shivani whispered. "You don't think he means to kill us tomorrow, do you?"

"No," Jodha lied reassuringly.

Both Jodha and Jalal didn't have the slightest idea that fate had finally brought them together...

😳😳

Originally posted by: lashy

One of them, a towering giant over seven feet tall who could only be the legendary colossus called Zahir, gave her a blood-chilling look.

The Giant.

"...And he rides with a giant beside him, called Zahir who carries a huge war axe and chops up everyone..."

Jodha thought that the legends actually did justice in describing him.

Wow! What a chilling description...

And such person dragging your sister away...

And Jalal's frustration at Shivani's weeping was so cute!
.😆 But Shivani was working as per strategy here...if you can't outwit him...cry but talk nothing...still Jalal eked out their identity from her...

"I'm going to have hard time stopping myself from murdering her." Uttered Jalal to himself getting up and making his way out of his tent to see what was going on.

ROFL!😆

😎 I actually enjoyed writing these parts of their interactions...

She was standing in front of him bathing in the sunlight with all her glory. Her olive skin glowing with the morning sun. Her doe like eyes--enormous and captivating, anyone could get lost in them. Amazing eyes. Candid and expressive with long eyelashes.

Her cheekbones were high and delicately molded, her nose small. In contrast to these delicate features, her small chin had a stubborn bluntness to it. She has an intriguing, alluring face, he decided. Definitely alluring. And that was before he allowed himself to look at her soft, generous lips...

"Can't take your eyes off me?" Jodha asked Jalal, who was looking at her awestruck. "Just last night someone told me that I don't look THAT beautiful."

Dragging his eyes from Jodha's lips, he shook his head and looked up in her eyes "I will take back my words, if that pleases you. You're beautiful. Now, get inside!"

What a feisty duo!😳😛😉

They are indeed...😳

There were several, truthful and safer, answers Jodha could have given, but anger and pain were numbing her brain. "Because," she said flatly, "I despise you, and I despise everything you represent."

Jalal stared at her, caught somewhere between fury, amazement, and admiration for her defiant courage. Short of murdering her, which would not give him the answers he sought, he was at a loss as to how to deal with her, and although strangling her held a certain appeal at the moment, it was out of the question. In any case, with Raja Bharmal's daughters his captives, it was possible that he might surrender without putting up a struggle. "Get out," he said shortly.

👏 again, lovely piece of writing!

☺️ Thanks Di...coming from you this means a lot...

Till yesterday you were not this curious to talk about your marriage. Did HE ask something about that?"

😉

😆 😆 His words did affect her...

"My tongue lied. My eyes shouted the truth. You...Were not seeing...!"

"I was. I watched, but you---"

"Watching is not seeing, dead girl" Her master cut her in between while he came close and looked in her eyes.

"The seeing...The true seeing...THAT...is the heart of swordplay..."

👏

That was again a scene from GOT...I love watching sword fights...

"Jiji, has it occurred to you what he might do to us when--if," Shivani amended quickly, "he catches us?"

"I don't think he'd kill us," Jodha reassured her after a moment.

Hee hee - she knows him, doesn't she?😉

Of course...she is a clever girl...😉

"I assume it was the doe-eyed one with lot of arrogance who sent you?"

"I can't trust anyone else with the women," Jalal said, absently rubbing the back of his neck. Abruptly, he lurched out of his chair. "I'm tired of the inside of this tent. I'll go with you and see what they want."

Whatta guy!

😳

"Sewing?" Jalal repeated, disgusted with himself for keeping them bound. Abdul was right--Jodha was merely a small female. A young, reckless, headstrong girl with more bravado than sense. He'd overestimated her simply because no other prisoner brought before him had dared to strike him.

No... you're underestimating her!😛

.He will realize that soon...😆

"We've just overcome two of the three obstacles to our escape," she said. "Our hands will be unbound and we're to have access to disguises, Shiavni."

"Disguises?" Shivani began, but before Jodha needed to answer, her eyes widened with comprehension and she gave her sister a second hug, laughing softly.

"Men's clothing," she giggled, "and he offered it to us."

Whatta girl😉

.That is how you make a way around...I am sure this running away story is going to be a fun...😃

and whatta story Rasika👏... really enthralling style of writing too! Loved it!

Thank you Di for reading and for such a lovely review...🤗

Originally posted by: Sofia3000

awesome part is was great like they plan n jodha she so smart 😊😊😊😊
Thanks Sofia...😊 Both Jodha and Shivani planning to escape keep reading to find out what happens next...😉
u really writing one fine story 😃😃
n thanks 4 d pm 😊

Welcome and thanks for reading and comment...🤗
#with_love_bubbles❤️

Originally posted by: Sweet_sonai

wow lovely update...
Thanks Sona...😃

jodha and shivani finding ways to escape...
of course they will not sit idle...😉

they don't know that it isn't easy to escape from jalal...
Yeah...😭 but still they are trying hard...😊

nd the sword fighting scene was also wonderful...
Thank you so much...🤗 It takes so much time to write descriptive scenes like that...and words of praise are so nice to read...😃

loved the part...
thanks for the pm...
Keep reading and commenting...😛

Originally posted by: ASHAMANIPAL

AWESOME...😊😊😊

Originally posted by: NikkiReed

Awesome update...

Originally posted by: renuganesh

Unres Hey rasika ur a wonderful writer I like the flow in ur storyline most of all we didnt beg for ur updates as ur a super duper frequent updater so I am going to call MALIKA -E-UPDATER
Thank you...Thank you...😃 I like my new title...😎

Wow what a update thread and needle (lol)
he he...I really enjoyed writing it...😆

What the ... mean parents? Shaadi that too to the old man mear betrayers
Poor jodha phir bi she want tosave the people of Amer
Yeah...poor Jo...😭

ROLF Her lovely sister want to see the good natured guard
😆 abdul is the nice gaurd...😳

Again jodha jalal hot meeting and accept for her deeds..?
How he accepted?
ROLF embroidery hoops
That was fun part indeed...they only asked for thread and needles and half the problems solved...😎

Whe and How will they run andescape from that jallad update soon I am so eager to know
MALIKA-E-UPDATER update soon jaldi jaldi haath chala I want a dhaamekhathar gift for christmas

Watinggg thanks 4 pm and super update
Sorry for late comment
😆 wait and watch...keep reading and commenting...

Originally posted by: prathi025

Hi
Hi Prathi...😊 Welcome here...🤗

Nice update...,

So jodha will try to escape...
Thanks for reading and comment...and of course Jo will try to escape...😉

Originally posted by: aisha...11110

finally completed reading,
😆 Finally...😆
will comment soon
Waiting...waiting...😳

Originally posted by: akdhaswara

awesome update soon
Thank you...😃

how easily jalal was fooled by jodha so cute

😆 that was easy and brainy too...

Originally posted by: Sricharan416

Awesome update, waiting for the next update and thank u very much for the pm.
Thank you Sri...🤗 Keep reading and commenting...😳

Originally posted by: RaniShanthappa

awesome smart jodha...
Yeah...Jo is pretty smart...😉
continue soon & do pm.
Sure and Thanks Rani for reading and comment...😛

Originally posted by: shruthikarthik

Hi Rasika you never fail to update dear... Again a lovely update👏
Thank you...😎

Jodha betreyed... marriage with an oldie and baldie... totally unfair 😭
yeah it was so unfair...🥱

Jodha still thinking about the safety of her people 👍🏼 so royal...
She is a darling ofcourse...😳

... Flashback ...jodha recollecting the words of her master ''watching is not seeing... seeing ... the true seeing'' ...how true,, you depicted the sword training part so good.
Thank you re...🤗 It feels so nice when my readers praise the part that I took efforts for...😃

So cute Shivani... soon mirza will falls for her 😆
he he...😉

both sisters finding ways to escape 😛 innocent shivani he he ,,,, asking threads n needles... fooling jalal 😉 doe eyed beauty jodha naughty too ...embroidery hoops 🤣

had so much fun reading this sewing story!!!!!
The sewing story...😳 😆 😃